Issue154 0606G-kito小组leedgen习作，来拍砖啊

leedgenUID: 160823

154"Both parents and communities must be involved in the local schools. Education is too important to leave solely to a group of professional educators."
Agree
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1. parents can help education
2. communities can help education
3, 归纳

According to a recent research, parents and communities involvement in schools improves students achievements. Professional educators, parents and communities are interwoven in the system of education; therefore, to reach at their potential, students need their parents and the communities to take an active role in the school education.

One the one hand, parents’ role in education are of such importance that they should be involved in the local schools. There are several reasons to show this is the case. Most important of all, parents’ involvement in education can improve children’s academic achievements. Children will do better in school when parents talk often with teachers and become involved in the school. Besides, by participating in the work of professional educators and the local schools, parents can help teachers better understand their children and how they support the education of their children. Better understanding and communication between teachers and parents will eventually help the children. Furthermore, parent-child relationship will be improved to some extent if parents often take part in activities in the local schools. Although it is not always for parents to find time and energy to become involved to coordinate with schedules for school events, parents should make it as possible as they can for their children can feel their care and the position in their parents’ heart. The last but not least reason is that parent’s involvement in schools helps parents develop positive attitudes toward schools and better understanding of the school process. By this means parents can do much good to their children’s education and will not leave the total responsibility to a group of professional educators.

One the other hand, communities can also contribute to the education of children by involving in the local schools. The first conspicuous point is that communities and school can establish school-business partnerships which are apparently a better way than simply financing the schools. By this cooperation school as well as students can apply good ideas and new views to these firms in practices. The second salient issue is that some organizations or people in communities can contribute to the school education along with the professional educators. For instance, social service workers can meet with the school counselors, and medical organizations can provide instruments needed by the school health center. A special group of people, retiree, has so much to contribute to the education. Schools can recruit retirees to volunteer in the education, sharing their experiences and expertise on relevant topics. The third significant reason why communities should be involved in the local schools is that communities and schools are a complete unity and interact on many aspects. That is to say, events in communities will finally influence the local schools and the opposite is also right. In a word, local schools is connected with communities and this tie should not be cut out which is beneficial to the education of children.

In conclusion, both parents and communities involvement in the local schools can contribute much to the education of the children. The more parents and communities are involved in the school education, the more those professional educators can help the children to improve their achievements.

[ Last edited by 11yaoyao on 2005-12-15 at 12:50 ]

leedgenUID: 160823

响应kito，我把详细提纲贴出来

Agree
提纲

1. Parents can help education
    有三个证据：improve children’s academic achievements； parent-child relationship will be improved；有助于家长更好地了解学校并促进教育。
2. Communities can help education（我把communities理解成社区而不是社会society，不知道妥不妥？）
   主要有三点理由：可以发展school-business；学校可以得到外界各层次人员的帮助；学校可以利用校外设施等
3, 最后，重申一下同意issue的观点

我现在觉得最好加上一段写写professional educators的重要性

[ Last edited by leedgen on 2005-12-15 at 12:22 ]

kito9695UID: 209685

OneOn the one hand, parents’ role in education are of such importance that they should be involved in the local schools. There are several reasons to show this is the caseThere are several reasons to show the case. Most important of all, parents’ involvement in education can improve children’s academic achievements. Children will do better in school when parents talk oftenoften talk with teachers and become involved in the school. Besides, by participating in the work of professional educators and the local schools, parents can help teachers better understand their children and how they support the education of their children. Better understanding and communication between teachers and parents will eventually help the children. Furthermore, parent-child relationship will be improved to some extent if parents often take part in activities in the local schools. Although it is not always for parents to find time and energy to become involved to coordinate with schedules for school events, parents should make it as possible as they can, for their children can feel their care and the position in their parents’ heart. The last but not least reasonlast but not least一般都直接用，不用作形容词吧 is that parent’s involvement in schools helps parents develop positive attitudes toward schools and better understanding of the school process. By this means parents can do much good to their children’s education and will not leave the total responsibility to athe group of professional educators.

One the other hand, communities can also contribute to the education of children by involving in the local schools. The first conspicuous point is that communities and school can establish school-business partnerships which are apparently a better way than simply financing the schools. By this cooperation school as well as students can apply good ideas and new views to these firms in practices. The second salient issue is that some organizations or people in communities can contribute to the school education along with the professional educators. For instance, social service workers can meet with the school counselors, and medical organizations can provide instruments needed by the school health center. A special group of people, retiree, has so much to contribute to the education. Schools can recruit retirees to volunteer in the education, sharing their experiences and expertise on relevant topics. The third significant reason why communities should be involved in the local schools is that communities and schools are a complete unity and interact on many aspects. That is to say, events in communities will finally influence the local schools and the opposite is also right. In a word, local schools is connected with communities and this tie should not be cut out which is beneficial to the education of children.

In conclusion, both parents and communities involvement in the local schools can contribute much to the education of the children. The more parents and communities are involved in the school education, the more those professional educators can help the children to improve their achievements.

leedgen写得很好啊，好多句子，用词都值得我学习，句子结构也很清晰。每个段落里的层次也很好，麻烦leedgen 把段内层义也写在提纲里，给大家参考

kito9695UID: 209685

Originally posted by leedgen at 2005-12-15 12:20
响应kito，我把详细提纲贴出来

Agree
提纲

1. Parents can help education
    有三个证据：improve children’s academic achievements； parent-child relationship will be improved；有助于家 ...

好同志！！鼓掌，啪啪啪~~