【Dark_Tournament TOEFL-ibt作文小组jackie1983的 第13次作业】

jackie1983UID: 2484456

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Drivers should pay a fee to be allowed to drive on the city streets during the time when there is the greatest amount of traffic. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.(07.1.14)

2020

disagree
1 the drivers have paid for the roads
2 charging money can't solve the problem
3 other methods should be used such as building via ducts, or subways

Should drivers pay a fee to be allowed to drive on the city streets during the time when there is a great amount of traffic? Different people may response variously according to their various experiences, characters and educational backgrounds. However, as far as I'm concerned, governments should not charge the drivers a fee when the amount of the traffic is the greatest. My reasons are as follows.

First and for the most, such a fee in the places where there are great traffic is groundless. Because, drivers have been asked to pay some money annually for their using the roads, thus they shoudn't be asked to pay this extra money. Otherwise, people will be reluctant to buy cars.

Secondly, charging drivers of money cannot solve the traffic problem. Because sometimes lots of people live in one area, and people in that area will have to use the roads near that area even if they have to pay extra money.

Last but not least, other methods should be used by the governments to solve the traffic problem of some area. For example, via ducts and subways could be build to release the traffic jam in some area.

Taking into account all the aspects discussed above, we can reach the conclusion that charging drivers extra money for using road is improper, and other ways should be take into consideration by the government.

阿秦UID: 2619567

楼主写的主题部分 明显偏少 比如第三个观点那里 举例子后 可以再对例子解释一下 这样看起来充实些
开头写了很多