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考试时间：2009.8.8

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It is better to make friends with intelligent people than with people who have a good sense of humor （06.12.16 & 08.1.5）

people without friends are like flowers without sunshine, while friends without sense of humor is like fish without water. A great many of people hold the opinion that we had better make friends with intelligent people than with a humorous friends, for smart person will make us learn more skills from them and inspire us thought profoundly. Contrary to the opinion of numerous people, is my heartfelt  agreement with the idea that make friends with people who have a sense of humor is indispensable.

It is goes without saying that we saty with a humorous person, who will bring a great amount of enjoyment and rapture. They even can courage us in some special manner. we can take a glance at a common example, my intimate, Mark who is fill with humorous cells at every pore and I always willing to accompanying with him due to he can make me forget diverse troubles and tedious trivias with his homorous talent. Like last time, I was falling to a chemistry examination and felt so depressed. while nothing was taking to me , he just acted as a cock and voicing: brave birds you can get achievement if you stick on flying. With his interesting encouragement, I as rebirth and obtain new couragement in my chemistryl study. In short, I am fortunate have a hormous friends as Mark, my life is full of sunshine and never have depression.

Another point worthy mentioning is a friend with the sense of humor is just express that who with a intelligence ability. As we know, pople who  have a amusement capacity reveals they have a agile brain to get to know various areas. Virtually, while humorous people make others laughing invariably is unconsciously, the gift that is they innately endowed with. They could easy translate all the problems or some boring things into a light-hearted manner and always construct enjoyable atmosphere by their expceptional intelligence. It is no exaggerating to say that friends with sense of humor equals with even more intellgence.

considerable though the advantages of make friends with interesting people enjoy are, it doesn't mean we can live under the illusion that make friends with intelligent people have nothing to us, if their wise thought and deal with things ability are taken into consideration. To some extent, make friends with intelligent people might be also bring some benefits to us.

Though there may be one or two merits of intelligent friends, i believe that the benefits from make friends with sense of humor epople is more obvious, for pradise is just a place where we can get on with humorous friends eternal.

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my essay as the following:

Ithas been said, “Not everything that is learned is contained in

books.”Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience

withknowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source

ismore important? Why?

When people comes tochoose which one is the main source of their knowledge, the answers may differ.I concede the importance of books. Actually, just as what some people deem, thebooks, which plays a role as a good friend of us from childhood to the academicpeak, is indispensable for the huge volume of knowledge. However, theexperience is more important in this changing era when only through activitiesand practice can gain the real knowledge on the road to be successful.


I concede that booksare important tools for students, or senior scholars to acquire knowledge. Itprovides volume of knowledge and collections of information for us to obtainand learn. People may think books are reliable and a good instruction to beavailable when we are not acknowledged enough to experience in the real world.But books is too theoretical to learn more, compared with other methods andchannels.

On the contrary,experience, other than knowledge from books, are mainly from people’s labor andactive involvement in the job position and formed by his/her own practice. Itshares the advantages which will not be acquired on books only. There are acouple of advantages of experience through practise.
On the one hand, experience will be moresuitable to discover one’s advantage by oneself. For example, student can moreaccurately orientate himself and his future by practice while reading books canreally know little. Also scientist may find the keys of bottleneck by doingexperiments and observation by the venue but not delving in books only.

On the other hand,experience can increase knowledge and breed more people's wisdom. In the era ofmodern technology and quick development , people can fulfill their dream bytheir practice which is totally different from the works of old generations.Thus as we can expect, experience will greatly prompt the world’s progress andreclaim new field of research and progress instead of doing the works frombooks.

Moreover, from thescope of human history, there is a record of progress through continuous effortmade through practice. Such practice provides much space for human to figureout the possibility of our dream. It is experience that makes knowledgeaccumulated. So books are merely the medium to record human's experience whileexperience itself is more precious.

So in short, Igreatly agree with the importance of human experience and the function. It ismore precious for the practitioner himself/herself, and also for human'sdevelopment, especially when books' use is limited in the era of informationtechnology.

my comments:
It is better to make friends with intelligent people than with people who have a good sense of humor （06.12.16 & 08.1.5）
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a humorous person, who will bring sitting with a humorous person will bring agreat amount of enjoyment and rapture. They even can encourage us in somespecial manner. we can take a glance at a common example, my intimate,Mark who is fill with humorous cells at every pore and I always willingto accompanying with him due to he can make me forget diverse troublesand tedious trivias with his homorous talent. Like last time, I wasfalling to failed a chemistry examination and felt so depressed. while nothingwas taking to me , he just acted as a cock and voicing: brave birds youcan get achievement if you stick on flying. With his interestingencouragement, I as rebirth and obtain new couragement in my chemistrylstudy. In short, I am fortunate have a hormous friends as Mark, my lifeis full of sunshine and never have depression.
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Another point worthy mentioning is a friend with the sense of humor isjust express that who with a intelligence ability. As we know, peoplewho  have an amusement capacity reveals they have a agile brain to getto know various areas. Virtually, while humorous people make otherslaughing invariably is unconsciously, the gift that is they innatelyendowed with. They could easy easily translate all the problems or some boringthings into a light-hearted manner and always construct enjoyableatmosphere by their expceptional intelligence. It is no exaggerating precise用肯定态比较好tosay that friends with sense of humor equals with even more intellgence.
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半夜了，就改了点语句的语法，有点仓促。个人觉得本文被动态可以多用一些，以减少过多主观态度感。