看到ETS范文里有一篇5分文章不超过400字

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到底是看不看字数啊




"Wisdom is rightfully attributed not to people who know what to look for in life but to people who know what to overlook."



Never before in history have people been so beset with the overflow of ideas and images that the modern human must endure.
We are constantly bombarded with news, advertising, and entertainment, so much so that we are often at a loss as to where we should focus our attention.
This has lead to what many media critics have called "information anxiety," a term used to describe the paralysis the ordinary human experiences when attempting to organize and synthesize the vast amounts of data that move past her everyday.
Now, more than ever before, it can be seen that wisdom truly is attributable to those "who know what to overlook."

The Internet is a good example of the effects of information overload on people.
Many people receive hundreds of email messages a day, yet there is no possible way for them to respond, let alone read, all of these messages.
Through practice they learn to pick out what will be of interest and to ignore the rest.
A similar phenomena occurs when a person is "browsing the web."
Information, both trivial and profound, float by in a disorganized way.
A person learns to ignore what is not relevant to their search.
This is easily demonstrated by watching a person new to the Internet next to someone who is a veteran of the net.
The new person will stumble on loads of irrelevant information while the veteran will most likely proceed to the information she seeks.
This ability to overlook useless information is not only applicable to the net; consider the older but more established form of information known as the book.

Ever since Guttenberg rolled out his first few pages from his press humans have been wondering how to synthesize all this knowledge.
Each year more and more books are written and published, more and more information is available to the public through bookstores and libraries, and each year the average person must struggle harder to find what she needs to know..
This is one of the primary reasons people are sent to college:
they are taught how to access and research information they need.

It is only through experience that one understands how to overlook useless data.
This is most likely what the author of the above quote meant.

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可欲而不可求。。。

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请看此帖：
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=923452&highlight=

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3# 草木也知愁

谢谢~我知道传递信息量的重要性

可是这篇文章也没有全面分析啊，只是举了一个例子 引用了一句话

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你去看看这个之后的comments 然后对应评分标准

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5# 草木也知愁
COMMENTARY
This response presents a well-developed analysis of the issue.
Beginning with a strong description of the current state of information overload, the first paragraph provides a context for the issue and takes a clear position agreeing with the stated claim.  The Internet example is well chosen and well developed, clearly supporting the point that wisdom involves learning to ignore what is not relevant.  The reference to books reinforces this position but does little to advance the argument or add insightful analysis.  The conclusion restates an earlier point, adding little to the analysis.
Despite a few instances of imprecise reference (e.g., "this has" and "all this knowledge"), the argument is presented clearly and coherently, meriting a score of 5.  To earn a higher score, the response would need to develop a more thoughtful analysis of the issue.
还是不太明白， commentary似乎只肯定了internet的例子
另外黑体字部分也是我的一个疑惑， 就是conclusion是重申观点，还是深化主题呢？ 如果深化主题，
会不会写成一个未经论证的论点？

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conclusion可以再原有基础上去深化 但是不能提出之前没有的东西来


所谓范文，是一个让我们更好理解评分标准的工具
一切的准备，一切的评判，都要以评分标准为基线，是就是，不是就不是
无论我们说他们多无良，但是必须肯定一点：ETS是一个公正机构，规则制定之后就回去严格执行，不会让潜规则去主导给分
有人说官方范文是ETS写的，有的人说不是，ETS从来没有正面承认过是他们自己写的
但是有一点我们可以完全确定，comments是他们写的
那里有他们的倾向与厌恶 那里才是他们自己的话

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但是有一点我们可以完全确定，comments是他们写的
那里有他们的倾向与厌恶 那里才是他们自己的话

说的真好，白羊男

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但是有一点我们可以完全确定，comments是他们写的
那里有他们的倾向与厌恶 那里才是他们自己的话

说的真好，白羊男
xueyi 发表于 2009-8-25 22:54

今天是勋章系统测试...

我是射手

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yeah，阿拉也是，狂爱射手~~~~虽然也很喜欢白羊~~~~
话说这个章子怎么才能入手呢？
BTY，从人大西门到鼎钧要走多长时间呢？恩，本人步伐比较慢~
再啰嗦几句，当年俺也很喜欢潇湘的柳絮词，所以一直以为草木斑是一美女。外加头像曾在俺某个同学的博客中见到，还以为是他女朋友……
您老哪个学校的？改天去瞻仰下校门，毕竟横空杀出一伟大的斑竹啊，呵呵呵 9# 草木也知愁