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题目:177. A friend of yours has received some money and plans to use all of it either to go on vacation or to buy a car Your friend has asked you for advice.  
Compare your friend's two choices and explain which one you think your friend should choose. Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.   

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    In the present-day world, there is a growing tendency that people become increasingly concerned about how to spend money. In order to use money in the right way, they usually make some proposal in advance. While discussing the interesting issue of whether to go on vacation or buy a car when one of the friends receives some money, people with different intentions hold diverse perspectives. From a personal angle, I would choose the former as my premier choice. My arguments are listed as follows.   
     For one thing, the essential reason that can be seen by the majority is happiness is the first-rate importance thing in our life, an experience of good vacation will make us feel happy and joyful for a long period of time. On one hand, traveling to other places allows people learn more new information about the outside world easily; on the other hand, the natural environment of the traveling places is always superior to that of cities which we live in. The twittering of birds, the fresh air, the gentle pace of living, all of these form a beautiful picture which brings us a good mood. On the contrary, these pictures will by no means be turned into reality if we spend the money buying a car.  
      Another positive aspect of sparing money to go on vacation rather than purchasing a car lies in the relaxation of a vacation. For instance, as an architecture student, my friend John works as busy as bees and devotes all the time to the stressful school work. He always told me that if he receives a lot of money by accident, he will no doubt spend it on some activities which could largely relieve him from the frustrating daily routine. Obviously, if he buys a car instead of going for a trip, you can imagine how terrible it is that he will have to pay more energy to the car and spare more money on the gasoline.   
     Some people may obstinately state that buying a car instead of going to travel will be more practical. We can take advantage of a car for several years, but if we take a trip, we will find nothing has been left except some memories which will gradually diminish. Nevertheless, compared with the happiness and relaxation vacation bring us, these are only trivial aspects.   
    In a nutshell, taking into account of all the factors mentioned above, I would lay stress on my view that my friend should use all of the receiving money to go on vacation instead of purchasing a car.
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