COMEON作文小组——jiwasun 2008 10月31日作业

jiwasunUID: 2425569

Does study of animals help us to learn human nature?

Known to all, human beings come from the evolution of the primitive primates, in other words, human beings come from animals. Various animals share a number of characteristic in common. Therefore, it is the study of animals that played an significant role in the learning of human nature.

First, the research on the mice can greatly enhance the ability of humans to cure disease of all kinds. We live in a world where knowledge is accumulated by multiplying, and people suffer great pressure from various directions, including work, school, economy and so forth. Working overload, sleeping disorder, eating too much fast food, say, fried chicken, and the list will go on, all will lead to health degradation. A survey by Health last month which interviewed more than a hundred experts specialized in Clinical Medicine found that nearly eighty percent chose illnesses related to heart and vein as one of the most fatal diseases. All too often we observe an excellent scholar pass away suddenly at his or her young age because of a deadly disease refer to heart. However, the study on the mice can obtain enough practical data on the trial of some newly developed medicine, which is not suitable for it to be applied on mankind at the very step of the medicine research process.

Second, more information about humankind's psychology can be collected by the study on the monkey. We are all fairly familiar with one truth: human beings and monkeys are both primates, they share various features in common, such as psychology. The following public mind, for example, is never difficult to find in human and monkey groups. Individual in both groups tends to abandon his or her original idea and do what the majority do. Furthermore, the great number of information could be applied on the psychological therapy of human beings. No doubt, the more we study animals, the more we understand ourselves, and thus the more effective our psychological therapy will be. Instead of an purely zoology research on monkey behavior, it is one of the indispensable methods that substantially improve the psychological therapy effect.

In brief, the study on animals exercises an positive influence on the learning of human nature. Therefore, more funds and more time should be put into these researches.

purplechunUID: 2508437

(As is)Known to all, human beingscome from the evolution of the primitive primates, in other words,human beings come from animals. Various animals share a number ofcharacteristic(s) in common. Therefore, it is the study of animals thatplayed an significant role in the learning of human nature. 3w8~/Pw3ag@

7s8G/oV$|S8~2q|留学|签证|TOEFL|GREFirst,the research on the mice can greatly enhance the ability of humans tocure disease(s) of all kinds(all有点过了吧？). We live in a world where knowledge isaccumulated by multiplying, and people suffer great pressure fromvarious directions, including work, school, economy and so forth.Working overload, sleeping disorder(disorderly), eating too much fast food, say,fried chicken, and the list will go on, all will lead to healthdegradation. A survey by Health last month which interviewed more thana hundred experts specialized in Clinical Medicine found that nearlyeighty percent chose illnesses related to heart and vein as one of(删掉one of) themost fatal diseases. All too often we observe an excellent scholar passaway suddenly at his or her young age because of a deadly disease refer(s)to heart. However, the study on the mice can obtain enough practicaldata on the trial of some newly developed medicine, which is notsuitable for it to be applied(改为being applied) on mankind at the very step of themedicine research process.
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J%f C!wOJY|3[0y8dSecond,more information about humankind's psychology(这个是主要指心理学课吧，改为psychoanalysis) can be collected by thestudy on the monkey. We are all fairly familiar with one truth: humanbeings and monkeys are both primates, they share various features incommon, such as psychology. The following public mind(这是啥？), for example, isnever difficult to find in human and monkey groups. Individual in bothgroups tends to abandon his or her original idea and do what themajority do. Furthermore, the great number of information could beapplied on the psychological therapy of human beings. No doubt, themore we study animals, the more we understand ourselves, and thus themore effective our psychological therapy will be. Instead of an purelyzoology research on monkey behavior, it is one of the indispensablemethods that substantially improve the psychological therapy effect.
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In brief, the study on animals exercises an positiveinfluence on the learning of human nature. Therefore, more funds andmore time should be put into these researches.
写的很好啊：）加油。不过我觉得既然题目上说了nature，后面是不是应该多说一些nature（从单词的角度）？

jiwasunUID: 2425569

following public mind是从众心理
谢谢修改