【Dark_Tournament TOEFL-ibt作文小组mimica的 第31次作业】

mimicaUID: 2457275

With the more and more fast-paced life in morden society, individuals are always suffering various stress from work,study, and personal affaris. How to unload this heavy mental burden and then to rebuild confidence to face next challenge? Different people may choose different ways for a relax. In my opinion, the most effective way to realeas pressure is to spend some time with friends rather than to be alone.

On one hand, communicating with the ones we familiar and trust contributes a lot in helping us feel less nervours. For instance, when we are worried about our work in this global recession, we can confide the troubles to our best friends. They may share their
relative experience to us, or suggest a travel together with us, or just listen to us queitly. No matter whatever they do, we will feel better when someone eles trusts us, supports us and shares difficulties with us. In a word, it is friends’ care and comfort that lead us to a brighter way when we encounter rough issues.

On the other hand, long-time being alone, especially when we encounter troubles and feel nervous, will make us feel even more lonely. For example, if we spend time alone when we are under pressure, such as staying at home, it is probable that we may concentrate more on troubles as nobody can help us make a diversion from them. When we enjoy ourselves in collective activity, such as shopping, having dinners or hiking with friends, there is no time to think too much about trifles.

As far as I am concerned, the most effective way to keep us from nervous is like this, face the trouble, talk about it and change opinion with friends, who may give us valuable advice or comfort us, and then forget the trouble with the accompany of others. In a word, the best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time with others instead of being alone.

网兜妮妮UID: 2612538

With the more and more fast-paced (不知道这样用地不地道，个人觉得有点怪怪的）life in morden society, individuals are always suffering various stress from work,study, and personal affaris. How to unload this heavy mental burden and then to rebuild confidence to face next challenge?（这里减轻压力和重建信心好像并不存在因果关系呀？小意见，LZ考虑下） Different people may choose different ways for a relax. In my opinion, the most effective way to realeas pressure is to spend some time with friends rather than to be alone. 6 W- T; d( U+ W On one hand, communicating with the ones we familiar （with）and trust （trust or trusted?)contributes a lot in helping us feel less nervours. For instance, when we are worried about our work in this global recession, we can confide the troubles to our best friends. They may share their  T2 relative experience to(with) us, or suggest a travel together with us, or just listen to us queitly. (觉得这里应该再展开一点）No matter whatever they do, we will feel better when someone eles trusts us, supports us and shares difficulties with us. In a word, it is friends’ care and comfort that lead us to a brighter way when we encounter rough issues. On the other hand, long-time being alone, especially when we encounter troubles and feel nervous, will make us feel even more lonely. For example, if we spend time alone when we are under pressure, such as staying at home, it is probable that we may concentrate more on troubles as nobody can help us make a diversion（这里用这个单词么？觉得不太对） from them. When we enjoy ourselves in collective activity, such as shopping, having dinners or hiking with friends, there is no time to think too much about trifles（本句有点中式）. As far as I am concerned, the most effective way to keep us from nervous is like this, face the trouble, talk about it and change opinion with friends, who may give us valuable advice or comfort us(这个观点挺好的，但没有展开论证）, and then forget the trouble with the accompany of others. In a word, the best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time with others instead of being alone. 建议 1句型再多变一点 2例子要充分论证，每个论点都有例子，每个例子都有细节！ LZ加油~~~