issue150 比想象中的要困难呢，请多指教，谢谢，目标0829

夜一UID: 2130338

本来以为是一片比较简单得issue，想起来似乎没什么困难的。哪知道写起来就完全不一样了，本来在45分钟内是差不多写完了，一看字数却才300出头，于是大汗。。
就是写不出来呢
后来再word里又改了半天，勉强弄出429个词。。。
哎，路漫漫其修远兮——

Issue150  第1篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：52分0秒     325 words
从2005年7月21日17时24分到2005年7月21日18时52分
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Because of television and worldwide computer connections, people can now become familiar with a great many places that they have never visited. As a result, tourism will soon become obsolete.
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Because of television and worldwide computer connections, people can get information about a great many places that they have never visited, and even become familiar with these places. It is assumed that tourism will soon become obsolete, yet I can hardly agree with this assumption.

First of all, no evidence today indicates that the development of tourism is threatened by television or worldwide computer connections. It is said that information coming form television and internet reduce people's curiosity and make tourism unnecessary. Whereas, tourism is not just getting visual or literal information about a certain place, but includes breathing the air, walking down the street, touching the stream, meeting interesting people, playing games, having good food, and taking photographs together with the places we visit. We tourists obviously cannot be satisfied by merely looking though television or computers. Therefore, tourism won't become obsolete for the simple reason that it is far beyond the information given on television or internet.

However, television and worldwide computer connections tend to cause tourism to thrive. They bring us advertisements of remote places, which we have never heard before. We look at them with curiosity and, probably, some of us become interested in those places. We may be attracted by their beautiful scene, moved by their flourishing culture, or astonished by their unique food. Then we decide to read them, to feel them, and taste them, though our tours. We will never have chance to visit such places if their names are not carried in by television or internet. In other words, it is television and internet that increase the number of people visiting a certain place. Moreover, they provide us with information which can make our travel more convenient and comfortable. Our tours can be insured by getting traffic and weather tips as well as hotel conditions both from television and internet. It is so pleasing that we would hardly be driven back by difficulties caused by uncertainty. It is even far more pleasing than we have expected that we would like to visit those wonderful places again. It is reasonable that television and worldwide computer connections can increase the frequency of tourism significantly, for they offer us names of places, ways to get relative information, and finally enable us to have nice memories.

Admittedly, as we are increasingly familiar with many places that we have never visit, we do not have to travel long distances to explore remote places. As a result, traveling for the purpose of getting skin-deep information about these places may become obsolete. Such work can easily be done by local people or by a few experts. But tourism is different, as I have discussed above.

In conclusion, tourism will not be diminished by television and worldwide computer connections, but have a good chance to thrive.

[ Last edited by 夜一 on 2005-8-21 at 19:28 ]

夜一UID: 2130338

我的提纲：
开头：根据题目，提出论点：旅游不会因为题目中的原因变得过时
论证：
1。定义旅游，它不是电视和网络上的一点点视觉效果就能够满足的，所以不会因为它们的作用而变得过时
2。旅游不仅不会变得过时，恰恰相反，会因为电视和网络而变得繁荣
（1）电视和网络让我们得知了我们从来不知道的地方
（2）它们给与我们旅游的方便
（3）这些方便给我们留下好的印象，是二次旅游成为可能
3。承认电视和网络的确是一些探索性质的旅行减少了，但旅游和这些旅行是不同的，这已经在上面讨论过
结尾：得出结论：电视和网络不会使旅游变得过时，相反的，旅游正拥有着一个变得繁荣的机会

sdswr2003UID: 203523

怎么感觉象把issue写成 argument

夜一UID: 2130338

嗯。。开头的问题比较大
这篇题目大概最忌讳的就是写成像argument