Issue7[老兵小组]第4次作业

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==Issue7==         2.11
【题目】"Thevideo camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporarylife that it has become a more important form of documentation than writtenrecords."
平衡观点（分情况讨论）：
1． 记录空间瞬间事情video更有优势（比如YaoMing的决胜性拦板）,且不会产生误读
2． 但video时间跨度有限，不可能随时记录所有事情，并且其无法记录主观思想
3． Written record记录量化和统计数据方面有独特优势

The speaker asserts that the video camerais a more important documentary tool than written records for the reason thatthe former is more accurate and objective .Although I agree that video camerahas certain merits in documenting temporal aspects of event ,there is far moreto capture in life that what we can see and hear .Thus ,the speaker overstatesthe comparative significance of video camera ,at least to some extent.

Admittedly ,the video camera hold certainadvantages for the purpose of documenting spatial ,temporal events andexperience .Video camera ,the creative product of technology innovationbringing human history into a new visual-vision era ,does greatly contributionto human intelligent pursuit and progress by capturing , storing ,anddocumenting vivid and objectively .One need look no further than those such astalk shows ,local news ,and documentary movie oncurrent affairs .When we see Ming Yao playing in a basketball game ,everythingis so real ,imbused(fraught) with details .Evena winning shot block is provided with vivid images and sound immediately .Withoutthe video camera ,wewould not share the excitement and enjoyment caused by NBA ,the Super Bowl oreven the Olympic Games ,no matter how keen a observer or how skilled a journalist is .Indeed ,when ever moving images arecentral to an event the video camera is superior to camera .More over ,thewritten records sometimes needs to recomposethose pieces of literal records .Understandablely(understandably) ,theprocedure of recomposing by readers themselves might lead misunderstanding insome cases ,which rarely happens in the documentary in video camera.

Nonetheless ,for certain other purposeswritten record are advantageous to and more appropriate than video camera .Sincethe world is becoming an increasingly eventful place ,with each passing day itbecomes a more onerous task for the video camera .Moreover ,the span of time todocument with video camera is limited .Thus ,it is impossible to recount everyevent and desseminate in moving images during such long time .And video is oflittle value when it comes to documenting a person's subjective state of mind ,andreflections of what happened around him .For example ,we write down theemotional ,even the viseral impact on which our emotional ,spiritual even thesouls when we encounter Van Gogh's great work "Impression : sunrise"in dairy .In contrast ,the video camera will document this painting ruling outany possibilities of generalize or subjective criticism .In fact ,by givingvarious dimension of event and add meaning to and appreciation to experience ,thewritten records are more important than video camera.

Finally ,a video record is of no use indocumenting statistical or other quantitative informations .For example ,certainlegal matters are best left to written records :video is of no practical use indocumenting the terms of a complex of constructual agreement ,or the details ofestablishment of a trust .When it comes to the statistical information aboutthe financial loss to a motor vehicle violation ,the policemen and driversinvolved ,complete and accurate video documentation of such information wouldrequire video cameras set in every corner of the street .In short ,writtenrecords are inherently advantageous to video in documenting accurate figues andstatistical datas.




平衡观点（分情况讨论）如果写的稍有偏重有关系吗？


In conclusion ,video documentation would bemore efficient and appropriate in the case of recording temporal ,spatialevents .Written records ,nonetheless ,will always be needed to quantify ,addmeaning and richnesss to the world around us .On balance ,for the purpose ofacquiring more accurate information and learning valuable lessons ,we willbenifit from the combination.

wy86917UID: 2335014

Issue7[老兵小组]第4次作业

==Issue7==         2.11
【题目】"Thevideo camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporarylife that it has become a more important form of documentation than writtenrecords."
平衡观点（分情况讨论）：
1． 记录空间瞬间事情video更有优势（比如YaoMing的决胜性拦板）,且不会产生误读
2． 但video时间跨度有限，不可能随时记录所有事情，并且其无法记录主观思想
3． Written record记录量化和统计数据方面有独特优势The speaker asserts that the video camerais a more important documentary tool than written records for the reason thatthe former is more accurate and objective .Although I agree that video camerahas certain merits in documenting temporal aspects of event ,there is far more (what ??? ) to capture in life that{删} what we can see and hear .Thus ,the speaker overstates the comparative significance of video camera ,at least to some extent.Admittedly ,the video camera hold certainadvantages for the purpose of documenting spatial ,temporal events and experience .Video camera ,the creative product of technology innovation bringing human history into a new visual-vision era ,does greatly contribution to human intelligent pursuit and progress by capturing , storing ,anddocumenting vivid and objectively .One need look no further than those（好像应该接个东西啊） such astalk shows ,local news ,and documentary movie oncurrent affairs .When we see Ming Yao playing in a basketball game ,everythingis so real ,imbused(fraught) with details .Evena winning shot block is provided with vivid images and sound immediately .Withoutthe video camera ,wewould not share the excitement and enjoyment caused by NBA ,the Super Bowl oreven the Olympic Games ,no matter how keen a observer or how skilled a journalist is（知道你的意思，但总觉得好像和前句对不上的感觉，你看看这样改行不行no matter how keen a observer or how skillfully a journalist is good at recording） .Indeed ,when ever moving images arecentral to an event the video camera is superior to camera .More over ,thewritten records sometimes needs to recomposethose pieces of literal records .Understandablely(understandably) ,theprocedure of recomposing by readers themselves might lead misunderstanding insome cases ,which rarely happens in the documentary in video camera.Nonetheless ,for certain other purposeswritten record are （more???）advantageous to and more appropriate{???} than video camera .Sincethe world is becoming an increasingly eventful place ,with each passing day itbecomes a more onerous task for the video camera .Moreover ,the span of time todocument with video camera is limited .Thus ,it is impossible to recount everyevent and desseminate in moving images during such long time .And video is oflittle value when it comes to documenting a person's subjective state of mind ,andreflections of what happened around him .For example ,we write down theemotional ,even the viseral impact on which our emotional ,spiritual even thesouls when we encounter Van Gogh's great work "Impression : sunrise"in dairy .In contrast ,the video camera will document this painting ruling outany possibilities of generalize or subjective criticism .In fact ,by givingvarious dimension of event and add meaning to and appreciation to experience ,thewritten records are more important than video camera.Finally ,a video record is of no use indocumenting statistical or other quantitative informations .For example ,certainlegal matters are best left to written records :video is of no practical use indocumenting the terms of a complex of constructual agreement ,or the details ofestablishment of a trust .When it comes to the statistical information aboutthe financial loss to a motor vehicle violation ,the policemen and driversinvolved ,complete and accurate video documentation of such information wouldrequire video cameras set in every corner of the street .In short ,writtenrecords are inherently advantageous to video in documenting accurate figues andstatistical datas.

（前面都写的蛮好，但这段和BODY的第一段，就是涉及姚明的那段换一下顺序，毕竟题目是accurate and convincing，所以感觉判案更能体现VIDEO的这方面特点；另外，可以适当谢谢WRITING RECORD在这方面的缺点，比如文字相对抽象，容易被被告钻文字上的空子等等，以此来突出accurate and convincing平衡观点（分情况讨论）如果写的稍有偏重有关系吗？In conclusion ,video documentation would bemore efficient and appropriate in the case of recording temporal ,spatialevents .Written records ,nonetheless ,will always be needed to quantify ,addmeaning and richnesss to the world around us .On balance ,for the purpose ofacquiring more accurate information and learning valuable lessons ,we willbenifit from the combination.

wy86917UID: 2335014

我受不了这个破回复系统了，每次在WORD里传的好好的，结果一粘上来全乱了
下次我QQ传你。。。