20天托福110分复习计划，由于另一个帖子楼数太高，现在本帖也开始为各位改作文

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每次累的时候
来看看这个帖子就有了新的动力

ruruannieUID: 2592337

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? the college years are the best time in a person's life .Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
(你好，第一次发帖，文章也是限时写的第一篇……谢谢）

Living in a highly competetive society, I am invariably suggested that the spectacular period is in my future when I earn a fortune and become an entirely mature woman, then I must struggle in the campus preparing for the bright future. Whereas, I take leave to doubt this opinion. From my perspective, the most glorious time is in no where but my universtity. I am  not here to be tortured or oppresed. In the contrary , the college years will be the most joyful and abundent. In the essay , I would like to state my opinion. Firstly, college is the best place for one to make progress as students can correct their fault. Unlike the perilous society, college can tolerate  students'  mistakes and help they to correct them. Imagine the presumptuous and facuous youth make mistakes in the company, they may lose thier jobs by just  one mistake. However,  in the college, there will be  teachers and classmates give you advice when you are confused about your error. Secondly , university offer one the countless books and andvanced facilities to broaden thier horizons. All the universities have large libraries which are the paradise for the book worms. Absorbing knowledge as much as you like , will certainly cultivate one's temperament and make him/she a profound person which is very beneficial in the future. However, there will be little possibility that we can get such free and convient access to the library. Thirdly , univeristy is the best place  to make the eternal friends. As the campus life is relatively pure and easy , the students may join the clubs and asociation.which are thier fascination. And their can make lots of friends who have the same interest as them there. To sum up, students can form the friendship in campus not worried about others taking advantage of you which many people do in the society. I will strongly advocate that college years are the best time in our life. I t is the fundamentals of our whole life, and we grow fast in the college. If we have the opportunity study in university ,then just cherish it!

MARC09UID: 2641231

137. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? High schools should allow students to study the courses that students want to study. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.




Admittedly, interest is the best teacher ever. When people are learning something they are truly interested in, they will show the strongest passion and making the most effort, thus best learning. But when it comes to high school students, should they be allowed to choose the courses they are interested in and want to study? I will give a definite NO. Three reasons are given as follows.



First and the most important, letting high school students choose courses by themselves will lead to absence of learning something truly important. As we all know, some basic courses, such as math, English, physics, and so forth, are really necessary and useful not only for our daily life, but also for further learning of other courses. Without learning of math, we cannot well calculate taxes, sales, or interest, and will not be able to protect ourselves when dealing with money; without learning of English, we will not be able to well communicate with foreign friends, read literatures written by English, and handling business with foreign corporations; without learning of biology, people will not gain common sense on living mechanism of organisms, and also, when people want to further their study on medicine, biology is the prerequisite. However, high school students may not be able to see the significance of these courses and not at all have an interest in choosing them, which will result in their difficulty in daily lives and lack of background knowledge for further study on other field.



Even if high school students have chosen all the basic and important courses, their selection of other courses may distract their learning and waste their time. Time is limited for students, when they are investing too much time on learning courses they want to study, they will not have enough time and energy to handle the important ones. When I was in high school, a friend of mine was a big fan on violin. To obtain better performance, she kept practising 3 hours every day when she came back home from school. Sometimes she was so tired that she could not finish all the homework on time, not to mention review and preview courses. She made a huge progress, but, at the same time, her scores for courses in school made a huge fall. Finally, she had to decrease the time of practising violin. In this case, my friend just spent spare time on learning what she is interested in, which shows a negative effect on learning school courses. Can you imagine what will happen if students' hobbies become their courses?



Finally, limited financial and substantial resources cannot support students' free choices of courses. Interests are diverse among people. One hundred students may have one hundred interests. Does that mean school will have to design one hundred courses to satisfy all the students, for example, to build a pool for 100/4000 students who are willing to learn swimming? That will be so inefficient and unpractical. Therefore, to sum up, high school students should not be allowed to choose whatever courses they want to study, but focus on necessary and important courses in school, and enjoy their hobby in spare time.
谢谢楼主!

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ahjkebctvUID: 2591320

多谢了

chineseladyUID: 2403976

最近几个月都有别的考试,英语也没碰. 汗啊, 得一段时间超赶吧! 字数有点少想先听听你对结构和思路的意见. 辛苦啦!
High schools should allow students to study the courses that students want to study. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

High school education is significant in one’s academic life. It both helps students gain more specific knowledge for further education and equip some to have work positions. But high school students are teenagers with their active minds. Therefore, I do not agree students should study the courses they prefer. It may bring benefit and negative consequence.

