雅思作文第六篇，谢谢大家指导：）

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6.Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective.
     Comics
     Books
     Radio
     Television
     Film
     Theatre
Give reasons for you answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience


There are increasing number of media of communicating information, along with the rapid development of economy and technology, such like books, television, radio and so on. From my point of view, television might be an indispensable part of our daily life which make the communicating information more effective and easily.

Maybe some opponents think that television has a considerable number of weakness. For instance, many experts point out that growing number of people spend too much time on watching TV and have less time share happiness with their family. In addition, those opponents are convinced that books or radio are more convinent and effective for people to get information. You can take them no matter where or when. In addition, it doesn’t take you much time to obtain informations. So in their opinion, books or radio may be a better choice.

However, considering which is the most effective, television’s advantages far outweigh the disadvantages. Firstly, in my opinion, television is more efficent media than other which broadcasts things immediately. A telling example is that in Spring Festival every people can see the CCTV Spring Festival Party by the television wherever he is. Morever, TV makes us know the whole world more straightforward. We can see the beautiful and vivid scenery in the TV, which can not be given by the radio and books.

From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that television has exerted an extremely vital impact on our modern life. And we express a strong desire that more people can use it positive aspects to make our life more abundant.

谢谢指导:loveliness: ，啦啦啦懒惰了最近~加油赶上~

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6.Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective.
     Comics
     Books
     Radio
     Television
     Film
     Theatre
Give reasons for you answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

There are increasing number of media of communicating information, along with the rapid development of economy and technology, such like books, television, radio and so on. From my point of view, television might be an indispensable part of our daily life which make the communicating information more effective and easily.[扣题扣的很好！]
Maybe some opponents think that television has a considerable number of weakness.[这句话更像一个让步句，可以放到第二句，做论证的起始点，建议不要做TS] For instance, many experts point out that growing number of people spend too much time on watching TV and have less time share happiness with their family. In addition, those opponents are convinced that books or radio are more convinent and effective for people to get information. You can take them no matter where or when. In addition, it doesn’t take you much time to obtain informations. So in their opinion, books or radio may be a better choice.[用了一段在让步，这样不是很好，让步是给自己的观点铺路的啊，让步太多会把自己观点冲散了，况且这段没有自己的观点]
However, considering which is the most effective, television’s advantages far outweigh the disadvantages. Firstly, in my opinion, television is more efficent media than other which broadcasts things immediately. A telling example is that in Spring Festival every people can see the CCTV Spring Festival Party by the television wherever he is. Morever, TV makes us know the whole world more straightforward. We can see the beautiful and vivid scenery in the TV, which can not be given by the radio and books.[这段论证不错，只可惜还应该再展开论证]
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that television has exerted an extremely vital impact on our modern life. And we express a strong desire that more people can use it positive aspects to make our life more abundant.
建议的全文结构是：
扣住促进交流信息的主旨，把其他两种媒体形式摆出来分别与电视比较它们的优势和劣势，当然一定要突出电视胜过其他两者的地方，从而很好的支持你的论点

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谢谢菠萝兄~~看到大家的好成绩好紧张~~