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发表于 2005-7-21 18:34:00 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
Is it a very rare case that the choice is absence? As for this topic, I fundamentally agree with the speaker's claim that the absence of choice is a rare circumstance. Whereas, it is important to acknowledge that there is also certain circumstance under which we have no choice for it involves one's duty, morality and so forth.

To begin with, the first reason why I agree with this claim relies on the fact that nowadays people owns more and more choices than before owing to the rapid and significant development of modern technology and science. The highly developed technology and science brings about marvelous achievements which enable one have more opportunities to choose between different things to attain the goal or reach the destination. Take the advancement in transportation as an example, people living in ancient time will have no other choice but by ship, by horse or just by foot in order to go around the world. However, today many transportation innovations such as airplane, train and so forth serve as various choices for one planning to travel around. In fact, choice is made by oneself and hence depends on personal will. At most time, one can make choice as long as he would like to this. One can choose the lifestyle to live, the professional job to take and so forth. In other words, choice is ubiquitous especially in modern time.     

On the other hand, sometimes it is the fear of making mistakes and facing up disdain from surrounding people that makes one withdraw in the moment of decision. Some ones claim that they have no choice but only to do in their way, while the real situation may not be the same as he complains. An aptly illustrated example may involve the Copernicus's heliocentric theory. Most people were afraid of the contemporary strong oppression of religious community who fervently advocates that earth is the center of the whole universe. Therefore, they saw no choice as for the topic about the center of universe. Therefore, fear keeps one from choosing whereas the choices indeed exist at the same time.

Whereas the moment when one actually has no choice does exist, especially when this choice has to do with one's duty to the society, morality in oneself, ethics influencing the family or surrounding people, and so forth. As member of the whole society, one has to hold accountable to t his own actions and do his own duty to the society without any other choice. It is only when everyone consciously obeys the rule and law, does one's own duty, acts something which does not contract with the standards of morality and ethics that can the whole society's well-being and healthy advancement be assured. Consider, for instance, everyone has to pay the tax without choice for it is a social member's duty; Or consider, for instance, parent has to bring up their children without choice because it is their responsibility; Also consider, for instance, wife or husband has to be honesty to each other without choice or else it may cause ethics problems. In either event, the circumstance without choice also exists.

To sum up, people faces more and more choices which ensured by the external technological conditions as well as one's own will, nonetheless one also encounter some particular circumstance under which there is no alternative decision. It is also possible that one has to do so and choice is only illusion.

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发表于 2005-7-21 18:58:11 |只看该作者
Is it a very rare case that the choice is absence? As for this topic, I fundamentally agree with the speaker's claim that the absence of choice is a rare circumstance. Whereas, it is important to acknowledge that there is also certain circumstance under which we have no choice for it involves one's duty, morality and so forth.

To begin with, the first reason why I agree with this claim relies on the fact that nowadays people owns more and more choices than before owing to the rapid and significant development of modern technology and science. The highly developed technology and science brings about marvelous achievements which enable one have more opportunities to choose between different things to attain the goal or reach the destination. Take the advancement in transportation as an example, people living in ancient time will have 过去时 no other choice but by ship, by horse or just by foot in order to go around the world. However, today many transportation innovations such as airplane, train and so forth serve as various choices for one planning to travel around. In fact, choice is made by oneself and hence depends on personal will. At most time, one can make choice as long as he would like to this.去掉 One can choose the lifestyle to live, the professional job to take and so forth. In other words, choice is ubiquitous especially in modern time.     

On the other hand, sometimes it is the fear of making mistakes and facing up disdain from surrounding people that makes one withdraw in the moment of decision. Some ones someone claim that they have no choice but only to do in their way, while the real situation may not be the same as he complains. An aptly illustrated example may involve the Copernicus's heliocentric theory. Most people were afraid of the contemporary strong oppression of religious community who fervently advocates that earth is the center of the whole universe. Therefore, they saw no choice as for the topic about the center of universe. Therefore, fear keeps one from choosing whereas the choices indeed exist at the same time.恐惧导致,很不错的原因

Whereas the moment when one actually has no choice does exist, especially when this choice has to do with one's duty to the society, morality in oneself, ethics influencing the family or surrounding people, and so forth. 好长的TS,看不太懂As member of the whole society, one has to hold accountable to t his own actions and do his own duty to the society without any other choice. It is only when everyone consciously obeys the rule and law, does one's own duty, acts something which does not contract with the standards of morality and ethics that can the whole society's well-being and healthy advancement be assured. Consider, for instance, everyone has to pay the tax without choice for it is a social member's duty; Or consider, for instance, parent has to bring up their children without choice because it is their responsibility; 这个父母抚养子女的例子和选择无关吧,这是责任啊Also consider, for instance, wife or husband has to be honesty to each other without choice or else it may cause ethics problems. In either event, the circumstance without choice also exists. 确实存在没有选择余地的情况。
To sum up, people faces more and more choices which ensured by the external technological conditions as well as one's own will, nonetheless one also encounter some particular circumstance under which there is no alternative decision. It is also possible that one has to do so and choice is only illusion. 这是另一个ISS的题目吧:D

思路清晰,语言丰富,B3段的例子不是很合适,没有选择余地的情况很多,仔细想想

如果能在45mins内写出这篇文章,真的是蛮不错的
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发表于 2005-7-21 19:15:00 |只看该作者
Is it a very rare case that the choice is absence? As for this topic, I fundamentally agree with the speaker's claim that the absence of choice is a rare circumstance. Whereas, it is important to acknowledge that there is also certain circumstance under which we have no choice for it involves one's duty, morality and so forth 第一次

To begin with, the first reason why I agree with this claim relies on the fact that nowadays people owns more and more choices than before owing to the rapid and significant development of modern technology and science. The highly developed technology and science brings about marvelous achievements which enable one have 词组: 是enable sb to do sth, 还是enable sb do sthmore opportunities to choose between different things to attain the goal or reach the destination. Take the advancement in transportation as an example, people living in ancient time will have no other choice but by ship, by horse or just by foot in order to go around the world. However, today many transportation innovations such as airplane, train and so forth第二次 serve as various choices for one planning to travel around. In fact, choice is made by oneself and hence depends on personal will. At most time, one can make choice as long as he would like to this. One can choose the lifestyle to live, the professional job to take and so forth第三次. In other words, choice is ubiquitous especially in modern time.     

