Issue144--0806Gstrive小组第二次作业

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看到这题目本身就有些畏难，真是没有自己的思想呢！也实在不知道该用什么例子：（马上要离开学校几天，时间也不够了，没有好好完成作业呢！
In the development of our society, some marvelous works of art play an important role from one generation to another. Who do these works result from? It's the not only artists but also critics from which such lasting value derives.
To begin with, artists are the foundation of any art works. Thanks to some outstanding artists, who are ingenious and sensible in a special art field, miracle works can be created to spark the world and shake the mind of people.
Although the art works shouldn't have existed if there were no artists, the value splendid enough to influence the whole world may not be found without brilliant reviews from critics, just like diamond may not be attractive without being picked out from a pile of stone and burnished carefully.
In addition, it is critics establish an access for almost everyone to touch the soul of the productions of art, even for those accumulating little art knowledge.
Critics can help artists create more valuable works for the society. Sometimes, even an artist with real talent cannot realize the true spark and spots in his works. In this case, the comment from critics with intelligence and intrgrity can point out the advantages and disadvantages, which could help the author to bring preferable works for us. And a good critic can influence the artists in the next generation. A deep thinking of the characters of the art works in a certain period can be used by them to change their own styles to a new one.
All in all, the everlasting value of work of art syncretizes the efforts made by both artists and critics. So acknowledge and cooperation between these two kinds of work can give the society more marvelous fruits to impulse the progress of the field of art as well as our society.  

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In with the development of our society, some marvelous works of art play an important role from one generation to another. Who do these works result from? It's the not only artists but also critics from which such lasting value derives.
To begin with, artists are the foundation of any art works.这样说好像不太合适 Thanks to some outstanding artists, who are ingenious and sensible in a special art field, miraclemiracle是名词 works can be created to spark the world and shake the mind of people.
Although the art works shouldn't have existed if there were no artists, the value splendid enough to influence the whole world may not be found without brilliant reviews from critics, just like diamond may not be attractive without being picked out from a pile of stone and burnished carefully.
In addition, it is critics whoestablish an access for almost everyone to touch the soul of the productions of art, even for those accumulating little art knowledge.
Critics can help artists create more valuable works for the society. Sometimes, even an artist with real talent cannot realize the true spark and spots in his works. In this case, the comment from critics with intelligence and intrgrity can point out the advantages and disadvantages, which could help the author to bring preferable works for us. And a good critic can influence the artists in the next generation. A deep thinking of the characters of the art works in a certain period can be used by them to change their own styles to a new one.
All in all, the everlasting value of work of art syncretizes the efforts made by both artists and critics. So acknowledgeacknowledgement and cooperation between these two kinds of work can give the society more marvelous fruits to impulse the progress of the field of art as well as our society.