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What makes a good neighbor? The answer might vary on different people.Some people prefer neighbors who have decent jobs and better
education; while some other will like those friendly neighbors most.In my opinion, I would say there are three qualities make a good
neighbor.

The first quality of a good neighbor, is being responsible. Community is a public place where many different people live in. It needs the
attention of everyone who belongs to this neighborhood to keep it safe, clean and healthy. A neighbor who does not have such a
responsibility will destroy the homony of the entire community. For example, if your neighbor who lives next to you brings a bunch of
friends and take home parties to mid-night day after day, you definitely will go crazy; If someone dumps garbage onto the street all the time,
not only his front door will be polluted, but also the whole neighborhood will become dirty and unhealthy.

The second characteristic of a good neighbor is helping others. We all live in a place called the society, in society, people have to
interact with each other to make the world keep running. Helping others can turn the society into a friendly and peaceful place, so do
communities. People who live close to each other, need and are needed in helps.  A good neighbor is someone who always give his/her neighbor
a hand no matter what the issues are: needs a drive to the supermarket, somebody's TV is broken, or the housewive living next door runs out
of suger.

Lastly, I believe the third quality of a good neighbor is protecting others' privacy. Although good neighbors are willing to help others,
he/she keeps the his/her mouth shut. There is a kind of neighbor who always talks other people's business, spreading rumors about others
around the neighborhood. I do not think it is a good virtue. A good neighbor, by contrast, is someone who not only helps people with daily
issues, but also cares about others with his/her true heart.

In a word, I think a neighbor who is responsible, helps others and protects neighbors' privacy is a good choice for all of us to live with.

[ 本帖最后由 mirrorbaby 于 2008-8-8 10:29 编辑 ]

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What makes a good neighbor? The answer might vary on different people.Some people prefer neighbors who have decent jobs and better education; while some other will like those friendly neighbors most.In my opinion, I would say there are three qualities that make a good

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issues, but also cares about others with his/her true heart.
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In a word, I think a neighbor who is responsible, helps others and protects neighbors' privacy is a good choice for all of us to live with.

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