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发表于 2007-7-31 17:09:27 |显示全部楼层
TOPIC: ISSUE120 - "So much is new and complex today that looking back for an understanding of the past provides little guidance for living in the present."
WORDS: 540         TIME: 00:45:00          DATE: 2007-7-31

The speaker asserts that looking back for an understanding of the past provides little guidance for living nowadays since so much is new and complex today. I concede that there are some new problems which newly emerge and we have little past experiences to learn from. Yet, in many cases, understanding past benefits us a lot.

Admittedly, there are some new and complex problems nowadays which we had not ever encountered and therefore no experience to learn. The past can benefit us little to solve these problems since these problems are caused by new technology. For example, the modern nuclear technology on the one hand provides us with powerful energy, and on the other hand offers us nuclear weapons that can destroy our planet completely. How to control this technology is an unprecedented problem and we can learn nothing from past because we have never owned such a great power. Take cloning technology as another example, through cloning technology, we are able to clone organs to save the patients' lives who have to replace some their organs with new ones. However, some people advocated that human cloning by cloning technology and human cloning may cause many ethical and moral problems which we have never faced before. Do these new technologies benefit us more or harm us more? What actions should we take to prevent the detrimental effect by of them? There are many such new and complex problems to solve nowadays.

Although understanding past cannot provide much guidance to some new problems, we can learn lesson from our experiences in the past. Based on work our predecessors had done, we can solve some problems more easily. Consider build up a new theory in biology, we may have several sorts of experiments to do. Knowing others' successful and unsuccessful experiments related to this problem, we can see what methods are infeasible, based on which we can directly try other methods. Thus, with past experiences we can save time and resource. Moreover, our public policies are modified again and again according to past experiences of past. As the old industries lacked advanced technology and developed slowly in the past, our government has opened more colleges and encouraged universities and colleges to enroll more students to train more intellectuals so that more technologies can be developed and the industries can develop fast. In short, past experience can benefit a lot since they give us some suggestions.

Moreover, study of the famous individual in history can inspire us to attain great achievement and be brave to face difficulties in our present lives. For example, inspired by Magellan, the first person who made a global travel to justify that the earth is round, students may decide to explore the outer space in future. And some students may learn that only insisting to confront the difficulties and never giving up can one achieve the goal. Therefore, study of past can also instigate us to lead a meaningful life.

In sum, understanding the past cannot help solve some new and complex problems nowadays which are caused by modern technologies. Yet, the past can offer us experiences to solve some problems more easily. Moreover, studying key individuals in history can inspire us a great deal to achieve great aims.
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发表于 2007-8-1 19:34:35 |显示全部楼层
The speaker asserts that looking back for an understanding of the past provides little guidance for living nowadays since so much is new and complex today. I concede that there are some new problems which newly emerge and we have little past experiences to learn from. Yet, in many cases, understanding past benefits us a lot.(看来你的开头已经有模版了~)

Admittedly, there are some new and complex problems nowadays which we had not ever encountered and therefore no experience to learn. The past can benefit us little to solve these problems since these problems are caused(raised) by new technology. For example, the modern nuclear technology on the one hand provides us with powerful energy, and on the other hand offers us nuclear weapons that can destroy our planet completely. How to control this technology is an unprecedented problem and we can learn nothing from past because we have never owned such a great power. Take cloning technology as another example, through cloning technology, we are able to clone organs to save the patients' lives who have to replace some their organs with new ones. However, some people advocated that human cloning by cloning technology and human cloning may cause many ethical and moral problems which we have never faced before. Do these new technologies benefit us more or harm us more? What actions should we take to prevent the detrimental effect by of them? (问句写的好)There are many such new and complex problems to solve nowadays.

