COMEON作文小组------yuanhu124 9月1日作业

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怎么才能举出鲜活的例子来啊~~看来我要准备几个常用例子才行！

Considering the modern society develops more and more rapidly, I definitely agree with the statement that it is far more necessary for everyone to cultivate the ability of cooperation. There are numerous reasons why I hold no doubt about it; I would list only a few primary ones bellow.

Many hands make light work. It is especially true in the complex world today. One can hardly achieve success barely by himself. It is cooperation that leads to the final success. For instance, when you are beginning to deal with something, no matter you are in schools or in companies, summing up to establish a team is essential. Only in a team can you divide the task into organic parts, and help each other with the assignments. Therefore, the ability to corporate with others is not only one of the most important qualities one should obtain in schools, and also the basic requirement for the work in the society.

Furthermore, we can consider this issue form the perspective of history that transformed from the agricultural society to the industrial phase. Family is the basic work unit in the agricultural society, while the foundation of modern industrial society is corporation. We can compare the work of a farmer and that of a worker. The farmer tills land mainly by himself or his family members in the past, and he does not need too much cooperation with others. But when it comes to the worker, it is completely different. The whole task is divided into many steps, and every worker just takes charge of one of them on the productive line. This situation can not be seen just in the factories, for it has spread to every corner in our society.

To sum up, as the rapid evolution of modern world, the ability of cooperation has become more and more important.

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Considering the modern society develops more and more rapidly, I definitely agree with the statement that it is far more（不用比较，可不要） necessary for everyone to cultivate the ability of cooperation. There are numerous reasons why I hold no doubt about it; I would list only a few primary ones bellow..

Many hands make light work. It is especially true in the complex world today. One can hardly achieve success barely by himself. It is cooperation that leads to the final success. For instance, when you are beginning to deal with something, no matter you are in schools or in companies, summing up to establish a team is essential. Only in a team can you divide the task into organic parts, and help each other with the assignments. Therefore, the ability to corporate with others is not only one of the most important qualities one should obtain in schools, and also the basic requirement for the work in the society. 这段再举个例子来支撑论点会好一点

Furthermore, we can consider this issue form（from） the perspective of history that transformed from the agricultural society to the industrial phase. Family is the basic work unit in the agricultural society, while the foundation of modern industrial society is corporation. We can compare the work of a farmer and that of a worker. The farmer tills land mainly by himself or his family members in the past, and he does not need too much cooperation with others. （论证不具体，应该说出是怎么个不同的，在哪些方面等等）But when it comes to the worker, it is completely different. The whole task is divided into many steps, and every worker just takes charge of one of them on the productive line. This situation can not be seen just in the factories, for it has spread to every corner in our society.

To sum up, as the rapid evolution of modern world, the ability of cooperation has become more and more important.

cooperationi和 corporation这两个词是不一样的，勿混淆
文章总体思路是对的，但是论证有待提高，要说出为什么不同，这不同又有什么后果，导致了什么变化，感觉思路没打开
加油!