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When it comes to looking back to the past, many would suppose it is not necessary as we would rather focus our energy on dealing with what we are confronted with at present than understanding the past. In my opinion, however, the two issues are not in confliction, as a better recognition of the past will provide valuable guidance for present use.
To begin with, information of the past can be treated as valuable data for the purpose of regression ?用的不当and prediction, with the help of modern approaches. Take econometrics for example. The reason why this field is emphasized much during these twenty years is mainly because of the model and approach it lends to explain the status in real economy and thus predict the future trend, which is crucial for individuals from officials aiming at a stable society to investors seeking opportunities in markets and stocks. On the other hand, Neverthless, no matter how advanced the models and approaches people can resort to, without correct and concerning data at hand, nothing fruitful can be achieved as no materials are input. Thus econometrics should fail to guide individuals to make important decisions in short of resource of the past.例证用得好
Besides data the past provides us, rich lessons and experiences within it are also treasures waiting to be explored. One would doubt that since so many new elements are coming up day by day at present, what we could learn from our ancestors would be likely to be out of date and misleads us thereby. Indeed, times call for adaptation and change with surroundings all the time. However, there is also no denying that from the past, we can conclude what is popular as a law, which is more far-reaching than events themselves past. We should go no further to realize the powerful guidance of lessons of the past than period before and during presidency of Roosevelt. It is well-known that the chief causes of Great depression, breaking out before presidency of Roosevelt, is failure of the government, which originated in the belief that the best market needed no interfere interference from government. Fortunately, Roosevelt resorted to history and realized the defect of pure freedom in economy and took positive and efficient measures. The recovery and prosperity of American's economy again 可以不要 should be attributed mainly to Roosevelt and his wisdom to research the past for guidance.如果你能能指出罗斯福是通过什么历史事件意识到国家宏观调控经济的重要性就更好了,即使不知道,举例的时候也要告诉读者,他是通过历史知道的,不然,你后面的结论和分析就有点突兀,没有由来。
Last but not the least, by looking back to history, people can also be inspired by examples past, which could guide us in spirit. Especially in adversity, the encouragement of whom we respect is more significant, inspiriting us to hold on and get over the crisis. The world now is changing day by day, nevertheless there is something external through history to push humans forward always, typical of pursuit for freedom. For example, during the hardest time defending aggression of Japanese, Chinese people then assimilated courage and power from those heroes in history fighting for dependence of nation. They even wrote a song, known as the nation anthem later, to sing highly of these historic heroes and inspired themselves at the same time to fight with enemies till the final success.
To sum up, understanding the past can equip us with indispensable and useful information for making decisions, and also guidance to avoid mistakes, so as to perform for a better society. The spiritual powers we may assimilate from learning about the past also support and guide us traveling bravely in the right way.
仔细看了,我觉得你论证很严密,所有的例证都用得恰当,你可以再考虑每段末尾写个结论句。
我明天要考试所以改得不太仔细,希望见谅~祝你成功。
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