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第一篇习作，多拍拍
issue99 [0806G-奋斗小组]第  8 次作业_现实主义与理想主义
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=755207&extra=page%3D1

第二篇习作，补交以前的
argument2 [0806G-奋斗小组]第 7  次作业
http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=755214&extra=page%3D1

第三篇习作欢迎指正，不甚感激！
issue225 [0806G-奋斗小组]第 9 次作业_事物之间是否应该进行比较
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-756118-1-1.html

第四篇习作
issue84 [0806G-奋斗小组]第 15  次作业是否所有的重要发现都受到以前成果的影响
http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=762695&extra=page%3D1

第五篇习作
issue121 [0806G-奋斗小组]第 16次作业是否应该竭尽全力保护环境
http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=763817&extra=page%3D1

第六篇习作
argument141 [0806G-奋斗小组]第17 次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=764001&extra=page%3D1

第七篇习作
issue157[0806G-奋斗小组]第 18 次作业是否存在客观的观察
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=766039&extra=page%3D1

第八篇习作
issue55 [0806G-奋斗小组]第 19  次作业为高分而竞争是否限制了学习效果
http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=766269&extra=page%3D1

第九篇习作
argument153 [0806G-奋斗小组]第 20 次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=766394&extra=page%3D1

第十篇习作
argument65 [0806G-奋斗小组]第 23次作业
http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=771314&page=1&extra=page%3D1#pid1771147293

第十一篇习作
issue64 [0806G-奋斗小组]第 24次作业-关于成功
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=774266&extra=page%3D1

第十二篇习作
argument42 [0806G-奋斗小组]第 25次作业
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=774271&extra=page%3D1

第十三篇习作
issue165 [0806G-奋斗小组]第 26 次作业-个性与一致性
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=775989&extra=page%3D1

第十四篇习作
issue110 [0806G-奋斗小组]第 30次作业-学习历史
http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=781541&extra=page%3D1

第十六篇习作
issue103 [0806G-奋斗小组]第33次作业--学习历史的好处
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=784461&extra=page%3D1

第十七篇习作
issue153 [0806G-奋斗小组]第34次作业--关于怀疑
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=784595&extra=page%3D1

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第十八篇习作
argument180[0806G-奋斗小组]第35次作业
http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=784647&extra=page%3D1

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回复 #83 biller 的帖子

This issue may be as the author’s notion at first glance, but when think over of that we could change our standpoint. We study archaeology nowadays, also history of ancient’s political, philosophy, economical(economics), as well as culture and sciences. While why we study of that with affords? As it is just has value only to the extent that (is) relevant to our daily lives? No! History gives us not only value but also guide(guides) us to be wiser than before. It not only value(有点别扭) when had some relationships with our daily life, from history we can learn much more, at least bring our human interesting.

As we all know, whatever our ancestor have left to us are experiences they summarized. Whether it is relevant to our daily life, it is really do enlighten us when we make choice. The Nuton（Newton） three laws in physics are still widely used in science today, as he said I just a child playing on the beach, serendipitous (词性？)find several beautiful cobbles and what I do just on the shoulders of great man（巨人不是这样表达吧,giant）. All range of American presidents are learn(?) a lot form(from). the history of the presidents before, from where they could got much experiences in their saddle. What I cite not having much relevant(有这种句式吗？) to our daily life, but it do benefit to promote（可以去掉） our society.

For archaeology, however many people interest in that, they tried to decipher of something from that. Well, the cause is may curiosity while what ever they do just prove that what they did has value to them, at least parties think so. However, even some history rare correlation(correlated) with our daily life, how do you know that will not work in future? What’s more, studying history is not measurement(measured) just by the value whether co relevant to our daily life, we human should not be so short sight on this issue.

Besides, studying lots of history has not bad impact on our daily life, even it do little relationship with our daily life, but it really are (is) affluent in human’s life. Some individuals are fond to study history, they never care about whether it is value (valuable) to study. Just fun to do that, may have no value at all. But it indeed bring them some pleasure (pleasures).

In sum, the author comments that the study of history has value only to the extent that it is relevant to our daily lives is extremely (extreme)（comments如果是动词，结构就有问题，如果comments在你这里是名词，那么应该是 the author’s,且谓语应该是 are 吧，）, our history as one importance（important） part of human’s big system(systems) is not value just related with our life, whether it has value is not judged only by that stand.(别扭，一句话就说清楚了吧，需要这么复杂吗，有些重复之嫌)。
  请在以后的写作中注意词性及复杂句子的表达结构，另外文章内容在充实些，如引用一些名人的例子更有说服力。
  本人刚开始练习写作，水平有限，修改的不对地方望见谅，可以再讨论。
  一起加油，共同进步。