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Jas2008UID: 2509577

The first word a baby utters may be "mama" or "dada”, which means that the parents are the first ones who taught the child in his life.Indeed, the parents give their children love and care, breed them up and cultivate them as well. Though many people believe that parents’ behaviors may have negative effects on their children, I totally agree that parents are the best teachers.

First of all, parents are the strongest models and have the great impact on their child. How can a child learn to speak or stand? They imitate their parents and their behavior reflects parents. It’s obvious that a child goes through many milestones in their lives with their parents such as the first step, the first word, the first scribble and so forth. Without the instructions of parents, children can hardly speak or walk, not to mention the accumulation of  knowledge.

Secondly, the precious values like honesty, integrity, discipline, obedience, loyalty are passed on by parents to their children. The parents may keep on telling kids to be honest from the times when the child began to wonder. They tend to tell fables or stories to covey those moral characters. Children won’t forget the poor Pinocchio with his long nose caused by his dishonesty. I bet that, for a long time, the kids dare not lie to anybody.

Thirdly, parents can offer their help by supporting or encouraging their child during the hard times. Most of the times, we rely on our parents financially until we can make a living and take care of ourselves.Also,we need mothers’ chatter and fathers’ inspiration in the daily life. Whenever we feel frustrated, the first ones we think of are probably our parents. They always lend an attentive ear to us.

From what has discussed above, it is definite that parents plays an key role in their children’s life and they can’t be replaced by any body else. Virginia Satir  once wrote that “Parents teach in the toughest school in the world: The School for Making People. You are the board of education, the principal, the classroom teacher, and the janitor,” Parents shape the child’s character, life and future. They are the best teachers.

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The first word a babyutters may be "mama" or "dada”, which means that the parents arethe first ones who taught(teach) the child inhis life.Indeed, the parents give their children love and care, breed them upand cultivate them as well. Though many people believethat parents’ behaviors may have negative effects on their children,（既然后面没写到为什么 即使家长有坏毛病，但是还是好老师，这里就不要提了吧，容易引起歧义~~）Itotally agree that parents are the best teachers.


Firstof all, parents are the strongest models and have the great impact on theirchild. How can a child learn to speak or stand? They imitate their parents andtheir behavior reflects parents. It’s obvious that a child goes through manymilestones in their lives with their parents such as the first step, the firstword, the first scribble and so forth. Without the instructions of parents,children can hardly speak or walk, not to mention the accumulationof  knowledge.


Secondly,the precious values(value感觉怪怪的，你是不是想说attributes啊~~？) like honesty, integrity, discipline,obedience, loyalty are passed on by parents to their children. The parents maykeep on telling kids to be honest from the times when the child began towonder. They tend to tell fables or stories to covey（convey） those moral characters.Children won’t forget the poor Pinocchio with his long nose caused by hisdishonesty. I bet that, for a long time, the kids dare not lie to anybody.
Thirdly, parents canoffer their help by supporting or encouraging their child during the hardtimes. Most of the times, we rely on our parents financially until we can makea living and take care of ourselves.Also,we need mothers’ chatter and fathers’inspiration in the daily life. Whenever we feel frustrated, the first ones wethink of are probably our parents. They always lend an attentive ear to us.（这段写的太赞了~~！）


Fromwhat has discussed above, it is definite that parents plays an（a） keyrole in their children’s life and they can’t be replaced by any body else. VirginiaSatir  once wrote that “Parents teach in the toughest school in the world: TheSchool for Making People. You are the board of education, the principal, theclassroom teacher, and the janitor,” Parents shape the child’s character, lifeand future. They are the best teachers.引用很精彩~~！你背过好多东西啊~~！膜拜过……

整篇作文都很流畅，语法错误也不多，加油加油~~！！！


[ 本帖最后由 hyacinth 于 2008-8-5 10:53 编辑 ]

Jas2008UID: 2509577

哇~~万分感谢！！！:handshake
一定继续努力~~:loveliness: