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发表于 2009-4-26 21:25:23 |显示全部楼层

麻烦大家帮我看看这篇作文好么？我马上就要考试了，我已经被爱丁堡录了，但是那边要求我单项上6分，我之前考了一次，作文只有5.5，所以这次很着急，所以麻烦大家提些意见，然后帮我评评分，大概有几分，好么，谢谢了！！
作文是全是世界看同样的节目，电影，品牌好么?

Different between countries have become less evident so we can enjoy the some films, brands and TV program. To what extent do you think the advantage of this outweigh the disadvantages?

The world is undeniable involved in an apparently continuous trend towards globalization in every aspect of society. The phenomenon that we could share the same program through international media is a typical case due to globalization. Some people assert that we should curb the proliferation of this trend when considering cultural diversity and traditional values.

Personally, I believe that the opportunity of enjoying same program could generate numerous benefits. First of all, it affords people more entertainment and pleasure since people are able to embrace more channels to receive other countries' TV and radio programs. For instance, now, Hollywood blockbusters get their first screening in China within a couple of days after American premiere. Furthermore, this situation would enrich people's life and broadens people's horizons. For kids and students, they could obtain a great deal of knowledge about foreign countries and various cultures; in terms of ladies, the up-to-the-minute fashion information are more accessible, they could purchase those
world's brand products, like Channel, LV, in every corner of the world. What is more, sharing the same information would promote the communication and interaction among various countries and regions, which would remove the barriers for different cultures and reduce cultural conflicts.

Notwithstanding, regardless of its merits, the drawbacks should not be neglected. The most significant detrimental influence would be cultural homogenization. Today, in Chinese metropolises, it is commonplace that youngsters whose hair is dyed yellow or red, wearing Nike sweatshirts and Adidas shoes, with Nokia cell phones and Apple's Ipod in their hands. Traditions and social values are afflicted form globalization. This trend erodes national identities and national pride of a country. But overall, in a long term, globalization is inevitable.

In sum, enjoying same movies, brands and programs, citizens would profit from it rather than becoming victims. Meanwhile, I also support that our policy maker could take some effective measures to control the negative influence globalization possibly brought.