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本帖最后由 草木也知愁 于 2009-6-13 14:28 编辑
ISSUE13 - "Many of the world's lesser-known languages are being lost asfewer and fewer people speak them. The governments of countries in which these languages are spoken should act to prevent such languagesfrom becoming extinct."
Language is the greatest distinctionbetween humanity and other mammal animals because it enables human toexchange complex ideas and develop logical thinking. It plays animportant role in the evolutional history of human society. People indifferent areas use different languages to communicate and write downtheir own stories and history for thousands of years. But now, with therapid development of technology and economy, situation changes. Thoughbeing been listed as intangible culture heritage, thousand kinds oflesser-known language are still endangered, and even worse, severalindigenous languages have already been extinct, just like what happenedin Australia.
With the disappearing of languages may comes(come) the diminishment of cultures. Using the tool of language, our ancestors expressed their feelings orally, recorded their everyday life as well as their knowledge about the universe, and created poet(poem),novels, and other performing arts. Through years of accumulation, everynation with a unique language has a rich culture heritage. However,once a kind of language (a language) is extinct (可以用dies), we will lose the culture belonging to it forever,(感觉这里用belong to 不合适,改成 the culture it carries) since nobody could explain the meaning of it any more.(这个地方有歧义,这里it指代language,不知道会不会有指代不清之嫌。另外the meaning of language 似乎更加偏向于指语言的意义、重要性,这里想说的是语言所表达的意思,改成 understand the content of this language any more。) We now could study the philosophy of Plato and Aristotle because Greek still exists.But what if Greek had disappeared before the theory of those greatphilosophers were translated into another language? Sometimes, eventranslation could not help us to preserve a certain aspect of a culturewhen its language is lost, as for language, it is a universal principlethat each language has its unique phrases and expressions that could neverbe replaced. The translation of Chinese poetry into English demonstrates this point. (这里可以改一下,使得sometimes这一小段更好的为TS服务。Thus,we could hardly find an appropriate method to maintain this kind of culture without its own language.)
If these endangered languages are extinct(感觉这里用are extinct所表达的意思不太对劲,这个表示的是一个状态吧,而我是想表达一个动态过程,换成 die ) finally, people who are(去掉) the native speakers of such lesser-known language will also lose their social identity. The culture extinction accompanies with the languages extinction. (加个连词吧 Therefore) The loss of language equals to the loss of culture identity. Since it is the language and culture that help people define themselves(前面应该是language and culture,那么可以用 it is 吗?如果不能用,那该怎么说呢?先回避一下这个问题,改成 since language and culture help people define themselves ), those, losing their mother tongue, could hardly find their status in the society. Some Australian aborigines are such victims. The invasion of British colonizer seriously diminished the number of Australian indigenous language, leaving lots of native children speaking only English. When growing up, these Australian find they are disdained by native English speakers and also hard to get alone with the older generations who are the native indigenous language speakers. Without their own language, how could these people tell what(which) nation they belong to?
Thus, in order to protect their culture as well as help their citizens win the social status,(可以用win搭配吗?改成raise the social status) governments of countries which the endangered languages are spoken should do something (take measures) to prevent their own languages from disappearing. They should do these because it is urgent to preserve the lesser-known culture right now(这个理由说了等于没说,去掉,直接接第二个理由) , and(去掉) the government is designed to make the decision(decisions) that will benefit its citizens and (,) improve the economy as well as (, and) popularize the nation's culture. What's more,having the power to distribute (of distributing) the national fund, only government could get enough money and human resources and then accomplish such a mission.
Some may argue that the endangered lesser-known languages don't(are not) worthy of this kind of the government's protection, as fewer languages means better and clearer communications among the majority of speakers and could accelerate the development of economy. But the loss of the diversity of languages will damage the culture variety, and to some extent, it may limited(limit) people's thoughts. No fresh ideas coming about(应该不能这么说,改成 bringing in) might lead to the stop of social development, not mention to accelerate(not to mention accelerating) the global economy. Therefore, preserving their lesser-known language and promoting the communication of different culture might be the optimal choice for the governments. |
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