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发表于 2007-11-1 18:06:03 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
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  Lectures were used in the past as an old way of teaching a large number of students. As new technology is now available for education, some people suggest that there is no justification for lectures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


    Currently, since the introduction of information technology into education becomes a reality, a considerable number of individuals claim that lectures are failing to catch up quickly enough with our increasing electronic and technology-based society. Overall, I disagree the opinion expressed.
    I would like to begin by pointing out that the significant role that lectures play is widely and easily seen in academic institutions. For instance, lectures are valuable method to learn and understand a particular subject like history, law and so on. Furthermore, listening to lectures is often considered as indispensable or crucial aspect of learning. Without lectures that are offered by professors or teachers, it would be hard for us to grasp the concept of what we are studying. Based on my experience, my teachers provide me comprehensive lectures that help me to understand the concept without the need of reading extensively. In addition, listening to lectures can actually shorten the time you need to study afterwards.
    On the contrary, although computer can be effective tools for helping students acquire a limitless wealth of information online. However, young students will always need lecturers to teach them to think critically, to tell life experience, to offer them an opportunity to share views and communicate face to face, which is irreplaceable by the computers.
    By way of conclusion, lectures play an essential role in education process and will influence on our current study pattern increasingly.(234


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发表于 2007-11-1 19:07:05 |只看该作者
顶上去~~~:)
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发表于 2007-11-1 20:25:43 |只看该作者
Currently, since(这里应该用As, currenntly 去掉) the introduction of information technology into education becomes a reality, a considerable number of individuals claim that lectures are failing(failed) to catch up quickly(去掉 quickly engouh)  with our increasing electronic and technology-based society. Overall, I disagree the opinion expressed.
    I would like to begin by pointing out that the significant role that lectures play is (can be)widely and easily seen in (many)academic institutions. For instance, lectures are valuable methods( for students) to learn and understand a particular subject like(such as) history, law and so on. Furthermore, listening to lectures is often considered as indispensable or (and) crucial aspect of learning. Without lectures that are offered by professors or teachers, it would be hard for us to grasp the concept of what we are studying. Based on my experience, my teachers provide me comprehensive lectures that help me to understand the concept without the need of reading extensively. In addition, listening to lectures can actually shorten the time you need to study afterwards.
    On the contrary, although computer can be effective tools for helping students acquire a limitless wealth of information online, However, young students will(去掉) always need lecturers to teach them how to think critically, to tell life experience, to offer them an opportunity to share views and communicate face to face, which is irreplaceable by the computers.
    By way of conclusion, lectures play an essential role in education process and will influence on our current study pattern increasingly.


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没有分加了,明天补阿:)
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