COMEON作文小组----purplechun 10月30日作业

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10.30
Agreeor disagree: advertisements is a waste of a company's money and time becauseconsumers have known what they want to buy

When you turn on the TV or drive along the street, there are always numerous advertisements fly into your eyes. And most of the time, you feel just tired about the endless advertisements and think that who cares about them; we just buy what we want to buy without any advertisement. That the company who uses advertisements just a waste of money.

I am also bothered by the boring advertisements. But I kind of disagree with the essay. The company is not wasting money. In fact, the immaterial effect can bring it a lot of benefits.

First of all, let’s take a simple experiment. Recall the most familiar advertisement around you.Then, imagine the next time you come to a shop to buy this kind of stuff, which brand will you buy? I am sure that you will buy the branch that the advertisement said. Unless you are a certain brand’s fan, you will confuse with the numerous  brands when facing the shelf. And the easiest way is to pick up a more familiar branch. In the theory of psychology, this is called “Familiar Choosing”. We ordinary people intend to choose the stuff we more familiar, even we don’t use it before.

Secondly, the advertisements we see or hear send signals to us that they are good enough to buy, even when we don’t need it at this time. But when we need them, we trends to buy them because we trust them. The signal concept is used in economic area.Because our customers are lack of information about the stuff we want to buy,the advertisement helps us to abridge the time for collecting information.Furthermore, if there is a familiar actor in the advertisement. It seems to become more convincing.

At last, I think certain creative advertisement can motivate the desire of the product or even create a fashion. For example, you are not preparing to buy a MP3 player. But after you see the creative and beautiful advertisement of Apple’s fashion iPod player, we all hope to own one and it becomes a fashion that the youth will be proud of owning an iPod.

In conclusion, I disagree the essay that the advertisement is a waste of money. In fact, the advertisement can not only bring benefits to the company, but also conduct the customer what to buy.

[ 本帖最后由 purplechun 于 2008-10-31 10:42 编辑 ]

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COMEON作文小组----purplechun 10月30日作业

Agree or disagree: advertisements is a waste of a company's money and time because consumers have known what they want to buy.

When you turn on the TV or drive along the street, there are always numerous advertisements fly (flying) into your eyes. And most of the time, you feel just tired about the endless advertisements and think that who cares about them; we just buy what we want to buy without any (influence by) advertisement. That the company who uses advertisements just a waste of money. (少了谓语)

I am also bothered by the boring advertisements. But I kind of disagree with the essay. The company is not wasting money. In fact, the immaterial effect can bring it a lot of benefits.


First of all, let’s take a simple experiment. Recall the most familiar advertisement around you. Then, imagine the next time you come to a shop to buy this kind of stuff, which brand will you buy? I am sure that you will buy the branch (brand) that the advertisement said(said换成recommended). Unless you are a certain brand’s fan, you will confuse with the numerous brands when facing the shelf. And the easiest way is to pick up a more familiar branch. In the theory of psychology, this is called “Familiar Choosing”. We ordinary people intend (intend 换成tend ) to choose the stuff we (are) more familiar (with), even we don’t (don’t 换成 never)use it before.

Secondly, the advertisements we see or hear send signals to us that they (they指代有点问题，按句子结构来说指代的是advertisements, 这个应该不是你要表达的意思) are good enough to buy, even when we don’t need it at this time. But when we need them, we trends (tend) to buy them because we trust them. The signal concept is used in economic area. Because our customers are (这种地方可以加点修饰词，比如indeed) lack of information about the stuff we want to buy, the advertisement helps us to abridge the time for collecting information. Furthermore, if there is a familiar actor in the advertisement. It seems to become more convincing.

At last, I think certain creative advertisement (certain 后面的名词好像应该是复数形式) can motivate the desire of the product or even create a fashion. For example, you are not preparing to buy a MP3 player. But after you see the creative and beautiful advertisement of Apple’s fashion iPod player, we all hope to own one and it becomes a fashion that the youth will be proud of owning an iPod.

In conclusion, I disagree (with) the essay that the advertisement is a waste of money. In fact, the advertisement can not only bring benefits to the company, but also conduct the customer what to buy.

jiwasunUID: 2425569

谢谢楼主的作文

purplechunUID: 2508437

呵呵，谢谢你的批改啊！：）~~~

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