issue136(同主题,灌水太高兴了差点忘了作文,汗!)

逗逗UID: 173558

136."The absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare."
基本同意
1 日常生活中我们时时面临多种选择
2人们所谓的没有选择实际上是为这种情况附加了标准
A）        民族责任和法律约束 不得不服从唯一选择
B）        选择很多但是不合意，不愿选择
C）        作出选择很困难以至没有选择
3理论上存在没有选择的情况会被外界因素所干扰而难实现

In reality, absence of choice is definitely a rare circumstance. Along with booming development of our society, people actually face with an increasing number of choices. The situation of no choice is just theoretically exists and turn out to be people’s illusion due to the aberration of their feeling.

People are required to select among various choices through their lives, either for trifling things or for significant decisions. In everyday life, housewives need to decide what to prepare for meals and pick up these kinds of food among numerous homogenous stuffs characterized by diverse brands, appearances and prices in the supermarket. Likewise, during holidays, family members may make choices between enjoying sunlight at the beach and camping in cool woods. When it comes to important decisions, a high school graduate are able to choose among several colleges he is longing for by comparing their difference including   tuition, location, majors and so on. When a company leader is about to invest in risky programs, he makes tradeoffs between alternative ones according to cost-benefit analysis. As a matter of fact, people come across a great deal of choices when making decisions.

People sometimes claim that they have “no choice “ only because they have imposed additional criteria on such circumstance. Firstly, social accountability and legal duty tend to leave them only one choice even there are more. Soldiers have to fight against enemies when their nation has subsided into jeopardy by foreign encroachment, even they can choose the otherwise. Owing to legal restriction, a citizen pays income taxes regularly even he or she is not willing to do so. Secondly, even people are provided with abundant choices, they may equate them to “no choice” because they all seem undesirable. A job finder considers himself unemployed since there is no “suitable” job. In fact, he would have find one easily if he had received current wage rate. Thirdly, people are likely to mistake difficulties to make choices for no choice. On one hand, “too many choices amount to no choice”. If there are a great deal of attractive preferences, people are apt to have problem figuring out which they like best and end up with no choice. On another hand, uncertainty of negative consequence always leaves people with “no choice”, which render a few to rely on their fate to make choice.

Theoretically, circumstance of no choice do exist within a completely ideal condition, yet, external factors in real world have reduced and eliminated such phenomenon. Taking market economy for example, if it is perfect competitive, the price of any goods and services are determined by "invisible hand" as a result of interaction between supply and demand. Thus, both producers and consumers have no choice but to accept the clearing price. In effect, however, there is usually a gap between the supply and demand posed by government interference. Hence, producers and consumers are entitled rights to adjust the price flexibility within a certain band. So exterior factors often prevent circumstance that is theoretically established from coming true.

To sum up, regardless of theoretical models which may substantiate the situation of no selection and people's misunderstanding of the real meaning of no choice, everyday experience tell us that the absence of choice is a circumstance that is scarce indeed.

tz0412UID: 180794

In reality, absence of choice is definitely a rare circumstance. Along with booming development of our society, people actually face with an increasing number of choices. The situation of no choice is(is 去掉，后面有谓语了） just theoretically exists and turn out to be people’s illusion due to the aberration of their feeling.

People are required to select among various choices through their lives, either for trifling things or for significant decisions. In everyday life（in our dalily life是否更好？） , housewives need to decide what to prepare for meals and pick up these kinds of food among numerous homogenous stuffs characterized by diverse brands, appearances and prices in the supermarket. Likewise, during holidays, family members may（need to ?) make choices between enjoying sunlight at the beach and camping in cool woods. When it comes to （making，加上making是否更贴切呢？）important decisions, a high school graduate are able to choose among several colleges he is longing for by comparing their difference including   tuition, location, majors and so on. When a company leader is about to invest in risky programs, he makes tradeoffs between alternative ones according to cost-benefit analysis. As a matter of fact, people come across a great deal of choices when making decisions.

People sometimes claim that they have “no choice “ only because they have imposed additional criteria on such circumstance. Firstly, social accountability and legal duty tend to leave them only one choice even there are more. Soldiers have to fight against enemies when their nation has subsided into jeopardy by foreign encroachment, even they can choose the otherwise. Owing to legal restriction, a citizen pays income taxes regularly even he or she is not willing to do so. Secondly, even （应该写even if八？ 前面有几处也是一样）people are provided with abundant choices, they may equate them to “no choice” because they all seem undesirable. A job finder considers himself unemployed since there is no “suitable” job. In fact, he would have find one easily if he had received (accepted？） current wage rate. Thirdly, people are likely to mistake difficulties to make choices for no choice. On one hand, “too many choices amount to no choice”. If there are a great deal of attractive preferences, people are apt to have problem figuring out which they like best and end up with no choice. On another hand, uncertainty of negative consequence always leaves people with “no choice”, which render a few to rely on their fate to make choice.

Theoretically, circumstance of no choice do exist within a completely ideal condition, yet, external factors in real world have reduced and eliminated such phenomenon. Taking market economy for example, if it is perfect competitive, the price of any goods and services are determined by "invisible hand" as a result of interaction between supply and demand. Thus, both producers and consumers have no choice but to accept the clearing price. In effect, however, there is usually a gap between the supply and demand posed by government interference. Hence, producers and consumers are entitled rights to adjust the price flexibility（flexibly?) within a certain band. So exterior factors often prevent circumstance that is theoretically established from coming true.