On the other hand, sometimes it is the fear of making mistakes and facing up disdain from surrounding people that makes one withdraw in the moment of decision. Some ones claim that they have no choice but only to do in their way, while the real situation may not be the same as he complains. An aptly illustrated example may involve the Copernicus's heliocentric theory. Most people were afraid of the contemporary strong oppression of religious community who fervently advocates that earth is the center of the whole universe. Therefore, they saw no choice as for the topic about the center of universe. Therefore, fear keeps one from choosing whereas the choices indeed exist at the same time.

这个例子似乎有点牵强

Whereas the moment when one actually has no choice does exist, especially when this choice has to do with one's duty to the society, morality in oneself, ethics influencing the family or surrounding people, and so forth 第四次. As member of the whole society, one has to hold accountable to t his own actions and do his own duty to the society without any other choice. It is only when everyone consciously obeys the rule and law, does one's own duty, acts something which does not contract with the standards of morality and ethics that can the whole society's well-being and healthy advancement be assured. Consider, for instance, everyone has to pay the tax without choice for it is a social member's duty; Or consider 请问用了好几个consider是什么用法?不懂~~, for instance, parent has to bring up their children without choice because it is their responsibility; Also consider, for instance, wife or husband has to be honesty to each other without choice or else it may cause ethics problems. In either event, the circumstance without choice also exists.

To sum up, people faces more and more choices which ensured by the external technological conditions as well as one's own will, nonetheless one also encounter some particular circumstance under which there is no alternative decision. It is also possible that one has to do so and choice is only illusion

大体思路是说, choices 变的越来越多,但是为什么倒数第二段说,还是存在只有一种choice的情况呢?请问楼主究竟赞不赞成主题说的? 行文比较流畅,结构也比较清晰~~ and  so forth 可以换成别的诸如: and so on, etc.
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发表于 2005-7-22 19:47:29 |只看该作者
谢谢Lyon_tony 和硬柿子的修改^^

我也觉得第二段的例子似乎有些牵强的说,不过还没想到更好的例子 汗-_-!
我对这个题目的观点是大正小负,所以前两段说的是选择机会多,后面用一段来说某些时候没有选择。可能是我开头没有写好,所以观点不清楚。。
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发表于 2005-7-24 23:12:24 |只看该作者
Is it a very rare case that the choice is absence? As for this topic, I fundamentally agree with the speaker's claim that the absence of choice is a rare circumstance. Whereas, it is important to acknowledge that there is also certain circumstance under which we have no choice for it involves one's duty, morality and so forth.

To begin with, the first reason why I agree with this claim relies on the fact that nowadays people owns more and more choices than before owing to the rapid and significant development of modern technology and science. The highly developed technology and science brings about marvelous achievements which enable one have more opportunities to choose between different things to attain the goal or reach the destination. Take the advancement in transportation as an example, people living[lived] in ancient time will[would] have no other choice but by ship, by horse or just by foot in order to go around the world. However, today many transportation innovations such as airplane, train and so forth serve as various choices for one planning to travel around. In fact, choice is made by oneself and hence depends on personal will. At most time, one can make choice as long as he would like to this. One can choose the lifestyle to live, the professional job to take and so forth. In other words, choice is ubiquitous especially in modern time.     

On the other hand, sometimes it is the fear of making mistakes and facing up disdain from surrounding people that makes one withdraw in the moment of decision. Some ones claim that they have no choice but only to do in their way, while the real situation may not be the same as he complains. An aptly illustrated example may involve the Copernicus's heliocentric theory. Most people were afraid of the contemporary strong oppression of religious community who fervently advocates that earth is the center of the whole universe. Therefore, they saw no choice as for the topic about the center of universe. Therefore, fear keeps one from choosing whereas the choices indeed exist at the same time.

Whereas the moment when one actually has no choice does exist, especially when this choice has to do with one's duty to the society, morality in oneself, ethics influencing the family or surrounding people, and so forth. As member of the whole society, one has to hold accountable to t his own actions and do his own duty to the society without any other choice. It is only when everyone consciously obeys the rule and law, does one's own duty, acts something which does not contract with[这里是用来表示影响的意思吗?] the standards of morality and ethics that can the whole society's well-being and healthy advancement be assured. Consider, for instance, everyone has to pay the tax without choice for it is a social member's duty; Or consider, for instance, parent has to bring up their children without choice because it is their responsibility; Also consider, for instance, wife or husband has to be honesty to each other without choice or else it may cause ethics problems. In either event, the circumstance without choice also exists.

To sum up, people faces more and more choices which ensured by the external technological conditions as well as one's own will, nonetheless one also encounter some particular circumstance under which there is no alternative decision. It is also possible that one has to do so and choice is only illusion.
[文章条理很清楚,不过感觉有些句式,短语有点重复了,可以适当多样化。有兴趣看看我的https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=305021]
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RE: issue136 选择问题 谢谢拍砖^^ [修改]

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