issue4 [0710G +U小组] --xiefen0223--第六次作业

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题目：ISSUE4 - "No field of study can advance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study."
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Everything in the world is related to one another, and above all of these our society has been merged as a whole. So in the study of any field, it is the same case that without the knowledge and experience from outsiders, the study of such a field can not have significantly advance. To get the full meaning of the view, we can turn to the real example in our life - the field of computer science.
The history of computer science is a short period with several unbelievable changes coming up now and then. During this time, one of the greatest revolutions is related to the mol rule: every 18 months the price of the computer will be decreased to half of the price before while its ability will double, which can be achieved only because of the study of electronic engineering. Without the development of the electronic engineering, how can the rule be proved again and again, along with bringing the IT field so much shocks? Moreover, because of the research on military, the internet has been first created and later introduced to the commercial world; at the same time, based on previous study of telecomm, the internet got to spread to the whole world and make our society as a global village, which means we has stepped into another era in the history! So from this point we should appreciate the knowledge from other fields which advances the computer science significantly.
On the other side, the use of computer has brought much crucial advance to many other fields, such as the geography, biology, history, etc. In the geography field, all the data collected by the geographers, which is a large amount, can be put in and calculated by computer fast and then one map will be worked out with great accuracy. Depending on such principle, the GPRS is used in the car to give the driver direction, which can not be possible without the computer. The bio-computer is a new field which binds the computer science and biology together, to achieve higher and easier use of computer.  
In conclusion, from the examination of the field - computer science, we can see how other fields can influent one field significantly and how it can change other fields. It is same to other fields besides computer science, which need the knowledge and experience from outsiders to advance its technology and broaden its value.

楼上的见谅了～！

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Everything in the world is related to one another, and above all of these our society has been merged as a whole. So in the study of any field, it is the same case that without the knowledge and experience from outsiders, the study of such a[是不是去掉a 比较好？] field can not have significantly advance.
To get the full meaning of the view, we can turn to the real example in our life - the field of computer science.
The history of computer science is a short period with several unbelievable changes coming up now and then. During this time, one of the greatest revolutions is related to the mol rule: every 18 months the price of the computer will be decreased to half of the price before while its ability will double, which can be achieved only because of the study of electronic engineering. Without the development of the electronic engineering, how can the rule be proved again and again, along with bringing the IT field so much shocks? Moreover, because of the research on military, the internet has been first created and later introduced to the commercial world; at the same time, based on previous study of telecomm[telecom?], the internet got to spread to the whole world and make our society as a global village, which means we has stepped into another era in the history! So from this point we should appreciate the knowledge from other fields which advances the computer science significantly.[这一段举的两个例子，一个是电子工程的发展推动电脑发展，一个是军事研究创造internet,however，我觉得不是很能说问题，因为例子里两者的关系不像是insider和outsider的关系。]

On the other side, the use of computer has brought much crucial advance to many other fields, such as the geography, biology, history, etc. In the geography field, all the data collected by the geographers, which is a large amount, can be put in and calculated by computer fast and then one map will be worked out with great accuracy. Depending on such principle, the GPRS[GPS吧，呵呵] is used in the car to give the driver direction, which can not be possible without the computer. The bio-computer is a new field which binds the computer science and biology together, to achieve higher and easier use of computer. [这一段的例子就比较好了，说明outside的computer帮助了地理学科。]
In conclusion, from the examination of the field - computer science, we can see how other fields can influent one field significantly and how it can change other fields. It is same to other fields besides computer science, which need the knowledge and experience from outsiders to advance its technology and broaden its value.

这篇文章你上传时是不是格式发生变化了，觉得挺特殊的。整篇文章挺简单，都是在证明作者, 如果能分下段就好了。有一点你看下，题目有一个意思是“除非outsider的那些帮助，the study是不会有显著的进步的”, 是不是证明作者也要证明出这个意思呢？

[ 本帖最后由 ldsun 于 2007-8-1 11:35 编辑 ]