To sum up, regardless of theoretical models which may substantiate the situation of no selection and people's misunderstanding of the real meaning of no choice, everyday experience tell us that the absence of choice is a circumstance that is scarce indeed.

觉得文章的结构很不错，各段的逻辑顺序比较合理。
不知道楼主有没有时间拍拍我的文章亚？:lol   https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... ge=1&highlight=

[ Last edited by tz0412 on 2005-7-23 at 14:02 ]

逗逗UID: 173558

谢谢楼上的修改

偶一直没搞清楚如何才能做到深入论证,希望得到大家的指点啊?

Lyon_TonyUID: 178961

136."The absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare."
基本同意
1 日常生活中我们时时面临多种选择
2人们所谓的没有选择实际上是为这种情况附加了标准
A）        民族责任和法律约束 不得不服从唯一选择
B）        选择很多但是不合意，不愿选择
C）        作出选择很困难以至没有选择
3理论上存在没有选择的情况会被外界因素所干扰而难实现

In reality, absence of choice is definitely 这是个很绝对的词，和你的rare矛盾a rare circumstance. Along with booming development of our society, people actually face with an increasing number of choices. The situation of no choice is just theoretically exists and turn out to be people’s illusion due to the aberration 失常？换个词of their feeling.

People are required to select among various choices through in their lives, either for trifling things or for significant decisions. In everyday life, housewives need to decide what to prepare for meals and pick up these kinds of food among numerous homogenous stuffs characterized by diverse brands, appearances and prices in the supermarket. Likewise, during holidays, family members may make choices between enjoying sunlight at the beach and camping in cool woods. When it comes to important decisions, a high school graduate are able to choose among several colleges which he is longing for by comparing their difference including   tuition, location, majors and so on. When a company leader is about to invest in risky programs, he makes tradeoffs between alternative ones according to cost-benefit analysis. As a matter of fact,好久没见这个句子了 people come across a great deal of choices when before  making decisions.
不错


People sometimes claim that they have “no choice “ only because they have imposed additional criteria requirement on such circumstance. Firstly, social accountability and legal duty tend to leave them only one choice even there are more. Soldiers have to fight against enemies when their nation has subsided into jeopardy by foreign encroachment, even they can choose the otherwise. Owing to legal restriction, a citizen pays income taxes regularly even he or she is not willing to do so. Secondly, even people are provided with abundant choices, they may equate them to “no choice” because they all seem undesirable. A job finder considers himself unemployed since there is no “suitable” job. In fact, he would have find one easily if he had received current wage rate. Thirdly, people are likely to mistake difficulties to make choices for no choice. On one hand,这个是和哪个并列看不出来，你前面有1 2 3 “too many choices amount to no choice”. If there are a great deal of attractive preferences, people are apt to have problem figuring out which they like best and end up with no choice. On another hand, uncertainty of negative consequence always leaves people with “no choice”, which render a few to rely on their fate to make choice.
最后一个论证的结构不是很清晰，其他的都很好


Theoretically, circumstance of no choice do exist within a completely ideal condition, yet, external factors in real world have reduced and eliminated such phenomenon. Taking market economy for example, if it is perfect competitive, the price of any goods and services are determined by "invisible hand" as a result of interaction between supply and demand. Thus, both producers and consumers have no choice but to accept the clearing price. In effect, however, there is usually a gap between the supply and demand posed by government interference. Hence, producers and consumers are entitled rights to adjust the price flexibility within a certain band. So exterior factors often prevent circumstance that is theoretically established from coming true.很好的论证段，可是我不知道“无形的手”到底是怎么回事，到底能不能说明没有选择的情况是存在的


To sum up, regardless of theoretical models which may substantiate the situation of no selection and people's misunderstanding of the real meaning of no choice, everyday experience tell us that the absence of choice is a circumstance that is scarce indeed.

比我的那片还多一个观点----没有选择的情况确实存在，只是ideal condition.我不懂你那个无形的手，所以没法说你的B3 是不是有说服力，但是b1b2都很好（其实跟我的差不多:lol）

你的文章写得很好了

赞以下，开始限时写吧

echostateUID: 194935

过后给你改。我还没写这篇呢。
不过我看了一遍你的文章。有一个问题：理想情况下，价格是供求决定的？谁告诉你的哦^O^高中政治课都学过啊~~~供求只是“影响”因素，非决定因素，决定因素是蕴涵在商品之后的劳动量~~~~：P

万一判卷的懂经济，看到这个会不会先b4一下呢？

逗逗UID: 173558

Originally posted by echostate at 2005-7-23 20:11
过后给你改。我还没写这篇呢。
不过我看了一遍你的文章。有一个问题：理想情况下，价格是供求决定的？谁告诉你的哦^O^高中政治课都学过啊~~~供求只是“影响”因素，非决定因素，决定因素是蕴涵在商品之后的劳动量 ...

不好意思 我是学经济的,我的前提是完全竞争市场,高中政治?马克思的忠实跟随者:L

mkb57288UID: 2105771

小弟也是学经济的，觉得楼主的B3该修改一下，还是借用经济的例子：
The completely homogeneous commodities, which leave consumers only one choice, do exist in the assumption in economic theory, while in real world, the pressure from competition drives firms to offer various commodities or services.

楼主的语言小弟就不动砖了，相当的流畅，只是可能有几处小瑕疵，可能是限时造成的
大的逻辑框架上来说，开头和B1的衔接还是有一点欠缺，最重要的问题还是B3的论证力量不足，现在这么写比较模糊

评说如有不当，还往见谅

[ Last edited by mkb57288 on 2005-8-18 at 22:27 ]