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33"Creating an appealing image has become more important in contemporary society than is the reality or truth behind that image."

Whether，in contemporary society, an appalling image has become more significant, compared with the reality or truth behind, as speaker stands? Although I agree that a appealing image is necessary, even demanded, for the interest of a dominant class and some groups’ beneficial consideration, the speaker flies in the face of the reality or truth that image implied is indispensable when refer to the long-term social development.

Admittedly，making an appealing image in the field of tourism --- generally earn money by flack which primarily conclude the main resort of a traveling place. The people can be informed that why they should be there. To this purpose, the travel agencies show some picture of various places. Only the reason that the tourists choose this rather than others is determined, specially, on the image of the resort. In order to be interesting in more, creating an appealing image is required.

Moreover, the significance of the image is also evident in the dominant class. The politicians always create a nearly preferable figure to win the poll during the election. Other cases which also rest on image happen among governors to solidify their authority. Medium plays an important role of the advertisement, either about the virtue of politician or government or debase the competitor. It is lose the reality or true that the advertisement.

Besides, given the long-term profit and polity, the superficial image seems untenable. It is easy assume that when tourists arrive at the traveling places which do not as good as the traveling agency depicted, the journey is broken and the tourist would not visit in the second time. Equally in any area of business,[比如] the medicine fails to therapy, disappeared from the medicinal competition; low quality of the apparel often become tomorrow’s pulp. 政治上的例子没有找到，大家帮忙啊~！

In the final analysis, the image can bring about benefit in a short-term. Yet achieve lasting interest that is greatly depended on reality or truth.
  
纯个人观点,仅供参考:
1.结尾告诉我们:image--short-term--benefit;reality or truth--lasting interest.很清晰.
2.开头却说:Although--appealing image--for the interest--agree,[but]the speaker flies--is indispensable when refer to the long-term social development.  indispensable=absolute necessary---我这样理解恰当否?
2.1 这里refer的主语是谁?when--应该是主句的从句而不是that--的从句吧.我这样理解是否对吗？
2.2 你的important应该在[but]--这后部分,是吗?
3.三个例子:1.tourism---看不到[but]--这后部分的indispensable.
          2.dominant class--The politicians--Medium--advertisement,这四个概念一致.呵呵,顺着文章这样理解,纯个人观点.不好意思,同时也
            看不到[but]--这后部分的indispensable.
4.我自己分析完之后,突然对"...,the speaker flies in the face of the reality or truth that image implied is indispensable when refer to the long-term social development."这句话不理解了.
4.1如果flies看作v.前面是否加主语who,但是主语是speaker;看作n.后面is是否用复数,问题就出来了?
4.2 that(the speaker flies in the face of the reality or truth that image implied )is indispensable when refer to the long-term social development.此时,主语指(flies in the face of the reality or truth that image implied ) 这一动作.如果这么理解的话,那上面提到的两个例子还行.
5.这篇文章好难啊~~,我们的楼主很不错的,他要表叙的意思,我还是看明白了的.水平有限,还请见谅.

[ 本帖最后由 lastangel 于 2008-3-6 20:11 编辑 ]

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