COMEON作文小组——梦想在望2008 10月12日作业

梦想在望2008UID: 2546295

10月12日Nowadays, the ability to cooperate is more important than past? Agree or disagree?

Nowadays, some may hold the opinion that the ability to cooperate is not more important than past. But others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree that the capacity of cooperation is more significant than before. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.  
                                                                                                                                 I agree with the statement that the ability to cooperate is more important than past without reservation since the bond between countries and regions has been becoming increasingly closed than before. Nowadays, our earth is just like a small village. The relationship between numerous countries and regions is connected tightly for each other. The economic and political fluctuations of only one country usually have a negative influence on others. In order to tackle with possible problems and minimize the influence from others, countries should cooperate together. Take financial crisis in America this year, for example, “the wall street financial storm” has been overwhelmingly widespread. Many countries have been affected significantly by this crisis. Furthermore, some companies and banks are confronted with the danger of bankruptcy. Therefore, it is high time that different countries’ governments stood together to take effective measures for resolving this crisis.

Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that in today’s business world, people should much more often have the ability to cooperate for their own profits than before. It is universally acknowledged the fact that to cooperate is to create the situation of win-win. To make sure achieve this target, people usually tend to join together for deal with problems. For instance, as we all know, the amount of energy has been descended increasingly day after day. Consequently, that induces the decline of the sales of car. Hence, some companies such as GM Motors, the largest automobiles corporation in America and Chrysler Motors Company are taking negotiations to cooperate for solve this problem.

In a word, taking account of these two factors above, we can reach the conclusion that we had better have the ability to cooperate in our today’s society.

电脑出现点问题，所以迟交了作业！在这里 检讨下自己！
写得很差 请楼下战友 赐教 狠批！

梦想在望2008UID: 2546295

为什么没有战友给我批阅！
请 那位好心的战友批阅

liuhui3713UID: 2439675

我记得我也写了这样的一篇文章，有空交流下，QQ382240080

wujunze0609UID: 2532617

很清楚 不错

gjunUID: 2537391

Nowadays, some may hold the opinion that the ability to cooperate is not more important than past. (我觉得有点怪异啊，就less吧)But others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree that the capacity of cooperation is more significant than before. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.
                                                                                                                                 I agree with the statement that the ability to cooperate is more important than past without reservation since the bond between countries and regions has been becoming increasingly closed(close?) than before. Nowadays, our earth is just like a small village. The relationship between numerous countries and regions is connected tightly for(with?) each other. The economic and political fluctuations of only one country usually have a negative influence on others. In order to tackle with possible problems and minimize the influence from others, countries should cooperate together. Take financial crisis in America this year, for example,(for example不可在这作插入语吧,前面有take了.把for前面的逗号去掉) “the wall street financial storm” has been overwhelmingly widespread. Many countries have been affected significantly by this crisis.(这句好短,可以考虑用result in句型并入上句) Furthermore,(I think"what's worse" is better) some companies and banks are confronted with the danger of bankruptcy. Therefore, it is high time that different countries’ governments stood together to take effective measures for resolving this crisis.
Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that in today’s business world, people should much more often have the ability to cooperate for their own profits than before.(个人认为这个TS不够好1:偏长2:你想表达的思想不突出.建议:moreover, I am convinced that cooperating is an effective work style to benefit all the group members nowadays.) It is universally acknowledged the fact that to cooperate is to create the situation of win-win. To make sure achieve this target, people usually tend to join together for(to) deal with problems. For instance, as we all know, the amount of energy has been descended increasingly day after day. Consequently, that induces the decline of the sales of car. Hence, some companies such as GM Motors, the largest automobiles corporation in America(,) and Chrysler Motors Company are taking (换个时态可能好些)negotiations to cooperate for solve this problem.
In a word, taking account of these two factors above, we can reach the conclusion that we had better have the ability to cooperate in our today’s society.
in today's用了两次,可以换modern,current等等
本人水平低微，难免有谬误，多包涵呵。