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Issue 13    WORDS: 627 TIMES: 01:14:50
1、        题目翻译
世界上许多不被人们所知的语言因为越来越少的人们说而逐渐消失了，该国家政府需要采取措施去阻止这些语言濒临灭绝。
2、        提纲 （大正小负）
1）        一些不为所知特殊的语言能够让说同种语言的人们形成一个集体，这个集体可以让这些居民找到自己的地位和社会等级，这些同样可以促进他们形成认知感和爱国心。
2）        一些不为人知的语言携带着这些团体独有的文化，保护这些文化也是保护祖先留给我们的文化遗产。
3）        充满神秘的语言能够吸引其他语种的人来学习认识改语言，当然学习语言的最好的环境就是在语言的发源地，这样给当地的经济肯定起到了促进的作用。
4）        然而，政府在面对社会福利以及棘手的社会问题的时候不应该利用大量珍贵的资源和设备区保存那些语言，同时，一些语言的灭绝是不可以避免的，语言障碍在当今社会会引起一系列的问题。

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3、正文
In contemporary society, numerous linguists claim that many of the world's distinct and lesser-known languages are being disappeared because fewer and fewer citizens tend to speak them. I fully sanction that the impact of the lesser-known languages have positive on many aspects, such as individuals' identity, culture and economics .On the other hand, it is unnecessary that the governments of countries have mandatory obligations to prevent such languages from becoming extinct and a multitude number of languages in the world might set into a chain of commotions in the world.

It is evidently that almost every language plays a significant role in
Individuals' identity of all walk at the lesser-known languages would help foster unique communities s of the life, and especially the less-known languages. What is meant by this is that the residents who speak the same languages would be gathered for this case. Furthermore, after the development of the specious groups, citizens could recognize their own status and strategies in the communities easily which promotes their cognitive minds and patriot. Consquencely, it seems to be reasonable that the continents of the world divide into different countries, different regions and different communities.

In terms of the unique culture, the lesser-known languages carry tremendous gem of the communities' originality culture. Therefore, by learning the traditions, mores and beliefs of the communities' culture, a sense of dignity, pride and self-worth can be founded in residents' minds which is heighten great influence on the lifetime of people. What's more, speaking the lesser-known language has a direct correlation with the reservation of the cultural heritages from ancestors. Consider, for instance, it is universally known that Chinese people in different regions in China speak different dialects, like Cantonese. These dialects---lesser known languages stem from different parts of Chinese citizens and  the main result from it is that the customs in a particular region are not alike any others .Another example----in Canada, the French Canadians would like to speak French tenaciously as their official language instead of English for the purpose to protect their originality culture.

The next is the interests of economy of countries. Such lesser-known languages are mysterious which can fascinate other language-speaking person and stimulate their desires to learn and understand these languages. Over the same period, what will happen is that quantities of people tend to learn a language in its originality environment which could attract much attention to the country and finally will promote the rapid growth of the economy by the prosperous tourism and educational industry.

Notwithstanding, even if the governments of the countries have responsibilities to protect the extinct languages, many of the worlds' lesser-known languages which are being lost is inevitable. Moreover, the governors should prefer to utilize many precious resources and equipments in society's welfares and pressing problems rather than the reservation of a lesser-know language. Similarly, with the rapid urbanization occurring everywhere, language barriers become the most stunts in the communication and commerce in the world. The United Nations regards French and English as its official languages so as to diminishing the barriers between the members in the organization as well as in the EU and OPEC. What is worthy mentioned is that languages can set into a chain of commotions, like wars and discord between different countries for the misunderstanding about languages. After all, the governments should take proper measures to protect those distinct and unique languages.

In sum, on the one hand, it is beneficial for residents to maintain the originality and distinct culture and communities by protecting many of indigenous languages, in addition, the economy of countries can be accelerated and promoted positively. However, because of some conundrums about languages in real world, the government should deal with their pressing responsibilities and the protection of lesser-known languages.

