issue48 【0906G ANap hand 】第八次作业

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When we open a history book, there always are full of famous people, which are described as a vital factor of crucial event happens. Indeed, it is unfair to neglect groups of people whose identities have long been forgotten. However, history informs us that a key individual who provides the necessary impetus for what otherwise might be a group effort.

As Thomas Carlyle, a Scottish historian, assrets that the history of the world is but the biography of great men. This saying is used to point out that the individual’s important, which is a leader or guider of the masses. They are more intelligent, diligent, self-control, farsighted than the average people. For example, Mahatma Gandhi, which was the leader of the Indian nationalist movement against British rule, his doctrine of non-violent protest to achieve and social progress has been hugely influential. He was imprisoned for six years live through miserableness, thus leading people reach the victory, and then he is widely considered the father of his country. another celebrity, Winston Churchill, which is prime minister during World War Two, his refusal to surrender to Nazi Germany was inspired the country, he worked tirelessly throughout the war and played an important role to put the war to an end. In this aspect, the progress of human being is forwarded with a big step, without them, the wheel of history still rolls on at a slow speed.

Admittedly, in the political history, the join of large groups of people seems not to be neglected slightingly. Whereas, to some extent, the reactions of forgettable commonalty to the innovative and creative things or advanced and complex ideology are used to be involuntary. Take the heliocentric theory for example, when Bruno tried by the Inquisition for heresy and burned at the stake, fewer people stand up to impel the spread of this theory even many people believe in geocentric theory. So, there should be a key individual who has to appeal for the masses to support reform.

Furthermore, in particular, turn to our attention to the realm of art and science. Those who are gifted play a pivotal power to incite and inspire important events. For instance, Beethoven and his music style are adored by the later critics as the watershed of the classicism and romanticism. And profound scientific invention and discovery of the past nearly all attribute not to the large forgettable groups of people but certain key individual, such as Newton, Edison, Einstein, Curie, and so forth. All of these men and women, as Napoleon said that men of genius are meteors destined to be consumed in lighting up their century. And I would like to add that not only their century but the future of human being.

What is convincing is that comparing to study the masses in history, the research of the famous few is more accurate and efficient. The chief reason is that as a representative, his character is a specific embodiment of the groups of people. Through the study of the famous few, we can reveal the main character of the masses, which is concealed among many obscure people's life. Like Joan of Arc, a French national heroine, from this figure we can unearth the French spirit of aspiring after freedom and liberation. Therefore, a key individual help us find emphasis from large groups of people.

In sum, with few historical exceptions, history is shaped by elite, not by less, faceless groups. When we encounter an intractable problem, it is true that the key individuals extricate us from labyrinth resourcefully and courageously, even though the participation of masses is also necessary, the light of our future beacons from the key individuals.

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When we open a history book, there always are full of famous people, which are described as a vital factor of crucial event happens. Indeed, it is unfair to neglect groups of people whose identities have long been forgotten. However, history informs us that a key individual who provides the necessary impetus for what otherwise might be a group effort. (看不明白)


As Thomas Carlyle, a Scottish historian, assrets that the history of the world is but the biography of great men（这整个就是as带的从句，主句哪...）. This saying is used to point out that （哈这个是那个xxx教你写gre句子里面的）the individual’s important（从句少谓语）, which is a leader or guider of the masses. They are more intelligent, diligent, self-control（词性不对，以后的并列结构尤其小心）, farsighted than the average people. For example, Mahatma Gandhi, which was the leader of the Indian nationalist movement against British rule, his doctrine of non-violent protest to achieve and social progress has been hugely influential. He was imprisoned for six years live through miserableness, thus leading people reach the victory, and then he is（用完成时） widely considered the father of his country. another celebrity（这是特指娱乐圈的名人）, Winston Churchill, which is（又是举例子当中的时态问题） prime minister during World War Two, his refusal to surrender to Nazi Germany was inspired the country, he worked tirelessly throughout the war and played an important role to put the war to an end. In this aspect, the progress of human being is forwarded with（in） a big step, without them（这个them指代什么？唯一可以指代的貌似是progress）, the wheel of history still rolls on at a slow speed.


Admittedly, in the political history, the join of large groups of people seems not to be neglected slightingly. Whereas, to some extent, the reactions of forgettable commonalty to the innovative and creative things or advanced and complex ideology are used to be involuntary(很乱的一句话，让人搞不清逻辑). Take（taking） the heliocentric theory for example, when Bruno tried by the Inquisition for heresy and burned at the stake, fewer（few） people stand up to impel the spread of this theory even many people believe in geocentric theory. So, there should be a key individual who has to appeal for the masses to support reform. （你这段开头讲是 political history 然而后面跟political无关，而且最后这句话完全偏离了你本来想表达的意思）


Furthermore, in particular, turn to our attention to the realm of art and science. Those who are gifted（The gifted） play a pivotal power(play power?) to incite and inspire important events. For instance, Beethoven and his music style are adored by the later critics as the watershed of the classicism and romanticism. And profound scientific invention and discovery of the past nearly all attribute not to the large forgettable groups of people but (to 还是并列结构的问题) certain key individual, such as Newton, Edison, Einstein, Curie, and so forth. All of these men and women, （你在这里放个主语就不管了？后面是从句啊）as Napoleon said that men of genius are meteors destined to be consumed in lighting up their century. And I would like to add that not only their century but the future of human being（这个分句没主语和谓语）.


What is convincing is that comparing to study the masses in history, the research of the famous few is more accurate and efficient. The chief reason is that as a representative, his （你想指代啥？） character is a specific embodiment of the groups of people. Through the study of the famous few, we can reveal the main character of the masses, which is concealed among many obscure people's life. Like Joan of Arc, a French national heroine（又是从句没谓语）, from this figure we can unearth the French spirit of aspiring after freedom and liberation. Therefore, a key individual help us find emphasis from large groups of people.


In sum, with few historical exceptions, history is shaped by elite, not by less, faceless groups. When we encounter an intractable problem, it is true that the key individuals extricate us from labyrinth resourcefully and courageously(这两个副词用的不对), even though the participation of masses is also necessary, the light of our future beacons from the key individuals.

没提纲不了解你的想法，不过从语法来看，问题非常严重。