COMEON作文小组10.15作业－hans0612

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COMEON作文小组10.15作业－hans0612
32)A company is going to give some money either to support the arts or to protect the environment. Which do you think the company should choose? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
一个公司准备出资支持艺术或者保护环境？你认为公司该如何选择？(185,花钱问题)

Deciding between supporting the arts and protecting the environment is a difficult choice to make, however, I think I would choose protecting the environment in my situation. The environment problem is more crucial than arts so it deserve more attention, as the following reasons.

First of all, protecting the environment is an urgent issue and any one who is blind to this point must pay a heavy price. With the process of industrialization, the environment of our planet has been badly damaged. The forest has disappeared; the mountains have became bald; the drinkable water have been decreasing each day. The people in the cities seldom see the blue sky all around the year. Environmental experts point out that increasing pollution not only causes serious problems such as global warming but also could threaten to end human life on our planet. There is no denying the fact that pollution is a so extremely serious problem that all the public should take great attention to deal with it. As an social group, the corporation is responsible for the social urgent problems. So the company should choose the environment issues rather than arts to give support to.

Furthermore, it is also do good for business if the company is concentrating on environments. As we known, nowadays people have come to know the importance of environment, which is so called “software facility of living”. Citizens are more like to purchase the healthier products with pleasure. For example, although the price of solar water heater is somewhat higher than the electrical one, people are willing to buy the former one. And our governments are making regulation to encourage environment protecting, therefore, the "green products" have stronger competence in the market. In addition, because the fame of one company is the important non-material assets, investment on environment has huge profits for corporation. In a word, any company operates as profits enterprise and supporting environment is an virtually profitable business.

Admittly, investing in supporting arts helps to maintain our culture and gives people a way to entertainment and relax. Nevertheless, we need a healthier environment in order to survive and company need wise investment in order to thrive.

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Deciding between supporting the arts and protecting the environment is a difficult choice to make, However, I think (suppose更为谦虚些) I would choose protecting the environment in my situation. The environment problem is more crucial than arts so it deserve more attention. I’d like to explain the details as following.


First of all, protecting the environment is an urgent issue and any one who is blind to this point must pay a heavy price. With the process of industrialization, the environment of our planet has been badly damaged. The forest has disappeared; the mountains have became (become) bald; the drinkable water have (has) been decreasing each day. The people in the cities seldom see the blue sky all around the year. Environmental experts point out that increasing pollution not only causes serious problems such as global warming but also could threaten to end human life on our planet. There is no denying the fact (It is undeniable about the fact) that pollution is a so extremely serious problem that all the public should take great attention to deal with it. As a social group, the corporation is responsible for the social urgent problems. So the company should choose the environment issues rather than arts to give support to.

Furthermore, it is also do good for business if the company is concentrating on environments. As we all know, nowadays people have come to know (be aware of 更好些) the importance of environment, which is so called “software facility of living”. Citizens are more likely to purchase the healthier products with pleasure. For example, although the price of solar water heater is somewhat higher than the electrical one, people are willing to buy the former one. And our governments are making regulation to encourage environmental protection. Therefore, the "green products" have stronger competence in the market. In addition, because the fame of one company is the important non-material assets, investment on environment has huge profits for corporation. In a word, any company operates as profits enterprise and supporting environment is an virtually profitable business.(c

Admittedly, investment in supporting arts helps to maintain our culture and gives people a way to entertainment and relax. Nevertheless, we need a healthier environment in order to survive and company need wise investment in order to thrive (这句写的挺好，我很欣赏这句).
我也水平尚浅，只能改到这个地步了。战友见谅啊~~

[ 本帖最后由 shuchendsc 于 2008-10-15 23:24 编辑 ]