【Dark_Tournament TOEFL-ibt作文小组mintsh第九次作业】

mintshUID: 2460474

Agree or disagree, technology cause children show less creative than they were in past.

In the recent years, there has been a heated debate on the issue that whether technology causes children show less creative than they were in past. Even though people of both sides hold reasonable reasons in support of their own standpoints, I definitely disagree with the saying that technology causes children show less creative.

No matter what kind of criteria we use, the result is apparent. That is to say, children today certainly posses more creativity than they did before. For instance, in the prehistoric period, even the discovery of exploiting tools to help hunt prey seems to be incredible for children at that time. In the opposite, travelling to other planets via spaceship or even tapping other planets as new space for living does not sound that ridiculous. How rapid progress our children’s imagination has gained!

All this is mainly based on advanced technology. The amazing improvement in technology applies to deeper research in diverse scientific fields, which contributes a lot to the breakthrough on knowledge. As a consequence, children are able to have access to further education in various fields. Depending on the excellent grasp of modern technology, children today enables more experiments or trials to be carried out and presume even fantastic hypothesis. This kind of endeavor is probable to be the prerequisite for top end theories.
The inevitable fact indicates that children influenced by advanced technologies are more creative and in turn these technologies help them approach the mysterious truth concealed behind phenomenon.
What if no advanced technology exists? In ancient times, people actually led a hard life for the sake of technology deficiency. Most of them were exhausted after a day’s hunting and farming. They had little time to think about anything beyond their living so that their imagination was confined within a narrow scope. Exploration occurred occasionally. That may be why we have achieved dramatic progress especially in the past hundreds of years but not in the whole history of human beings. Only when the rudimentary requirement could be satisfied with ease will people be liberated from the all-day labor. Then they could spare part of time observing and conceiving before they discovered the real secrets of nature. Time flies and so does the children’s imagination.

Finally, born in a era of huge amounts of information and technology, we shall cherish the chance to do a favor to the writing of subsequent majestic history of human beings.

mimicaUID: 2457275

In the recent years, there has been a heated debate on the issue that whether technology causes children show less creative than they were in past. Even though people of both sides hold reasonable reasons in support of their own standpoints, I definitely disagree with the saying that technology causes children show less creative. 5 v8 l, V5 V3 v/ T  l$ h$ S

No matter what kind of criteria we use, the result is apparent. That is to say, children today certainly posses more creativity than they did before.（前两句可合并） For instance, in the prehistoric period, even the discovery of exploiting tools to help hunt prey seems to （Even hunting prey with the help of exploiting tools seems to）be incredible for children at that time. In the opposite, travelling to other planets via spaceship or even tapping other planets as new space for living does not sound that ridiculous. How rapid progress our children’s imagination has gained!(这是儿童的imagination?)8 x& D; n4 p8 u7 g

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All this is mainly based on advanced technology. The amazing improvement in technology applies to deeper research in diverse scientific fields, which contributes a lot to the breakthrough on knowledge. As a consequence, children are able to have access to further education in various fields. Depending on the excellent grasp of modern technology, children today enables more experiments or trials to be carried out and presume even fantastic hypothesis. This kind of endeavor is probable to be the prerequisite for top end theories.
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The inevitable fact indicates that children influenced by advanced technologies are more creative and in turn these technologies help them approach the mysterious truth concealed behind phenomenon(s).# k6 o, z0 m, }( @* W% [
What if no advanced technology exists? In ancient times, people actually led a hard life for the sake of technology deficiency. Most of them were exhausted after a day’s hunting and farming. They had little time to think about anything beyond their living so that their imagination was confined within a narrow scope. Exploration occurred occasionally. That may be why we have achieved dramatic progress especially in the past hundreds of years but not in the whole history of human beings. Only when the rudimentary requirement could be satisfied with ease will people be liberated from the all-day labor. Then they could spare part of time observing and conceiving before they discovered the real secrets of nature. Time flies and so does the children’s imagination.(个人感觉二三段意思差不多，都是在讲技术进步是前提条件)9 `( l3 ~: g/ Y2 P7 x0 w4 y

Finally, born in a era of huge amounts of information and technology, we shall cherish the chance to do a favor to the writing of subsequent majestic history of human beings.

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In the recent years, there has been a heated debate on the issue that whether technology causes children show less creative than they were in past. Even though people of both sides hold reasonable reasons in support of their own standpoints, I definitely disagree with the saying that technology causes children show less creative. & l' Y3 W: m7 _" u
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No matter what kind of criteria we use, the result is apparent. That is to say, children today certainly posses(posse这是什么意思哦：)) more creativity than they did before. For instance, in the prehistoric period, even the discovery of exploiting tools to help hunt(hunting) prey seems to be incredible for children at that time. In the opposite, travelling to other planets via spaceship or even tapping other planets as new space for living does not sound that ridiculous (by technology today ).(What is more, Thanks to the technological invention) How rapid progress our children’s imagination has gained!+ j$ k! k- T  z& G6 w
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All this is mainly based on advanced technology. The amazing improvement in technology applies to deeper research in diverse scientific fields, which contributes a lot to the breakthrough on knowledge. As a consequence, children are able to have access to further education in various fields. Depending on the excellent grasp of modern technology, children today enables(enable) more experiments or trials to be carried out and presume even fantastic hypothesis. This kind of endeavor is probable to be the prerequisite for(加一个many？)top end theories. 6 ^# N% s( s8 l9 F& _6 L$ |. w
The inevitable fact indicates that children influenced by advanced technologies are more creative and in turn these technologies help them approach the mysterious truth concealed behind phenomenon.
7 i+ h! }9 l% P0 R0 K+ lWhat if no advanced technology exists? In ancient times, people actually led a hard life for the sake of technology deficiency. Most of them were exhausted after a day’s hunting and farming. They had little time to think about anything beyond their living so that their imagination was confined within a narrow scope. Exploration occurred occasionally. That may be why we have achieved dramatic progress especially in the past hundreds of years but not in the whole history of human beings. Only when the rudimentary requirement could be satisfied with ease will people be liberated from the all-day labor. Then they could spare part of time observing and conceiving before they discovered the real secrets of nature. Time flies and so does the children’s imagination.（这段感觉是在说科技的变化而不是儿童的创造力哦）） ]* T: X, W# _

# z, Z5 `4 N) Q' X/ P: yFinally, born in a era of huge amounts of information and technology, we shall cherish the chance to do a favor to the writing of subsequent majestic history of human beings.(这段感觉跟主题不是太切合哦)
只是我的一点个人意思，希望能共同讨论，一起进步哦：）