In the first place, selecting the subjects they want will develop them independent. When people have right to decide what they can complete on important issues, a feeling of being respected will be filled in their hearts. Students may practice how to make a decision. That could assist them to become more responsible about what they selected. On the other hand, no one can know him/herself better except oneself. For instance, I was really slow in math in my high school but better in history and Chinese subjects. If I could have studied for math longer and less in history, my math’s score would be higher. From that reason, being in the same classes with others may not the perfect method to make progress.

However, some students may not treasure that opportunities. In order not to increase more pressure or learn deeper learning, they will choose the easier ones as they prefer. That will cause side effect of no improvement on academic subjects. If some consider that it is hard to master their weak points in specific courses, they may just quit and only study what they are enjoyed. It will be regretting in their futures. It happened that one felt difficult in engineering in university because he/she did not master foundation subject in high school such as math and physics.

In conclusion, it is not rational for high school students to study courses they want. That will produce advantages and disadvantages. Parts of students may receive active consequence but not every one. Therefore, I do not agree with students should study what they want.

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翠花，写经验帖！！

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谢谢腾格里旅狼

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: The advice you take from the friends who are older than you is valuable than that taken form the friends at your age.

According to my experience, the advice from older friends is usually more helpful and beneficial than that from friends at my age.

The first reason is that there are many problems which heavily depend on one’s age and experience. For example, When I was about to graduate from high school, I met the problem of which major should I choose to study in the university? Dazzled by the variety of majors offered, I figured it out that it is not a judgment can be wisely made just by the high IQ of my classmates. The available answers all sounded great, but someone who is older than I and thus has relevant experiences could tell me some useful things. Hence I visited several friends who were already college students. They told me a lot about the true pictures in different departments, for instance, an economic student should spend lot of time on mathematics assignment, and dramatic performance on the courts is a small part of the lives in law school. Therefore, they said my original imagination about these majors was not very correct and I should reconsider my decision. Such advice is really valuable to me and it of course couldn’t be obtained from friends as young as I.

Another reason why older friend can offer better advice is that their usually have different points of view, so their positions will be a beneficial supplements to ours. As a young man in the 20s, when I consider a destination or an activity for my vacation, whether it is funny or not is the first factor I take into account, and so do my friends of the same age with me. But people in their 30s tend to be more prudent and regard safety as priority. A good example is my colleague Lee, who always warns me against the potential hazards in my travelling plans. Thanks to his advice, we made the relevant adjustments, took enough precautions and succeeded in a number of ventures without any unfortunate events.

Xiaoxiong0310UID: 2647924

太牛了，每天睡那么少

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多谢楼主分享

腾格里旅狼UID: 2573178

314# 网兜妮妮 我不是很推荐你在第一段用例子引出论点，原因有二：1，你对这个题目并不是理解的很透彻，也即是说会有理解失误，这样你就要尽量去使用一中模棱两可的论点，而例子则是你在已经有了明确论点以后用来佐证你的论点。如果你在首段用离子引出论点，在面对这种你理解不透彻的作文题目时，你会面临跑题的风险，而且又是在第一段，风险更大，有可能得分会在15分以下。2，托福作文并不是长篇论文，几百字的东西要的就是简单明了，在第一段直接提出论点，会给考官一个很直接的印象。 中间写的还可以，但是应该加强一下论据的简明，写的有一些拖沓。结尾比较失败，对于两面型的问题，最好给出对另一面的理解。

腾格里旅狼UID: 2573178

316# qrxxw 呵呵，希望我的经验能对你有用，等待你的喜讯。

腾格里旅狼UID: 2573178

317# ruruannie 下次发作文请分段，看的我眼睛疼。你的文章看起来典型的模板文章，尤其是首段，模板痕迹太重。如果你不是要在1-2个月内考托福的话，建议你跑看模板联系，这样能使你的作文水平迅速增长。等到临考试的1-2个月，再从你以前写过的文章中总结模板，总结自己的模板，这样能是你的作文变得很有特色。第一个论点写的不怎么样，你应该强调在学习中而不是在大学里。大学中也不会原谅你的错误，只有在学习中才有可能。

腾格里旅狼UID: 2573178

318# MARC09 第一段的开头很好，我很喜欢你的开头，写的正好对应你的总论点。议论第一段最好给一个结合自身的离子，你现在的离子都是空谈，怎么重要怎么重要，无论你讲的再详细也没有亲身体会给人的印象深。别的论点不好找结合自身的离子，但是这些基础课程你学过的，写一些感受再容易不过了。你的第二段写的莫名其妙，我读了两遍都没有读懂，你能给我解释一下么？总体来讲，你的文章不能够抓住论点写，读起来有一些散，希望你能够进一步提高自己对论点的分析能力。

腾格里旅狼UID: 2573178

319# ahjkebctv 对不起，请发原文，不该链接。