【12月-1月IBT综合备考活动】之【TWE写作】12月23日作业 by 达达

达达摩摩UID: 2499908

12.23日作业 大学往往让学生通过TEAM WORK完成PROJECT,然后给TEAM MEMBER打上同样的分数,你觉得这样好吗? （08.1.19）
      Recently , more and more student make a term to study and also get together to finish project. But this is a problem with most of the students. When we finish the whole project , the professor give us the same soccer with the term member. However, I agree with the statement.

      As my opinion , I think we cooperate with others to study and finish project that one group. We are all together. For example , I have attended one group in our university to finished one important project last year. In our term that have 7 people , we have did different work and write different paper , all of us so tired but we feel very happy , because we worked together and feeled the more cooperative we are, the more power we can generate. At last we finished the whole the project and did very prefect and our professor give us the same soccer .

      Secondly, human cooperation is born in human evolution is the spirit of some of the reasons are because of people .For instance, Sam Walton, creator of Wal-mart, the world’s largest retailing empire, grew up in a destitute family. By the 1960s, the American retailing industry was experiencing a revolution: discount retailing. Walton’s business acumen made him realize that this was where the business would go. He and his brother opened their own store, Wal-Mart Discount City. They are work together and gain the same soccer ,

    To sum up , We should not only shoulder these responsibilities, but also try to appeal more people joining in our group. Only by the way to solidify strongly today, we would possess a wonderful tomorrow.

chineseladyUID: 2403976

Whether is advantage or disadvantage to give the same score to the team member that depends on how the team is organize and how agreement the value of the entire member in the team

As far as I concerned, if the team is我觉得IS可以省略吧 had strong team work. And the project plays a significant role in the members’ life.个人觉得前后两句子有点不通That the team members will be discipline themselves, and would devoted heart and soul into the project. In this way, it is better to give the same score to each team member in which cause everyone would feel pound 这里是想说骄傲不if the team gains a high grade

On the other hand, in the case that the project is given just for finished and gain an unimportant grade in university life. It may not give exciting to students to accomplish. Then each student will depend on others to finish it. That is better to give different student different grade for the project in which part they finish.
Above all, whether is advantage or disadvantage to give the same grade to all the team member depends on how important member think the project is. If they consider that the project is significant, it is better to mark the same grade. If not, they just consider that is a peak nut significant, it is better to give different member different grade字数不够,今天偷懒了吧!而且有点象哲学,车轱辘话来回说哦.两个论点都展开的不够.

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发错了啊 重来

chineseladyUID: 2403976

Recently , more and more student make a term to study and also get together to finish project. But this is a problem with most of the students. When we finish the whole project , the professor give us the same soccer(是score吧) with the term member. However, I agree with the statement

As my opinion , I think we cooperate with others to study and finish project that one group. We are all together. For example , I have去年直接用过去时就好 attended one group in our university to finished one important project last year. In our term that have 7 people ,(there were seven people in our term) we have did different work and write different paper , all of us so tired but we feel very happy , because we worked together and feeled the more cooperative we are, the more power we can generate. At last we finished the whole the project and did very prefect and our professor give us the same soccer

  Secondly, human cooperation is born in human evolution is the spirit of some of the reasons are because of people .For instance, Sam Walton, creator of Wal-mart, the world’s largest retailing empire, grew up in a destitute family. By the 1960s, the American retailing industry was experiencing a revolution: discount retailing. Walton’s business acumen made him realize that this was where the business would go. He and his brother opened their own store, Wal-Mart Discount City. They are work together and gain the same soccer,这段是你以前的文章,哥们儿,咱造假也要敬业啊

sum up , We should not only shoulder these responsibilities, but also try to appeal more people joining in our group. Only by the way to solidify strongly today, we would possess a wonderful tomorrow 有几处语法已经划出来了,有些还是很基础的.LZ是不是忙的自己都没有检查哦.批评啊! 再有啊,咱都是要去美国的人了,虽然原则上咱不如他们,但是造假也要敬业啊.都知道推荐信是咱自己写但是也不能让他美国人看出来不是,这造假啊也得敬业!

达达摩摩UID: 2499908

严重检讨 昨天忙到9.30才回家 呜呜呜我 谢谢chineselady啊！！！

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