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Argument65 outline

In this argument, the arguer concludes that to increase profits in all of our stores is to concentrate primarily on domestic cheeses and to stop many of our varieties of imported cheese. To substantiate the conclusion, the arguer cites the example of five best-selling cheeses at the newest store were all domestic cheddar cheeses from Wisconsin. In addition, the arguer assumes that a recent survey by Cheeses of the World magazine shows an increasing preference for domestic cheeses among its subscribers. This argument is unconvincing for several critical flaws.

1.        The argument is based on a hasty generalization. The fact only in one store of the chains that five best-selling cheeses were all domestic cheddar cheeses from Wisconsin doesn’t has representation. It is unreasonable to conclude that all of the stores is to concentrate on domestic cheeses
2.        In the second place, although the Wisconsin monopolizes the first five best-selling, no evidence given to manifest that it has advantages than other kinds of cheeses on quality or on taste, may it is a local produce which have advantage for adverting.
3.        In addition, the reason that subscribes the Cheeses of the World magazine can get a certain discount when they buy domestic cheeses. Then, not all the subscribe feedback the questionnaire, so this survey not reflect truly percentage. Price of cheeses is also a primary factor for the market; it is possible that the import cheeses will decrease the price for attracting customs.   

To sum up, the conclusion lacks credibility because the evidence cited in the analysis does not lend strong support to what the arguer maintains. To make it logically acceptable, the arguer would have to demonstrate that the best-selling cheeses in each store of chains were mostly occupied by domestic cheeses, In addition, combining strategy of providers and tendency of consumption will be more convincing