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108) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer人们有时要做自己不喜欢的事。同意与否？（185里题目 生活习惯类）

Nowadays, since people are having more and more alternatives when they choose a way to reach a goal. When asked whether people should do something they don't really enjoy,traditionally it has that people should do the things  they really enjoy so that both quality and efficiency are more likely to be guaranteed. Nevertheless, after carefully weighing thinking, i believe people should also do something they might not quite enjoy doing.

Here my first point of view comes in the question. Will the circumstances people encounter with always be optimal? It is hardly persuasive that a certain task can be done with a good outcome simply by doing thing they would like to do and ignoring the process during which something they are not willing to do are required. At times people have to face some difficult and complicated situations. Most people would not prefer to receive a big challenge, take a high risk, work under great pressure. However, the ones who can bear it with a good attitude are always the ones who manage to keep mind cool, think critically,look for solutions and eventually achieve expected goals.

Moreover, doing those not so enjoyable things can also bring benefits. When scientists are doing repeated experiences to look for a single possibility, their never giving up is vital to the success even if they doesn't seem to enjoy the process at all. When conservative people are trying to accept some new thoughts and ideas, though they are not really willing to and not to mention enjoyment, they may realize a different world is just ahead and cannot wait to experience. Finally things turn to more enjoyable, however one can never know if he or she never try to experience.

As we can see, people should do things even if they do not enjoy doing so. This kind of process enables a person to maintain a good attitude towards different situations in order to be a good problem solver. It is even more useful and practical in the real life. Most importantly, as it brings benefit, it  may eventually becomes another thing that brings enjoyment as well.

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Nowadays, since people are having more and more alternatives when they choose a way to reach a goal. （Fragments. 这句话只有since从句是不完整的，而且楼主的主句在哪我也没有找到）When asked whether people should do something they don't really enjoy,traditionally it has that people should do the things  they really enjoy so that both quality and efficiency are more likely to be guaranteed. （这句话楼主想表达什么意思没看明白，似乎traditionally前面的那个when从句和后面的关系不大）Nevertheless, after carefully weighing thinking, i（I） believe people should also do something they might not quite enjoy doing. PDW~        qHt:S

Here my first point of view comes in the question. Will the circumstances people encounter with always be optimal? It is hardly persuasive that a certain task can be done with a good outcome simply by doing thing（things） they would like to do and ignoring the process during which something they are not willing to do are required. At times people have to face some difficult and complicated situations. Most people would not prefer to receive a big challenge, take a high risk, work under great pressure. However, the ones who can bear it with a good attitude are always the ones who manage to keep mind cool, think critically,look for solutions and eventually achieve expected goals.BOvz;bl4[

Moreover, doing those not so enjoyable things can also bring benefits. When scientists are doing repeated experiences to look for a single possibility, their never giving up is vital to the success even if they doesn't（don't） seem to enjoy the process at all. When conservative people are trying to accept some new thoughts and ideas, though they are not really willing to and not to mention enjoyment, they may realize a different world is just ahead and cannot wait to experience. Finally things turn to more enjoyable, however one can never know if he or she never try（tries） to experience.

As we can see, people should do things even if they do not enjoy doing so. This kind of process enables a person to maintain a good attitude towards different situations in order to be a good problem solver. It is even more useful and practical in the real life. Most importantly, as it brings benefit, it  may eventually becomes another thing that brings enjoyment as well.

楼主对英语的熟练运用已经比在下强很多了，建议楼主在运用复杂句的时候考虑清楚结构，不要写出片段句来。另外就是注意一下单复数问题，还有字数可能有点少，如果楼主想拿个比较高一点的分数，最好还是写到400以上吧。