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明天开学啦-_-!!..今天必须得做学校布置的作业了..整个假期除了去XDF上课就是练习AW的我貌似除了流水帐再不会写中文文章了..于是乎............

当当当当~ 我的学校AW作业诞生啦~ 反正没人规定不能用英文写~^_^~估计收我作业的老师们没几个看得懂的说..
其实呢,这篇文章就是记载着我从放假以来到今天的种种备考经历之后的感想~算是笑侃我们这些为G为AW而耗掉整个宝贵寒假岁月的人吧..
总之呢~ 先贴在这里啦~ 各位板油看ETS的pool看烦了的可以拿我这篇自编的学校AW作业消遣下~ 当然啦~ 都是AW给整的~ 这篇也是多拍益善啦~ ^_^

In order to live a more effcient study life in the following semester, we were assigned with this homework on designing personal study plans and a layout of future career. After this exhausting but memorable winter break stuffing with preparation for my future education, I would like to hand in my assignment in this way- making it meets the requirements on analytical writing- and report my improvement during this holiday.

Admittedly, in some cases, making a study schedule and setting up a career program can help college students work effeciently and stably since the only thing they do is following the structures made by themselves. They may not feel empty as the other students who don't have a certain goal, no matter easy-reaching or far from the present. No wonder we were asked to achieve this difficult task; what to do next rather than how to do it. However, depite the appealing functions, such homework cannot always work out the results as it should be, especially when it goes to students without a integrated understanding of the society he or she lives in and the true meaning of a individual's life.

It seems that our teachers have noticed that most of us doesn't have the abilities mentioned above, so as attachment of the homework, we were at the same time asked to take internship at factories, enterprises, and researching organizations. We need more practical experiences, deeper understanding of the knowledge we learned at school, and get to know the requirements on college students from the society. It is true that we need all these to accomplish a program for future study, and future career. But even if we finish this program, it is only a personal instructor, not homework. When it comes to homework, a project assigned by teachers and must be completed by all the students, usually lose its sense when given at a unproper time and to unproper people. We may lack of experience, but it doesn't show that we will know what to do in the rest of our lives after we gain certain experience during a single winter break. We may hand in pieces of beautifully writied reports on our study scheduals and career programs, but most of us may not actually follow them since we are not sure about what we writed down. A good study and career program should be drew up by a student who deeply loves his or her major and have experienced enough failures and success which help making up one's mind. Without these necessary conditions, a forced program can only be a piece of waste paper or, even more harmful, a misleading instructor which may confuse a student in following step.  

As college students, it is certain that we have our own ways to finish this homework. I believe most of the students may choose a simple way: to write down several paragraphs about the fields one majors in, no matter against one's will or not. Do we really need that kind of plan for our future? Or is it just a simple process we walk through to cope with our well-intentioned teachers? I don't intend to criticize anyone on doing anything. What I want to share with everybody is a simple idea that we only need to think about what we did, how we felt and what we learned during this winter break and write them down as a personal reference for our future. It may be hard to draw a full plan for a career that most of us are not sure about, while it is easy to summarize our meaningful lives.

Thanks to the homework, I think about my life and my pursuit once again. I'm still unsure about the fields of my future career, which largely  may not be my current major, but I learn how to overcome the loneliness when I was working alone and how to analize an issue like this one: "college students should make personal study plan and layout on future career."

顺便也把作业原题贴在这里^_^:
写一篇学习规划和职业规划
      开展就业实践活动。深入工厂,企业,设计,研究等单位,进行生产实习,调研和专业实践,提高对专业理论的认识,为新学期的专业学习增强实践知识。结合调研情况,自身实际和专业特点,
了解大学生的要求,了解社会对本专业学生的需求,了解已毕业的学生在做人,做事,做学问方面的经验,了解社会对人才素质的要求,在与家人交流的基础上,制定个人学习计划和人生职业规划。

其实写这篇文章的本来目的就是消遣和放松,即完成了学校作业,又不失时机得小练笔了一把~ 虽然在AW上我还是个新手,但是也有些自己的小小体会,那便是尽可能放松的去看待这一切,看待每一个题目,把自己的心声,对问题的看法,用自己最顺口的话说出来即可.当然这个对大牛们不适用,我这么说也是为了平抚刚刚踏入AW这趟浑水的XDJM们,或许在一开始会有无尽的焦虑与担忧(就像我一样),但是一但看破了ETS那点小伎俩(害无数人才子折腰-_-),也是可以轻松面对这即将来临的洗礼的. 我并不奢求可以得到满分,所以大牛们可以心安理得的指出我的看法对那些想要得到满分的人来说是不可取的.但是我认为,一个有认真付出,有备而来的杀G者,即使语言不那么漂亮,只要敢于说出自己的真心话,向ETS阅卷员真诚得表达出自己的观点,就可以得到高分! 至少是有效分好吧..唉还没考过说出来的话就是没有底气...嗯~!振作! 总之呢,除了我上面所说的提出自己的观点,我刚还不是指出了嘛,要有备而来.这个备也不是要我们都背个沉重的包袱,里面堆满了名人事迹,古今中外趣闻轶事,而是对每一个题目的思考.在我看来,思考胜于一切.在有着那么多相同内涵的题库中,思考题目一点也不难做到.除此之外,我们还需要付出的,就是对写作的感觉,对文体的熟悉. 或许很多人都选择背北美范文,各人目的不同,在看了十七天法之后,我也觉得这个建议很好,适当背背可以提高自己的水平.但是关键在,这个提高在哪儿呢?我们学范文学些什么呢?有人学结构,有人学语言,有人学逻辑,有人学思想.而我,发觉自己学到的,其实就是写作的感觉.也许很多人都知道这个写作的感觉,就是那种让作家做到电脑前文思泉涌的催化剂,感觉到了,做什么都顺.我们又何尝不是一样,做在电脑前,敲击着键盘,娓娓道来自己的想法.这也就是我前面说自己除了流水帐而不会写其他中文文章的原因了.只有在流水似的记录自己的想法的时候,我才有写作的感觉.想要诉说,想要有人听,有人理解.如果我们在换了一种语言也能够找到这种感觉,那么AW又有何惧呢?
其实说了这么多我还是挺怕的..毕竟自己还没考过,没资格在这里介绍些什么..但是现在有了感觉我又实在是觉得不吐不快..关于AW,各位斑竹比我研究深刻的多,在这里我只是谈了几点小感想,对于AW分析的也是极为片面和肤浅的,正如我前面说的,我只想安慰安慰那些为AW而焦急的板油.而真正想要彻底征服AW,还是多看看版里那些加了精的分析,确实让我们这些需要入门的人受益匪浅.

不多说啦,睡觉觉去~^_^

附一个我考后的感想贴,主要关于备考心态的,算是感想系列之二吧:
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-810132-1-1.html


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