Issue 13@@A DREAM @@小组第1次作业 by kente

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第一次发作业，由于最近考试，写的很急，故质量不是很高，欢迎批评指正

The speakerasserts that the governments of countries should act to prevent their languagesfrom becoming extinct. I agree as language is the symbol for a country or aculture and thus is too valuable to be abandoned. Moreover, not only governmentbut its people should do something to save their culture.
With theglobalization, many languages of the world are becoming extinct. As English isused as the official language when people of different countries meet, manypeople tend to use English instead of their mother language more in their dailylife. With fewer and fewer people using it, the language becomes endangered.
Needless to say, alanguage means a lot to the people who speak them. It reflects its people’sintelligence and ways of viewing things. It contains words that people use toexpress their emotions. And you may hard to tell a Germany from an English justby their appearances, but once they speak, you know where they are from. Andeven you can speak a language fluently, you can’t say that you understand acountry or a people. You have to study the excellent works of the great mind,thus you will see how the language is developed, how they form their ideas andsystems of viewing the world. Until that time, you can be proud to say that youare close to those people, but just close to them.
Since the languageis so important to its people, it will surely be a great loss to human kindbecause they’ve lost a way of looking through this world. Therefore, when apeople’s language becomes extinct, the result is a diminished sense of pride,dignity, and self-worth.
So what can thegovernments of these countries do to prevent their languages from becomingextinct? Just making some announcement doesn’t seem to work. Since it’s thepeople who use these languages, the government should encourage its people touse their mother language. It seems quite awkward to protect their motherlanguage while on the other hand encourage globalization. For this case, Ithink that the government can make English their second language. I believe thatonce the government is determined to save their language, the people of thatcountry can surely come up with some brilliant ideas.
To sum up, it’sthe governments’ duty to encourage the use of their language . The people ofthose countries should also act to prevent their languages from becomingextinct. Thus the diversity of the world will remain, and it’s inspiring thatwe live in such a colorful world.

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The speaker asserts that the governments of countries should act to prevent their languages from becoming extinct. I agree that as language is the symbol (for)of a country or aculture and thus is too valuable to be abandoned. Moreover, not only governments but their people should do something to save their culture.首段点明语言的重要性，可以再点明是小语种。
With the globalization of..., many languages (of)all over the world are becoming extinct. As English is usually used as the official language when people of different countries meet, many people tend to use English more instead of their mother language (more) in their dailylife. With fewer and fewer people using it, the language becomes endangered(vt.后面要跟宾语).该段点明例如英语等大语种对小语种的威胁。
Not (Needless) to say, a language means a lot to the people who speak them. It reflects its people’s intelligence and ways of viewing things. It contains words that people use to express their emotions. And you may hard to tell a German(y) from an English just by their appearances, but once they speak, you know where they are from. And even you can speak a language fluently, you can’t say that you understand a country or a people. You have to study the excellent works of the great minds,thus you will see how the language is developed, how they form their ideas and systems of viewing the world. Not Until that time, you can be proud to say that you are close to those people, but just close to them.
Since the language is so important to its people, it will surely be a great loss (是不是应该点明是因为小语种逐渐消失所以。。。后面的because里的也是这个的结果)to human kind because they’ve lost a way of looking through this world. Therefore, when a people’s language becomes extinct, the result is a diminished sense of pride,dignity, and self-worth.排比的用得好
So what can the governments of these countries do to prevent their languages from becoming extinct? Just making some announcements doesn’t seem to work. Since it’s the people （who）that 强调句 use these languages, the government should encourage its people to use their mother language. It seems quite awkward for the government(encourge要主语) to protect their mother language while （on the other hand）the same time encourage globalization. For this case, I think that the government can make English their second language. I believe that once the government is determined to save their language, the people of that country can surely come up with some brilliant ideas（用的好）.
To sum up, it’s the governments’ duty to encourage the use of their language . The people of those countries should also act to prevent their languages from becoming extinct. Thus the diversity of the world will remain, and it’s inspiring that we live in such a colorful world.

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改的这么仔细，辛苦了