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Is it more important for a teacher to help students gain self-confidence than to teach specific knowledge?
2007.3.10教育类
提纲：
1，        传授知识是教师的本职。一个好的老师能够给他的学生教授更多的知识，使得学生更好的认识世界，认识社会，认识自己，从而为将来的成功打下基础。再说反面。
2，        学生在学校的主要任务是学习知识。小学到高中学不好知识没法上大学，大学学不好知识找不到好工作，因此学习知识是直接与一个人的事业，命运相关的。
3，        自信和获得知识有时候并不冲突，拥有足够的知识也会给人以自信，举例。
4，        自信也很重要。但自信可以通过其他渠道来获得，而不一定是老师帮助给予。

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When it comes to whether to teach the students knowledge or to help them gain confidence is more important for the teacher, the discussion of this issue among individuals and in society as a whole has come into vague during the last decade. The speaker claims that to give confidence is more crucial. I disagree with this statement and there are several reasons as fallows supporting my point of view.

The main reason for my propensity to specific knowledge is that teaching knowledge is the essential work which should be put in the first position for every teacher. It is teachers who give the students the specific knowledge to understand the world, the society and the students themselves. With good understanding about the subjects mentioned above, students lead their lives in an easy way. Thus, teaching knowledge plays the most important role in teacher's work.

Another essential factor why I advocate teaching specific knowledge is that to learn knowledge well is crucial for every student. Without enough knowledge, a pupil cannot go into high school, the high school students will not be admitted to university, students in university cannot get their degree and eventually, they are not able to get ideal jobs. In a word, he/she could not lead a better life if he/she ignored the importance of knowledge.

In addition, in my perspective, these two aspects do not exclusively contradict to each other. Confidence can be gained when students have learned enough knowledge. For example, if the students learned well in math class, he may get a high mark in the math exam and answer the teacher's questions in a better way during classes. All of these could bring confidence to him. However, only with confidence, he/she will never do well in his exam.

Admittedly, the significance of confidence cannot be ignored. With confidence, students are likely to suspect what the teacher taught them and do some researches themselves. As a result, they may learn more than the teacher have expected. However, there are many ways to obtain confidence other than gained by the help from teachers.

To sum up, when referring to what a teacher should do, the significance of teaching specific knowledge carries more weight than the importance of helping the students to obtain confidence.

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The main reason for my propensity to specific knowledge is that teaching knowledge is the essential work-精辟 which should be put in the first position for every teacher. It is teachers who-这是想用强调句型吧?that give the students the specific knowledge to understand the world, the society and the students themselves. With good understanding about the subjects mentioned above, students lead their lives in an easy way. Thus, teaching knowledge plays the most important role in teacher's work.

Another essential factor why I advocate teaching specific knowledge is that to learn knowledge well is crucial for every student. Without enough knowledge, a pupil cannot go into high school, the high school students will not be admitted to university, students in university cannot get their degree and eventually, they are not able to get ideal jobs. In a word, he/she could not lead a better life if he/she ignored the importance of knowledge. |留学|签证|TOEFL|GREFkob8fr
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In addition, in my perspective, these two aspects do not exclusively contradict to each other. Confidence can be gained when students have learned (possess) enough knowledge. For example, if the students learned well in math class, he may get a high mark in the math exam and answer the teacher's questions in a better way during classes. All of these could bring confidence to him. However, only with confidence, he/she will never do well in his exam.要他/她就一直他/她
Admittedly, the significance of confidence cannot be ignored. With confidence, students are likely to suspect what the teacher taught them删掉 and do some researches themselves. As a result, they may learn more than the teacher have expected. However, there are many ways to obtain confidence other than gained by the help from teachers.

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To sum up, when referring to what a teacher should do, the significance of teaching specific knowledge carries more weight--(outweigh) than the importance of helping the students to obtain confidence.

论证思路清晰,总体结构完整,但建议将一.二点合并一点,感觉前两点列举了不少例子,但缺乏总结话语,可以合并一,二点,并适当将三.四点展开,深入一点,这样可以显得论证更加具有说服力.

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When it comes to whether to teach the students knowledge or to help them gain confidence is more important for the teacher, the discussion of this issue among individuals and in society as a whole has come into vague during the last decade. The speaker claims that to give confidence is more crucial. I disagree with this statement and there are several reasons as fallows supporting my point of view. E!Bqq-V+vV9fw#C

The main reason for my propensity to specific knowledge is that teaching knowledge is the essential work which should be put in the first position for every teacher. It is teachers who give the students the specific knowledge to understand the world, the society and the students themselves. With good understanding about the subjects mentioned above, students lead their lives in an easy way. Thus, teaching knowledge plays the most important role in teacher's work.

Another essential factor why I advocate teaching specific knowledge is that to learn knowledge well is crucial for every student. Without enough knowledge, a pupil cannot go into high school, the high school students will not be admitted to university, students in university cannot get their degree and eventually, they are not able to get ideal jobs. In a word, he/she could not lead a better life if he/she ignored the importance of knowledge.

In addition, in my perspective, these two aspects do not exclusively contradict to each other. Confidence can be gained when students have learned enough knowledge. For example, if the students learned well in math class, he may get a high mark in the math exam and answer the teacher's questions in a better way during classes. All of these could bring confidence to him. However, only with confidence, he/she will never do well in his exam.

Admittedly, the significance of confidence cannot be ignored. With confidence, students are likely to suspect what the teacher taught them and do some researches themselves. As a result, they may learn more than the teacher have expected. However, there are many ways to obtain confidence other than gained by the help from teachers. |



楼主写的长句很精彩，逻辑很强；但觉得结尾最后一句是否还可在加一点，重申下作者观点。