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Argument 173  
64minutes  546 words
一、题目翻译：
过去三年中我们的销量最低的几期杂志是在封面上刊登了国际新闻故事的那几期。在同一时期，与我们竞争的集中新闻刊物显著减少了刊登在封面上的国际新闻数量。而且，我们用于维持国外部报导国际新闻的费用正在增加。因此，我们应该减少对于国际新闻的强调并且避免把这类信息刊登在杂志的封面上。
二、Argument 173 提纲
1、        把杂志社过去三年销量最低的原因归咎到在封面上刊登国际新闻故事上去，显然是不明智的，导致销量低就很多种原因，首先那几期刊登的国际新闻并不吸引读者，同样在那段时间，并没有发生重大的国际新闻。其次，读者并不是因为封面上是否刊登的国际新闻故事而不买杂志的，可能因为杂志纸张质量不如从前，杂志内其他内容也没有意义 。
2、        说与我们竞争的几种新闻刊物减少了刊登在封面上的国际新闻数量，并没有说这几种新闻刊物的销量如何，可能还不如 Newsbeat杂志在封面上刊登国际新闻故事的那几期的销量。同时，并没有说与Newsbeat竞争的那几家杂志之前所在封面上刊登国际新闻数量的大小，可能明显减少了国际新闻数量，在总体上看仍然很多。
3、        因为用于维持国外部报导国际新闻的费用正在增加，Newsbeat杂志应该避免将这类消息刊登在杂志封面上也是不合理的。未曾考虑因为报导国际新闻而给杂志社带来的利益，如广告费或者因为报导吸引人的国际新闻带来销量的增加，这样即使维持国外部报导国际新闻的费用增加，杂志社付出的费用并不一定要比原来多。

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三、正文
The publisher of a newsmagazine, Newsbeat claims that their magazine should place less emphasis on international news and refrain from displaying such stories on their magazine covers for the following reasons:1) the magazine issues which were considered to be the poorest-selling over the past three years were those that featured international news stories on their front covers;2) in the meantime, their competing news-magazines have tremendously decreased the amount of cover stories that they were in favor of international news;3) with the increasing cost of maintaining their foreign bureaus to report on international news, Newsbeat should cut down the number of international news. I find this argument logically unconvincing in three critical respects.

In the first place, a direct correlation between the poorest-selling magazine issues and those that featured international news stories on their covers does not necessarily prove the latter causes the former. The reasons why those magazine issues were regarded as the poorest-selling might be connected with a variety of other factors. On the one hand, the international news stories which were reported on the front covers could not fascinate the readers’ attentions and there were little meaningful international news could be reported at that time as well. On the other hand, the readers who didn't want to buy the Newsbeat's magazines might be affected by the quality of the magazines’ papers or the other monotonous and drab contents of those magazines instead of the international news on the front covers. Therefore the author must account for all other possible factors leading the poorest-selling magazine issues.

The second problem with this argument is that the author didn't mention any precise number of the cover stories that Newsbeat's competing news-magazines devote to international news. Consquencely, if the competing news-magazines have decreased the quantities of the international news considerably, it doesn't mean that the total number of the international news overweighed the amounts of that news in Newsbeat's. What's more, sales volume which has not been recorded on the Newsbeat's competing news-magazines that they were fond of international news was much higher by contrasting to the Newsbeat's magazines. Since the publisher of Newsbeat has not provided evidence that this is the case I remain unconvinced by this newsmagazine's claim.

Thirdly, the publisher of Newsbeat relies on the unsubstantiated assumption that the cost of maintaining their foreign bureau to report on international news is increasing which has been influenced by the international news on the covers. Even if the cost of maintaining the foreign bureau would rise rapidly, the publisher of Newsbeat might ignore the possibility that the margin which would be stem from the report of the international news, such as the advertising fees and the increasing sales volume so as to the international news might exceed the cost of maintaining fees. On balance, the mere fact that the maintaining fees were influenced by the international news hardly suffices to assure me.

In sum, the argument is unconvincing as it stands. Before I can accept the publisher's claim, the argument's proponent must provide better evidence that the international news on the magazine's covers have directly correlations with the poorest sales .we would also need more information about that given the cost of maintaining foreign bureau is increasing, refraining from displaying such stories as international news is reasonable.

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6# zdcforever
难道不是这样发作文帖子的吗？