COMEON作文小组——梦想在望2008 10月31日作业

梦想在望2008UID: 2546295

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10月31日
Does study of animals help us to learn human nature?(2007.10.27)

In the modern biology, biologists and scientists tend to make experiments on animals in order to find the human nature. A myriad of people think that it is of  no benefit for humankind to study animals. But others an opposite attitude. From the perspective of the evolution of human being, I hold the opinion that it is definitely valuable for people to make an research on animals taking into account for the further development and exploration of human being. My arguments are listen as follows.

I agree with the statements above without reservation since there is the similar biological structure between mankind and animals. According to the theory of evolutionary, human being are stemmed from the further prehistoric animals in billions of years. It is universally acknowledged the truth that there are numerous similarities between mankind and chimpanzee. A variety of survey results are originated from the researches on the chimpanzee or primitive animals. For example, throughout the observation and research on the chimpanzee, scientists have been found a great deal of human nature possessed by these primitive animals such as chimpanzee and monkey. For example, scientists had been suspended a bundle of banana on the ceiling of house, put a long stick on the ground, and observed how chimpanzee reach the fruit. The chimpanzee tried its best to reach the banana but failed. At this time, the chimpanzee saw the long twig on the land, picked up the stick to reach the cluster of banana and successfully get them. Based on this experiment, scientists are able to find its ability, similar to the human being, that is the chimpanzee know how to use tools. By this experiment, it is conducive for people to make the further research on the capacity of mankind,

Another reason for my point is that the study of animals contributes to the comprehensive understanding of human nature. A fair proportion of animals have the same organization in their structure. It is great helpful for the research on human nature to do the tests on the animals.  As we all know, mammals have all the brain cells. Scientists made an experiment on the little mouse so as to perceive the brain cells. They allowed the little mouse to keep active around the clock. And after a period of time, scientists found the fact that the brain cells of the little mouse had been died out with a rapid speed. Eventually, biologists and scientists arrived at the conclusion that people are inclined to die early because over exhaustion would kill brain cells. In short, human being benefit significantly from the study of animal.

In a word, from what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that the exploration of human nature is absolutely responsible for the study of animals.              

ly8768UID: 2452066

In the modern biology, biologists and scientists tend to make experiments on animals in order to find the human nature. A myriad of people think that it is of no benefit for humankind to study animals. But others (hold) an opposite attitude. From the perspective of the evolution of human being, I hold the opinion that it is definitely valuable for people to make an(a) research on animals taking into account for the further development and exploration of human being. My arguments are listen(listed) as follows.

I agree with the statements above without reservation since there is the similar biological structure between mankind and animals. According to the theory of evolutionary, human being are stemmed from the further prehistoric animals in billions of years. It is universally acknowledged the truth that there are numerous similarities between mankind and chimpanzee. A variety of survey results are originated from the researches on the chimpanzee or primitive animals. For example, throughout the observation and research on the chimpanzee, scientists have been(不要了) found a great deal of human nature possessed by these primitive animals such as chimpanzee and monkey. For example, scientists had been suspended a bundle of banana(s) on the ceiling of house, put a long stick on the ground, and observed how chimpanzee reach the fruit. The chimpanzee tried its best to reach the banana but failed. At this time, the chimpanzee saw the long twig on the land, picked up the stick to reach the cluster of banana and successfully get them. Based on this experiment, scientists are able to find its ability, similar to the human being, that is the chimpanzee know how to use tools (for chimpanzee to know how to use tools). By this experiment, it is conducive for people to make the further research on the capacity of mankind.
这一段两个example有些重复了，要一个就好了


Another reason for my point is that the study of animals contributes to the comprehensive understanding of human nature. A fair proportion of animals have the same organization in their structure. It is great helpful for the research on human nature to do the tests on the animals.  As we all know, mammals have all the brain cells. Scientists made an experiment on the little mouse so as to perceive the brain cells. They allowed the little mouse to keep active around the clock. And after a period of time, scientists found the fact that the brain cells of the little mouse had been(不要) died out with a rapid speed. Eventually, biologists and scientists arrived at the conclusion that people are inclined to die early because over exhaustion that would kill brain cells. In short, human being benefit significantly from the study of animal.

In a word, from what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that the exploration of human nature is absolutely responsible for the study of animals.

总的来说其实结构挺不错哦的，语言也好。只是我也很郁闷，这个human nature到底是什么意思啊

jiwasunUID: 2425569

COMEON作文小组——梦想在望2008 10月31日作业

In the modern biology, biologists and scientists tend to make experiments on animals in order to find the human nature. A myriad of people think that it is of no benefit for humankind to study animals. But others (hold) an opposite attitude.(少了谓语) From the perspective of the evolution of human being, I hold the opinion that it is definitely valuable for people to make an research on animals taking into account for the further development and exploration of human being. My arguments are listen (listed) as follows.

I agree with the statements above without reservation since there is the similar biological structure between mankind and animals. According to the theory of evolutionary (evolution), human being (beings) are stemmed from the further prehistoric animals in billions of years. It is universally acknowledged the truth that there are numerous similarities between mankind and chimpanzee. A variety of survey results are originated (obtained) from the researches on the chimpanzee or primitive animals. For example, throughout the observation and research on the chimpanzee, scientists have been (been去掉) found a great deal of human nature possessed by these primitive animals such as chimpanzee and monkey. For example(上一句刚用完for example,这儿最好改改), scientists had been suspended (been去掉，否则是科学家被吊起来了) a bundle of banana on the ceiling of house, put a long stick on the ground, and observed how chimpanzee reach the fruit. The chimpanzee tried its best to reach the banana but failed. At this time, the chimpanzee saw the long twig on the land, picked up the stick to reach the cluster of banana and successfully get them. Based on this experiment, scientists are able to find its ability, similar to the human being, that is the chimpanzee know (knows) how to use tools. By this experiment, it is conducive for people to make the further research on the capacity of mankind.

Another reason for my point is that the study of animals contributes to the comprehensive understanding of human nature. A fair proportion of animals have the same organization in their structure. It is great (greatly) helpful for the research on human nature to do the tests on the animals.  As we all know, mammals have all the brain cells. Scientists made an experiment on the little mouse so as to perceive the brain cells. They allowed the little mouse to keep active around the clock. And after a period of time, scientists found the fact that the brain cells of the little mouse had been died out with a rapid speed. Eventually, biologists and scientists arrived at the conclusion that people are inclined to die early because over exhaustion would kill more brain cells. In short, human being benefit significantly from the study of animal.

In a word, from what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that the exploration of human nature is absolutely responsible for the study of animals.(responsible 用在这儿，楼主想表达什么意思)

梦想在望2008UID: 2546295

human nature 是 人类的天性 的意思