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Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Parents afford their children to school for the reason that they want their kids to have a appropriate circumstance to finish their education. They should kown that homework is indispensable to a student like the air to all individuals. If a child wants to attain a excellent mark , they should take daily homeworks,
because ,
though this process children can strengthen the konwledge , get a better interpretation and form a correct habit of the study.

First of all, daily homework can help students strengthen their knowledge. For instance, when a person especially a young child who want to remember a word , either chinese or English word , would confront the obstruction that they cannot remember the word exactly in a short time. Nevertheless, when they remember these words by writing them everyday, they will find that they can manager these words perfectly in a short time. This is the reason why the teachers assign abundant word-writing tasks to students everday when they just learn them.
Daily homework still have the capability of aiding students to interpret the knowledeg precisely and deeply. New knowledge will bring a new environment to the students who should sustain the pressure from study everyday. If they don’t understand and digest the new konwledge immediately, more and more questions will accumulate and the students will be torn down . Only when students finish daily homework can solve this question which is actual and pressing.
Of course , some people will claim that more homework will deepen the stress of the students. Tempt such claim might be, it is hardly true. Students attend school to study for nothing but a good future. Daily homework which arrogates more time of students can make a progress in forming a correct habit of their study instead of wasting their time. More stress from the daily homework can be transmuted into more engery , then students will not spend their spare time
playing helpless games under the
intendance of this generator---- daily homework.
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发表于 2009-3-15 21:00:02 |只看该作者
Parents afford their children to school for the reason that they want their kids to have a appropriate circumstance to finish their education. They should kown(know)that homework is indispensable to a student like the air to all individuals. If a child wants to attain a excellent mark(grade) , they should take daily homeworks, 6 g' D) F7 J, q$ y) W( [3 Q: N
because this process children can strengthen the konwledge , get a better interpretation and form a correct habit of the study.
First of all, daily homework can help students strengthen their knowledge. For instance, when a person especially a young child who want to remember a word , either chinese or English word(one) , would confront the obstruction that they cannot remember the word exactly in a short time. Nevertheless, when they remember these words by writing them everyday, they will find that they can manager these words perfectly in a short time. This is the reason why the teachers assign abundant word-writing tasks to students ever day when they just learn them.
Daily homework still have the capability of aiding students to interpret the knowledeg (knowledge)precisely and deeply. New knowledge will bring a new environment(不明白为啥是enviroment) to the students who should sustain the pressure from study everyday. If they don’t understand and digest the new konwledge immediately, more and more questions will (be accumulated)accumulate and the students will be torn down . Only when students finish daily homework can solve this question which is actual and pressing.3 l& r4 m+ ^4 w1 i' r
Of course , some people will claim that more homework will deepen the stress of the students. Tempt such claim might be, it is hardly true. Students attend school to study for nothing but a good future. Daily homework which arrogates more time of students(who) can make a progress in forming a correct habit of their study instead of wasting their time. More stress from the daily homework can be transmuted into more engery , then students will not spend their spare time playing helpless games under the intendance of this generator---- daily homework.

楼主写的不错但是有些地方偶还是没有很明白啊 互相学习大家

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发表于 2009-3-16 23:49:54 |只看该作者
Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Parents afford their children to school for the reason that they want their kids to have a appropriate circumstance to finish their education. They should know that homework is indispensable to a student like the air to all individuals. If a child wants to attain an excellent mark , they should take daily homeworks, through this process children can strengthen the konwledge ,and
get a better interpretation and form a correct habit of the study.
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First of all, daily homework can help students strengthen(
改为enrich) their knowledge. For instance, when a person especially a young child who want to remember a word , either chinese or English word , would confront the obstruction that they cannot remember the word exactly in a short time. Nevertheless, when they remember these words by writing them everyday, they will find that they can manage these words perfectly in a short time. This is the reason why the teachers assign abundant word-writing tasks to students everyday when they just learn them.
Daily homework still have the capability of aiding students to interpret the knowledeg precisely and deeply. New knowledge will bring a new environment to the students who should sustain the pressure from study everyday. If they don’t understand and digest the new konwledge immediately, more and more questions will accumulate and the students will be torn down . Only when students finish daily homework can (
加上they)solve this question which is actual and pressing.
Of course , some people will claim that more homework will deepen the stress of the students. Tempt such claim might be, it is hardly true. Students attend school to study for nothing but a good future. Daily homework which arrogates more time of students can (
help students )make a progress in forming a correct habit of their study instead of wasting their time. More stress from the daily homework can be transmuted into more engery , then students will not spend their spare time playing helpless games under the
intendance of this generator---- daily homework.

你有很多不该出现的低级错误 如单词的拼写,时态的掌握。 还有,你的句子词语的搭配不是很完美,如strengthen(改为enrich) their knowledge. 句子偏简单,有点冗繁 可能是为了凑字数 呵呵理解 我有时候也这样。继续努力!!

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