issue159 [0710G 戴三个表冲刺小组] 第3次作业

goo1goo2UID: 2331628

159"The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds."

It's well accepted that machines are tols of human minds. But whether the human mind well always be superior to machines depends on how we define "superior",moreover,I can't agree with the assertion that it's because machines are tools that human minds will always be superior to machines.
          Considering the fact that machines are designed ,made and used by our human beings to do different kinds of work,it's reasonable to say that machines are our tools.Machines can help us to achieve the goals:computers can be used to calculate;phones can be used to communicate;cars can be used to transport. Moreover,once machines are developed,the functions can't be changed by themselves. Without human beings,machines can't decide when to start and when to stop freely. Thus,when we develop any sort of machine,we have known clearly about how it works and what it can do in mind.
          When it comes to the assertion that the human mind is superior to machines,it's necessary to discuss what is "superior" . As is known to all,machines evoled after human beings,and they can't duplicate while human beings can multiply. Plus,machines derive from human beings. In this sense,I cncede the human mind is superior. On the contrary,if we define "superior" relevent to speed,memory,accuracy,an opposite conclusion can be made. Taking the computer for instance,when we still devote ourselves in the first math problem,the computer may complete all the task. The computer can remenber uncountable pieces of information and data,while the human mind can only keep much less in memory. As for the accuracy,the computer can do series of work without any mistakes,but sometimes we even can't get a full mark in an easy test. So we may also concede that machines are superior from this point of view. Accordingly,we can't make a hasty conclusion without the concrete definition of "superior".
      In current situations,the human mind is complex enough that no machines can imitate,let alone surpass. Regarding the numerous cells and their interactions in human brain,it's far beyond our ccurrent technology to develop machines to match it. But it doesn't mean that the human mind can never be exceeded. With the rapid development of technology,maybe in the near future,we human beings can develop a robot that can learn,think and act like us,even better than us. Provided the presumption come true,can you still concede what the speaker assert?
          To sum up,even if machines are tools of human minds,whether machines or  the human mind is superior lies upon how we think of "superior",Furthermore,nobody can guaranteen our human beings can always take superiority. What we should do is improving the technoloy and perfecting ourselves. Only in this way,can we lead a better life.

nifeiUID: 2340954

159"The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds."

It's well accepted that machines are tools of human minds. But(有人说不用But开头，我不了解) whether the human mind well always be superior to machines depends on how we define "superior", moreover, I can't(cannot) agree with the assertion that it's because machines are tools that human minds will always be superior to machines.
          Considering the fact that machines are designed, made and used by our human beings to do different kinds of work, it's reasonable to say that machines are our tools. Machines can help us to achieve the goals: computers can be used to calculate; phones can be used to communicate; cars(automobiles, cars专指小汽车) can be used to transport. Moreover, once machines are developed, the functions can't (cannot下同)be changed by themselves. Without human beings, machines can't decide when to start and when to stop freely(freely? 那么我可不可以理解成有了human being 机器就可以自由作出决定呢？用correctly什么的会不会好些？). Thus, when we develop any sort of machine, we have known clearly about how it works and what it can do in mind.
          When it comes to the assertion that the human mind is superior to machines, it’s necessary to discuss(make sure?讨论还是确定？) what is "superior" . As is known to all, machines evoled(2) after human beings, and they can't duplicate while human beings can multiply. Plus, machines derive from human beings. In this sense, I concede the human mind is superior. On the contrary, if we define "superior" relevent to speed, memory and accuracy, an opposite conclusion can be made. Taking the computer for instance,when we still devote ourselves in the first math problem,the computer may complete all the task. The computer can remenber uncountable pieces of information and data,while the human mind can only keep much less in memory. As for the accuracy,the computer can do series of work without any mistakes,but sometimes we even can't get a full mark in an easy test. So we may also concede that machines are superior from this point of view. Accordingly,we can't make a hasty conclusion without the concrete definition of "superior".
      In current situations,the human mind is complex(1) enough that no machines can imitate,let alone surpass. Regarding the numerous cells and their interactions in human brain,it's far beyond our ccurrent technology to develop machines to match it. But it doesn't mean that the human mind can never be exceeded. With the rapid development of technology,maybe in the near future,we human beings can develop a robot that can learn,think and act like us,even better than us. Provided the presumption come true,can you still concede what the speaker assert?
          To sum up,even if machines are tools of human minds,whether machines or  the human mind is superior lies upon how we think of "superior",Furthermore,nobody can guaranteen that our human beings can always take superiority. What we should do is improving the technoloy and perfecting ourselves. Only in this way,can we lead a better life.
(1)韦氏辞典对complex的解释： 1 a : composed of two or more parts  : COMPOSITE  b (1) of a word   : having a bound form as one or more of its immediate constituents  *unmanly is a complex word*  (2) of a sentence   : consisting of a main clause and one or more subordinate clauses
2 : hard to separate, analyze, or solve
3 : of, concerned with, being, or containing complex numbers  *a complex root*  *complex analysis*
所以这个词不能用来修饰human minds.
(2)evolve的解释：
1 : EMIT
2 a : DERIVE, EDUCE  b : to produce by natural evolutionary processes  c : DEVELOP, WORK OUT  *evolve social, political, and literary philosophies ?L. W. Doob*
intransitive verb   : to undergo evolutionary change
我想可以用develop

麻烦lz把提纲贴上来。。。。
思路新颖，我写这个的时候也在想superior有两方面：一种是单方面的，比如跑，计算，这些机器比人superior, 思考，创造，这些人比机器强，一种是综合的，人的综合素质就是比机器强，起码是现在，lz的文章正好回答了这个问题。