Although understanding past cannot provide much guidance to some new problems, we can learn lesson from our experiences in the past. Based on work our predecessors had done, we can solve some problems more easily. Consider build up a new theory in biology, we may have several sorts of experiments to do. Knowing others' successful and unsuccessful experiments related to this problem, we can see what methods are infeasible, based on which we can directly try other methods. Thus, with past experiences we can save time and resource. Moreover, our public policies are modified again and again according to past experiences of past. As the old industries lacked advanced technology and developed slowly in the past, our government has opened more colleges and encouraged universities and colleges to enroll more students to train more intellectuals so that more technologies can be developed and the industries can develop fast.(这个例子半天没看懂是要辅助论证一个什么观点) In short, past experience can benefit a lot since they give us some suggestions.

Moreover, study of the famous individual in history can inspire us to attain great achievement and be brave to face difficulties in our present lives. For example, inspired by Magellan, the first person who made a global travel to justify that the earth is round, students may decide to explore the outer space in future.(紧接着这个例子可以迅速再说上两个,比较有气势,而且后面的说理也有针对性) And some students may learn that only insisting to confront the difficulties and never giving up can one achieve the goal. Therefore, study of past can also instigate us to lead a meaningful life.

In sum, understanding the past cannot help solve some new and complex problems nowadays which are caused by modern technologies. Yet, the past can offer us experiences to solve some problems more easily. Moreover, studying key individuals in history can inspire us a great deal to achieve great aims.
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发表于 2007-8-2 01:29:11 |显示全部楼层
Thespeaker asserts that looking back for an understanding of the pastprovides little guidance for living nowadays since so much is new andcomplex today. I concede that there are some new problems which newlyemerge and we have little past experiences to learn from. Yet, in manycases, understanding past benefits us a lot.

Admittedly,there are some new and complex problems nowadays which we had not everencountered and therefore no experience to learn. The past can benefitus little to solve these problems since these problems are caused bynew technology. For example, the modern nuclear technology on the onehand provides us with powerful energy, and on the other hand offers usnuclear weapons that can destroy our planet completely. How to controlthis technology is an unprecedented problem and we can learn nothingfrom past because we have never owned such a great power. Take cloningtechnology as another example, through cloning technology, we are ableto clone organs to save the patients' lives who have to replace sometheir organs with new ones. However, some people advocated that humancloning by cloning technology and human cloning may cause many ethicaland moral problems which we have never faced before. Do these newtechnologies benefit us more or harm us more? What actions should wetake to prevent the detrimental effect by of them? There are many suchnew and complex problems to solve nowadays.
这一段论证的不错,最后结尾的问句不错,我看到满多北美范文中就是这样写的

Althoughunderstanding past cannot provide much guidance to some new problems,we can learn lesson from our experiences in the past. Based on work ourpredecessors had done, we can solve some problems more easily. Considerbuild up a new theory in biology, we may have several sorts ofexperiments to do. Knowing others' successful and unsuccessfulexperiments related to this problem, we can see what methods areinfeasible, based on which we can directly try other methods. Thus,with past experiences we can save time and resource. Moreover, ourpublic policies are modified again and again according to pastexperiences of past. (这句话表达有误)As the old industries lacked advanced technologyand developed slowly in the past, our government has opened morecolleges and encouraged universities and colleges to enroll morestudents to train more intellectuals so that more technologies can bedeveloped and the industries can develop fast.(这个论点可以更加扩展的) In short, pastexperience can benefit a lot since they give us some suggestions.

Moreover,study of the famous individual in history can inspire us to attaingreat achievement and be brave to face difficulties in our presentlives. For example, inspired by Magellan, the first person who made aglobal travel to justify that the earth is round, students may decideto explore the outer space in future. And some students may learn thatonly insisting to confront the difficulties and never giving up can oneachieve the goal. Therefore, study of past can also instigate us tolead a meaningful life.
这一段和上一段的论点有些重复,但是我觉得这个还是蛮难控制的,我写的那篇也有重复,知道有重复但是也很难改过来。

Insum, understanding the past cannot help solve some new and complexproblems nowadays which are caused by modern technologies. Yet, thepast can offer us experiences to solve some problems more easily.Moreover, studying key individuals in history can inspire us a greatdeal to achieve great aims.
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