COMEON作文小组------tclrj 9月8日作业

tclrjtclrjUID: 2517750

三天没写啦，好生疏……写的很不怎么样

I can't agree more on the assertion that the study of animal do help greatly on learning human nature. The reasons for it can be divided into two aspects, the biological one and the psychological one.

The study of biological facts of animal could contribute to some phenomena of human behavior. There are a lot of diseases which would cause disability of various organs of animal, can have similar effects on human body. Once plague or other serious illness occurs among human, scientists always use other animals as testers of therapeutically solutions before they utilize upon human body. Without the study on animal reactions of these researches, our medical system as well as pharmacies technique couldn't have cured so much people.

While learning about the how the animal body function helps to the comprehension of human body, the sense of community, or if that can be called the animal's psychological system, can also do service to the exploration of human mind. The specialization of bees indicates the social hierarchy of human isn't a patent, but something developed through the revolution of many species existed in our world. The education of descendant of many kinds of animal also shares some common habits with human. The activities of intuition learning which are first introduced in duckling soon apply to children's learning steps. What's more, studying some of the community activities of animals can provoke lost human nature as a certain member of animal. The suicide of some animal in order to maintain the balance of self-development and the environment, the nature lost and should be found by human.

Human as we are, is just a small part of animal, a tiny part of the biosphere, there are certain laws that should be obeyed by all animals, including ourselves. Studying on our fellow friends will definitely solve the problems which have long bother us, thus attain more knowledge of our basic nature.

yangkeli22UID: 2360405

I can't agree more on the assertion that the study of animal do help greatly on learning human nature. The reasons for it can be divided into two aspects, the biological one and the psychological one.
The study of biological facts of animal could contribute to some phenomena of human behavior.(LZ下面提到的主要是治病方面，和行为关系不大吧？) There are a lot of diseases which would cause disability of various organs of animal, can have similar effects on human body. Once plague or other serious illness occurs among human, scientists always use other animals as testers of therapeutically solutions before they utilize upon human body. Without the study on animal reactions of these researches, our medical system as well as pharmacies technique couldn't have cured so much people.
While learning about the(可不要) how the animal body function helps to the comprehension of human body, the sense of community, or if that can be called the animal's psychological system, can also do service to (serve for 这样用会不会好些？)the exploration of human mind. The specialization of bees indicates the social hierarchy of human isn't a patent, but something developed through the revolution of many species existed in our world. The education of descendant of many kinds of animal also shares some common habits with human. The activities of intuition learning which are first introduced in duckling soon apply to children's learning steps. What's more, studying some of the community activities of animals can provoke lost human nature as a certain member of animal. The suicide of some animal in order to maintain the balance of self-development and the environment, the nature lost and should be found by human.(感觉最后一句不太妥当，LZ怎么解释人类自杀的现象呢？)
Human as we are, is just a small part of animal, a tiny part of the biosphere, there are certain laws that should be obeyed by all animals, including ourselves. Studying on our fellow friends will definitely solve the problems which have long bother us, thus attain more knowledge of our basic nature.

总体结构挺好，开门见山，接下来又说了自己的两个观点，分别阐述。其它的观点如有不妥请LZ指出。

devilkinelevenUID: 2442869

又见你了，高兴ing