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gdy_UID: 2305410

达人给改改，谢谢了，bow～～
175.Some students like classes where teachers lecture (do all of the talking) in class. Other students prefer classes where the students do some of the talking. Which type of class do you prefer? Give specific reasons and details to support your choice.

Currently, there are mainly two forms of class, which are lectures given by teachers and some of the talking presented by students, in university education. Teachers' lectures can give us an in-depth understanding to these subjects, and models of scholar in action and special organize forms of these lectures. Due to these advantages, some people prefer lectures given by teachers in the class. On the other hand, others believe that taking in the class can give them chances to learn the ways of thinking each other and to enhance the ability of communicate. To my mind these two views should be balance so as not to go to extremes. We would need to look at pros and cons of it and then draw conclusions.

For one thing, teachers' lectures can give us an in-depth understanding to the subject because they have abundant experience of teaching and all lectures are well prepared and organized. We can acquaint the subject quickly and know what is most important in the subject. So it is a very efficient way to study in class in form of lecture. But students just listen to the teacher, which is a passive study in this form of study

On the other hand, students do some taking in class is an active study. They can learn the ways of thinking each other and they must communicate each other to prepare the taking materials and in the process of doing the taking. To prepare talking in class, they also can learn the importance of teamwork and how to cooperate. However, because of lacking experience in new subjects, they may just learn some superficial knowledge.

Therefore, though above analysis, I think two views should be balanced. Different subject need different form of class. Some difficult classes such as philosophy and biochemistry need teachers' lectures. Some simple classes could do taking by students. Different stages of study need different form of class. At the beginning of the term, teachers' lectures can help students to acquaint the content of the subject. At the end of the term, do some taking by students can help them to relate what they have learned in the book to the real world. And different group need different because the group of higher grade will be more active and experience to prepare the taking. It is hard to image that it is efficient study to a let a primary student do some taking in class.

gdy_UID: 2305410

达人帮忙，互改也可，不胜感激:) :)

luofayiUID: 2325524

题目要求Which type of class do you prefer?而LZ的作文incline to which type?
首段太长,偶觉得主要是点出论点就可以~
尾段也太长,给人的感觉就是要依情况选择type of class,没按题目要求选择一面写, body部分也是倾向于两种TYPE兼顾~
注意在首末段点出你的观点.
鄙人愚见,望LZ见谅!

picniaUID: 2189632

中国人的思维习惯，第一人称太多。。