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[活动] TOEFL 4—6月-Dark_Tournament小组写作网兜妮妮 第十一次作业 [复制链接]

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Along with the rapidly change of the whole world, we meet more challenges than before in our daily life, so it is worth to discuss how to solve a problem----using our own knowledge and experience or others advice? As to me, I always prefer to use my own experience, even though follow others advice is a good addition in solving problems.
Firstly, one can only use the skill from its own. To this point, I mean that it is necessary to build your own knowledge structure to deal with the problems. Because the hardness you meet is seldom the same your friends or parents meet, so their experience is limited or sometimes misleading the problem.
Secondly, knowledge and experience of you own can be enriched through time, when you meet a different situation; you find new ways and gained your knowledge. But advices from others are stable in the time and it is hardly worked well on your problem if you use it directly and do not digest by yourself.
Taking me for an instance, as I can not find a right way to a place, my mother's advice is always to asking a stranger for help, but sometimes they did not know the right way as well because they are just a pass-by. Imaging that I was at aboard, how can I find a man told me the right way especially in my language? So, her advice is not available all the time. To deal with this kind of problem, I always print a map with me or draw the route in my notebook; it is clear and more efficient to me to find the place. With this example, I want to say that the advice which others told you is used in a particular case sometimes, but only your own knowledge and experience can benefit you in most situation.
On the other hand, the others advice is helpful when your knowledge is not completed enough, so I say it is a good addition to your experience. But the problem is, you can not get other’s advice timely when you were in a special situation.
In short, to solve a problem, the knowledge and experience of your own is the main souse of ideas, in addition, other advices sometime can help your, but that is always not the best way.
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Along with the rapidly change of the whole world, we meet more challenges than before in our daily life, so it is worth to discuss how to solve a problem----using our own knowledge and experience or others advice? As to me, I always prefer to use my own experience, even though follow(是不是following) others advice is a good addition in solving problems.- h% Q  q; Q% @1 ~) ]( W
Firstly, one can only use the skill from its own. To this point, I mean that it is necessary to build your own knowledge structure to deal with the problems. Because the hardness you meet is seldom the same (as)your friends or parents meet(friends’ or parents’), so their experience is limited or sometimes misleading the problem(用you代替the problem是不是好些)
Secondly, knowledge and experience of you own can be enriched through time, when you meet a different situation; you find new ways and gained your knowledge.(这句话没怎么看懂?When是应该大写吗?) But advices from others are stable in the time(stable in the time???是什么意思?请赐教??) and it is hardly worked well on your problem if you use it directly and do not digest by yourself.
Taking me for an instance, as I can not find a right way to a place, my mother's advice is always to asking a stranger for help, but sometimes they did not know the right way as well because they are just a pass-by(a past-by对吗?). Imaging that I was at aboard(应该是be abroad,且是abroad,not a aboard), how can I find a man told me the right way especially in my language? So, her advice is not available all the time. To deal with this kind of problem, I always print(always print还是bring) a map with me or draw the route in(on) my notebook; it is clear and more efficient to(for) me to find the place. With this example, I want to say that the advice which others told you is used in a particular case sometimes, but only your own knowledge and experience can benefit you in most situation(s).
On the other hand, the others advice is helpful when your knowledge is not completed enough, so I say it is a good addition to your experience. But the problem is, you can not get other’s advice timely when you were in a special situation.
In short, to solve a problem, the knowledge and experience of your own is the main souse of ideas, in addition, other advices sometime can help your, but that is always not the best way.

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本帖最后由 winterscui 于 2009-3-14 22:49 编辑

Along with the rapidlychange of the whole world, we meet more challenges than before in our dailylife, so it is worth to discuss how to solve a problem----using our ownknowledge and experience or others advice? As to me, I always prefer to use myown experience, even though follow(following) others advice is a good additionin solving problems.

Firstly, one can only use the skill from its own. Tothis point, I mean that it is necessary to build your own knowledge structure todeal with the problems. Because the hardness you meet is seldom the same your friends or parents meet(是不是应该这样写the same with what your friends or friends meet), so their experience is limited or sometimes misleadingthe problem(the problem 换成 you 好些吧).

Secondly, knowledge and experience of you own can beenriched through time, when you meet a different situation; you find new waysand gained your knowledge. But advices from others are stable in the time andit is hardly worked well on your problem if you use it directly and do notdigest by yourself.(感觉和第一段的观点相似)

Taking me for an instance, as I cannot find a right way to a place, my mother's advice is always to asking astranger for help, but sometimes they did not know the right way as wellbecause they are just a pass-by. Imaging that I was at aboard(abroad), how can I find aman told me the right way especially in my language? So, her advice is notavailable all the time. To deal with this kind of problem, I always print a mapwith me(bring a map with me好些吧) or draw the route in my notebook; it is clearand more efficient to(for) me to find the place. With this example, I want tosay that the advice which others told you is used(useful) in aparticular case sometimes, but only your own knowledge and experience canbenefit you in most situation.

On the other hand, the others advice is helpful when yourknowledge is not completed enough, so I say it is a good addition to yourexperience. But the problem is, you can not get other’s advice timely when youwere in a special situation.

In short, to solve a problem, the knowledge andexperience of your own is the main souse(source) of ideas, in addition, other advices sometime can helpyour, but that is always not the best way.

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