刚写的，哪位帮忙改一下吧

IsidoraUID: 2590556

Throwaway society

In my opinion, the life style of throwaway shouldn’t be advocated in the
modern city because it is not suitable for the long-term social and natural
development.

For one hand, widely using one-off productions may waste a lot of resources
and be harmful for the natural environment. It is hardly to image that the
precious materials such as wood and petroleum be made into one-off products,
plastic bags, paper box rather than traffic construction or city development
and be thrown away after using one time particularly in the situation that
the available resources are more and more strained.

For another hand, throwaway society is not helpful to shape citizens’ save
consciousness and proper value. The throwaway habit may let people ignore
the importance of the commodities which society provided. When a crisis
comes, people who used to the throwaway way may find it difficult to lead a
life in an economical way.

Moreover, the environment around us will be damaged by the throwaway consume
style. Useless plastic bags and boxes make the cities look like dirty and
messy. A great number of trees are cut of to manufacture one-off productions
as well as the amount of trees which beatify our surroundings is
declining.   

Above all, we have to adopt measures at once changing the throwaway society
in order to protect our natural environment and ourselves, such as using
bags and boxes repeatedly. And most important things we should do is to
appeal more and more people join the team of saving on resources.

井蕨UID: 2318198

那个，你可以把题目要求贴出来吗？

IsidoraUID: 2590556

就是讨论一下throwaway society这个话题，do you agree or disagree

饱饭仔UID: 2505959

文章结构很标准啊
然后,观点也很鲜明
语言也没有大问题
说理能再深入一点就好了
以上,个人看法

sneakerliuUID: 2481691

Throwaway society

In my opinion, the life style of throwaway shouldn’t be advocated in the
modern city because（as） it is not suitable（harmful） for (both)the long-term social and natural
development.

For one hand, widely using one-off productions may waste a lot of resources
and be harmful for the natural environment(is a waste of the limited natural resourse and can even cause environmental pollution). It is hardly to image that the
precious materials such as wood and petroleum be made into one-off products,
plastic bags, paper box rather than traffic construction or city development
and(but) be thrown away after using one time(only once) particularly in the situation that
the available resources are more and more(getting) strained.

For another hand, throwaway society is not helpful to shape citizens’ save
consciousness and proper value(consciousness of save and may lead to a waste lifestyle). The throwaway habit may let people ignore
the importance of the commodities which society provided(provided by the society是东西太便宜了太容易得到了导致throw还是throw导致我们觉得东西太容易得到呢？). When（once） a crisis
comes, people who used to the throwaway way may find it difficult to lead a
life in an economical way.And the consequence associated with that could be a disaster.

Moreover, the environment around us will be damaged by the throwaway consume
style. Useless plastic bags and boxes make the cities look like dirty and
messy. A great number of trees are cut of to manufacture one-off productions
as well as the amount of trees which beatify our surroundings is
declining.   

Above all, we have to adopt measures at once changing the throwaway society
in order to protect our natural environment and ourselves, such as using
bags and boxes repeatedly. And most important things we should do is to
appeal more and more people to join the team of saving on resources.

让我回想起了考雅思的日子。。。。

饱饭仔UID: 2505959

楼上真是好同志啊