生如夏花小组--第14次作业

森林116UID: 2272614

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A zoo has no useful purpose. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer

When it refers to zoo, people's opinions are usually divergent on two ways. Some people consider zoo as a paradise of all the wild animals while others hold the negative attitude, because zoo seems equals to a hell for the animals in their minds. From my perspective, I prefer the former one as my inclination for the following reasons.

Firstly, each zoo owns a common and great advantage that it preserves animals of different kinds and so many kinds, zoos keep them safe. Since we are living in this era of rapid industrialization and growth in population, people have been becoming invade into animals' homeland such as rain forest, everglade, prairie and so on, that makes many animals lose the ecologic environment they live by and also disturbs the nature balance seriously as well, even some kinds of animals are finally extinct by this way. In this sense, zoos become those poor animals shelters where they could survive safely and never worry about people's interference or other threats coming from visitation of Providence. Indeed animals live in zoos are much better than living wildly.

Furthermore, zoos also provide a precious scientific source to scientist. No one will deny that nowadays the amount and the kinds of animals are shaply decreasing, it is very dangerous and expensice to look for and collect some experimental material in wild while if you turn to zoos it will be very convenient. In other words, as the animals in wild become less and less, the zoos will play an indispensable role in medical and natural search, and they will also benefits a lot in future.

In addition, zoo could be considered as a vivid class for people especially children, which give many lively examples to make people aware of protecting natural environment. Only when people see how a fearful tiger becomes a lazy big cat waiting for the throwing food and lying in the cage all the time, when they know those eagles who once were kings of the sky will never fly in the sky freely but have to flap their wings indoors, could they realize that how ruthless it is to break the nature and threaten those animals.

All in all, zoos are significant ones in modern life, they indeed own their useful purposes in every walk of life definitely, absolutely and undoubtly.

coraoneUID: 2233021

森林不是考过了？

ernest81888UID: 2247639

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A zoo has no useful purpose. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer

When it refers to zoo, people's opinions are usually divergent on two ways. Some people consider zoo as a paradise of all the wild animals while others hold the negative attitude, because (they may think) zoo seems equals to a hell for the animals in their minds. From my perspective, I prefer the former one as my inclination for the following reasons.

很不错的开头。。。摸版啊


Firstly, each zoo owns a common and great advantage that it preserves animals of different kinds and so many kinds,(????) zoos keep them safe. Since we are living in this era of rapid industrialization and growth in population, people have been becoming invade into animals' homeland such as rain forest, everglade, prairie and so on, that makes many animals lose the ecologic environment they（+once)live by and also disturbs the nature balance seriously as well, even some kinds of animals are finally extinct by this way. In this sense, zoos become those poor animals shelters where they could survive safely and never worry about people's interference or other threats coming from visitation of Providence(????). Indeed animals live in zoos are much better than living wildly.
可以，但觉得前面说人类糟蹋环境写的多了点。

Furthermore, zoos also provide a precious scientific source to scientist. No one will deny that nowadays the amount and the kinds of animals are shaply decreasing, it is very dangerous and expensice to look for and collect some experimental material in wild while if you turn to zoos it will be very convenient. In other words, as the animals in wild become less and less, the zoos will play an indispensable role in medical and natural search, and they will also benefits a lot in future.（总结句很漂亮写的）

In addition, zoo could be considered as a vivid class for people especially children, which give many lively examples to make people aware of protecting natural environment. Only when people see how a fearful tiger becomes a lazy big cat waiting for the throwing food and lying in the cage all the time, when they know those eagles who once were kings of the sky will never fly in the sky freely but have to flap their wings indoors, could they realize that how ruthless it is to break the nature and threaten those animals.（牛！超长句子）

All in all, zoos are significant ones in modern life, they indeed own their useful purposes in every walk of life definitely, absolutely and undoubtly.

可以打上5分。很不错的一篇文章。当然离满分稍微差一点点吧