TOEFL 4—6月Dark_Tournament写作小组 alfabita 第11次作业

alfabitaUID: 2572296

It’s better to use own knowledge and experience to solve question, or ask other people for advice?  
    In our society, we use different kinds of methods when we encounter some difficult problems. For example, some people like to ask advises from their elders, especially children and students, while others solve these difficulties by their own knowledge and experience. I believe use ones own knowledge and experience is better idea because we can improve our independent ability and have a sense of achievement when we solve questions by ourselves.     
    Firstly, we have to solve questions by ourselves in some important events. I think love is very important for all of us. We may encounter some difficult questions. At that time we have to solve these questions by ourselves, because love is between two people and we will encounter these kinds of questions a lot of times in our lifetime. We can’t ask advises from others all time in these special questions.   
   Secondly, we can improve our independent thinking ability. For example,when we doing homework, we may encounter some difficult questions. We have several options to solve these questions, like asking from our classmates or doing it by ourselves. I think we have to solve these questions by ourselves and don’t depend on our classmates, because in this way we improve our independent thinking ability.
   Most importantly, we can accumulate an unforgettable experience. I think, we easily forget the difficulty which is solved with the help of others. On the contrary, when we solving the questions by ourselves, we have to depend on ourselves and find the answers. During this time, we struggle so hard and feel alone. But after we solve the question, we have a sense of achievement and never forget this achievement.
   In conclusion, using won knowledge and experience to solve question is better idea, because we can improve unforgettable experience which is important in our future.

恩恩的囡囡UID: 2542371

It’s better to use own knowledge and experience to solve question, or ask other people for advice?  
   In our society, we use different kinds of methods when we encounter some difficult problems. For example, some people like to ask advises (advice)from their elders, especially children and students, while others solve these difficulties by their own knowledge and experience. I believe (that)use ones own knowledge and experience is a better idea because we can improve our independent ability and have a sense of achievement when we solve questions by ourselves.     2 w4 k- N6 |8 M. c' L8 b
    Firstly, we have to solve questions by ourselves in some important events. I think love is very important for all of us. We may encounter (因为前面用过encounter所以我觉得好像换一个词比较好)some difficult questions. At that time we have to solve these questions by ourselves, because love is between two people and we will encounter（同上） these kinds of questions a lot of times in our lifetime. We can’t ask advises（同上） from others all time in these special questions.   - V  S6 t0 s9 b; b/ c/ E
   Secondly, we can improve our independent thinking ability. For example,when we doing homework, we may encounter some difficult questions. We have several options to solve these questions, like asking from our classmates or doing it by ourselves. I think we have to solve these questions by ourselves and don’t depend on our classmates, because in this way we improve our independent thinking ability.
  Most importantly, we can accumulate an unforgettable experience. I think, we easily forget the difficulty which is solved with the help of others. On the contrary, when we solving the questions by ourselves, we have to depend on ourselves and find the answers. During this time, we struggle so hard and feel alone（lonely）. But after we solve the question, we have a sense of achievement and never forget this achievement.; k2 J+ s& m$ t# N' U. X- T  l
   In conclusion, using won（our own） knowledge and experience to solve questions is better idea, because we can improve unforgettable experience which is important in our future.
总的来说还不错，加油~

racheleeUID: 2610010

It’s better to use own knowledge and experience to solve question, or ask other people for advice?   In our society, we use different kinds of methods when we encounter some difficult problems. For example, some people like to ask advises from their elders, especially children and students, while others solve these difficulties by their own knowledge and experience. I believe use ones own knowledge and experience is better idea because we can improve our independent ability and have a sense of achievement when we solve questions by ourselves.      Firstly, we have to solve questions by ourselves in some important events. I think love is very important for all of us. We may encounter some difficult questions. At that time we have to solve these questions by ourselves, because love is between two people and we will encounter these kinds of questions a lot of times in our lifetime. We can’t ask advises from others all (the) time in these special questions.   , d2 N0 O. y) J4 \/ D Secondly, we can improve our independent thinking ability. For example,when we doing homework, we may encounter some difficult questions. We have several options to solve these questions, like asking(for help) from our classmates or doing it by ourselves. I think we have to(should可能更好？） solve these questions by ourselves and don’t depend on our classmates, because in this way we improve our independent thinking ability. Most importantly, we can accumulate an unforgettable experience. I think, we easily forget the difficulty which is solved with the help of others. On the contrary, when we solving the questions by ourselves, we have to depend on ourselves and find the answers. During this time, we struggle so hard and feel alone. But after we solve the question, we have a sense of achievement and never forget this achievement. In conclusion, using won knowledge and experience to solve question is （a）better idea, because we can improve unforgettable experience which is important in our future.