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原帖由 腾格里旅狼 于 2009-1-12 00:18 发表
版主，为什么我的章子这么不好看……感觉像个路边小花一样……:o :confused:

多拉风的章呀~~含金量还高呢~~~（悄悄地说~~要不咱俩换章子?我这个好看~~还有刺呢~~）

阿泰UID: 209473

:o FAINT!

你知道这章子是多不容易给你申请到的啊

赶快上张PP吧你！:o

阿泰UID: 209473

https://bbs.gter.net/thread-908540-1-1.html:o

frank_chowUID: 2524907

支持楼主~~~~

腾格里旅狼UID: 2573178

我已经写完获奖感言了……

阿泰UID: 209473

上PP!还得两人的:mad

chineseladyUID: 2403976

这些观点都是电影传播的啊，那首先就是好莱坞呗:eek:  
尽量努力写短句子，其实我还是真喜欢短的，精干。
那个交通工具的文章10日考过了，看来我是碰不上了。那篇我还是真有灵感:( :(

腾格里旅狼UID: 2573178

pp发哪里……

腾格里旅狼UID: 2573178

我不是说你不能用好莱坞做例子，而是你这个例子太具争议了……:handshake

阿泰UID: 209473

先发我邮箱吧;d:

郑州47中滴筒子;d:

edison_shuai@126.com

腾格里旅狼UID: 2573178

你是郑州47中的？不是前段时间说是北大的么，然后又成了研究生……现在又成了郑州47中……百变星君……

JiayiiUID: 2589450

求楼主多指点指点，我的英语写作实在很差，但又没有像楼主那么努力20搞定托福，只有套套模板了，这周末就考，非常感谢
Do you agree or disagree that improving schools is the most factor in successful development of country
Presently, there is a controversial issue about what is the most factor of successful development of country. Despite the fact that the majority hold the opinion that improving schools is the most element of successful development of country, I doubt whether the argument can bear much analysis. In the following discussion, I would like to reason and provide concrete evidences to demonstrate my viewpoint.
To begin with, advanced technology is more important than education. And I can think of no better illustration of the idea than the obvious fact that, the speed at which technology is developing has increased at a phenomenal rate these years, which cause that the world has changed largely. When we have the inventions of the computer and the internet, which provide prerequisite in finishing achievement for country, many students could study through the internet at home. Since then, the school is not the only site for education.
What is also worth noticing is that the government policy is also more essential that improving schools. As we know, different countries have different policy according their national conditions. The more the policy is perfect, the more the development of country is fast.
In order to see this point clearly, let us see an example:
A few years ago, in my country, the government put some policy into effect, such as reducing or remitting agricultural taxes and taxes on special farm produce according to the relevant provisions of the regulations on agricultural taxation and so on. After that the farmers do not migrate to city as much as before. Because of this, the farmers’ lives can be guaranteed, and this also maintains our agricultural has developed stably.
     However, the schools also contribute a lot in developing countries, for instance, some scientists are cultivated by high education, they still promote the development of countries. But some of the scholars learn by themselves through their efforts, I constantly consider that the education is the most important.
    From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that we do not only improve our schools, but also advance the technology and have appropriate policy system. And as long as  we do this, we can imagine how fast the country would develop.

JiayiiUID: 2589450

对不起排版时段落还分的很清楚，怎么发上来段落不明显了，再发一次，
       Presently, there is a controversial issue about what is the most factor of successful development of country. Despite the fact that the majority hold the opinion that improving schools is the most element of successful development of country, I doubt whether the argument can bear much analysis. In the following discussion, I would like to reason and provide concrete evidences to demonstrate my viewpoint.
       To begin with, advanced technology is more important than education. And I can think of no better illustration of the idea than the obvious fact that, the speed at which technology is developing has increased at a phenomenal rate these years, which cause that the world has changed largely. When we have the inventions of the computer and the internet, which provide prerequisite in finishing achievement for country, many students could study through the internet at home. Since then, the school is not the only site for education.
       What is also worth noticing is that the government policy is also more essential that improving schools. As we know, different countries have different policy according their national conditions. The more the policy is perfect, the more the development of country is fast. In order to see this point clearly, let us see an example: a few years ago, in my country, the government put some policy into effect, such as reducing or remitting agricultural taxes and taxes on special farm produce according to the relevant provisions of the regulations on agricultural taxation and so on. After that the farmers do not migrate to city as much as before. Because of this, the farmers’ lives can be guaranteed, and this also maintains our agricultural has developed stably.
        However, the schools also contribute a lot in developing countries, for instance, some scientists are cultivated by high education, they still promote the development of countries. But some of the scholars learn by themselves through their efforts, I constantly consider that the education is the most important.
       From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that we do not only improve our schools, but also advance the technology and have appropriate policy system. And as long as the government does this, we can imagine how fast the country would develop.
  辛苦了

阿泰UID: 209473

我不是

我知道你是;d:

chineseladyUID: 2403976

Does study of animals help us to learn human nature?(2007.10.27)

As living creatures in this world, both human beings and animals are significant for each other. Some of animals’ characters are similar with humans, which can assist people to learn human nature by study of animals. Therefore, I agree that study animals can make people know the information about human nature.

In the first place, parts of animals’ features can reflect human beings’. The story of lizard may not be strange to people. It said that a family was ready for moving to another place. When the wardrobe was empty, a lizard was shown in the corner of wardrobe, its tail fixed by a nail. This situation shocked that family because the wardrobe was handmade one year ago. The lizard was not removed until truth was covered in next few hours. Another lizard came to feed it, which is hard for people to trust that it was the other lizard that saved it. The second lizard must come to feed it everyday. Although the identity of the second lizard was unclear, maybe a parent, a spouse or a child, such behavior is similar with human beings’ as no one will quit taking care of his/her family numbers when they are in needed.

Secondly, animals as members of food chain play a key role in this world. The famous forest rule explains it correctly, which is the same meaning for human beings in social environment. The strongest ones will be the winner and become the top of the food chain. For animals, each one has its capacity to protect itself. Such as rabbits can run fast, hedgehogs have thorns and monkey climb trees no matter how tall the trees are. Just like human beings in this society, it is not easy to survive without any ability to complete work. Every one can find himself/herself based on the animal situations as they are miniatures of humans.

In conclusion, animals share the similar characters in some of specific ways to human beings. And study of animals can provide the materials about people’s temperature and human natures; therefore, the animal studying can make humans know themselves better.