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[i习作temp] issue41 dganggang (kito) 第一次作业 请前辈组员包含我之前比较忙 [复制链接]

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发表于 2006-1-11 16:06:14 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
41"Such nonmainstream areas of inquiry as astrology, fortune-telling, and psychic and paranormal pursuits play a vital role in society by satisfying human needs that are not addressed by mainstream science."

提纲:基本反对这一提法

存在不意味着应该提倡
有些非主流的迷信会带来很大的危害
尽管如此,我们仍然应该对有些合法的类似活动表示宽容

As Francis Bacon has it," Natural abilities are like natural plants that need pruning by study everyday." Everybody are born like a white and pure paper that will be influenced by our society, transforming into different characters and pursuing a variety of values. Concerning the status of such nonmainstream areas of inquiry as astrology or fortune-telling, they are also some subsistent things which attract certain people. Nonetheless, it should be considered carefully and seriously in defining that they play a vital role in society by satisfying human needs that are not addressed by mainstream science.

First of all, the existence of nonmainstream, including all the activities either negative or positive, has no necessary relation with the fact that we should guarantee their positions in satisfying human needs. People may find peace and enlightenment in taking part in astrology or fortune-telling but it does not mean we should encourage these stuffs or spread them even if they may do good to some people to some extent. There is a wide and insurmountable gap between these nonmainstream areas between religions and mainstream science. We can hold the stance to permit people to join in these activities but we shall never intend to put them replacing some of the functions that should be implemented by science.

On the other hand, such nonmianstream areas of inquiry including paranormal pursuits are often companied with negative effect or false instructions that may do harm to people and our society. For example, several years ago, many ignorant people in China, most of whom are quite normal before, try to worship something called Fa Lun Gong which is created by a normal people who always lost his jobs before this "cause". His preach, always stirring and stimulating people into crazy actions and violent expressions, made numerous people lose their rationality and consciousness and they burned their bodies or did not have food and water for several weeks to show their sacred spirit. We can find a lot of such disasters in the human history which are mainly caused by some poisonous paranormal pursuits that suffused like disease. In giving a sensible definition to all the nomainsteam areas of inquiry, we may confront with chances of the happening of such tragedies again one day.

Last but not the least, although I suggest us be quite prudent in dealing with these pursuits, we should also sustain our clemency in giving these activities a reasonable space and social environment if they keep legal and maintain not dangerous. Everybody has their own rights to choose their individual pursuit as long as they do not hurt other people or impede the order of our society. Just like my supporting not encouraging these nonmainstreams, we should also avoid canceling or forbidding these areas without any evidence or solely based on our prejudice and self-reliance. They are just like the relationship between majority and minority of a society, majority must not try to diminish the minority no matter how different attitudes or pursuits the minority have even if they seem irrational or uncivilized sometimes.

In sum, just like before, the human being have built up a scientific and civilized world in preventing some kind of superstitions to occupy our hearts, we should depend on mainstream science in solving our problems. Furthermore, the former history has warned us that extremely paranormal pursuits always brought unexpected troubles, which means we should limit certain activities to some extent. Nevertheless, we may also contain other people's pursuits if they do nothing wrong or harmful. According to the reasons above, we may draw a conclusion that such mainstream are not supposed to play a vital role in some aspects replacing the mainstream science but they still have rights to carry on in the world.

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发表于 2006-1-11 17:46:24 |只看该作者
疑?
你是kito组的?
去IIT的联系我MSN噢:isabel_0522@hotmail.com
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发表于 2006-1-11 18:26:19 |只看该作者
你不是在呆瓜组练的吗,怎么又想着要回来了?
How to Eat Fried Worms?

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发表于 2006-1-11 18:54:41 |只看该作者
放假了 准备两面操练

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发表于 2006-1-12 10:58:06 |只看该作者
建议还是专心一面吧,写作文、改作文和练提纲任务也很重~还有第13次作业交了吗?
人生太短
出手要更大

旁观者不需理解
  
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自尊心都可以出卖
忘记我也是无坏  
连幸福都输掉醉在长街

依然是我最大  

连梦想洒一地再任人踩 依然笑得爽快

WELCOME TO GRE作文版

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发表于 2006-1-12 19:15:13 |只看该作者
嗯 好的 就在这里写

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发表于 2006-1-12 22:31:42 |只看该作者
没有同门改一改吗?

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发表于 2006-1-13 09:20:14 |只看该作者
等一下我帮你改一下吧,可能是因为洁洁退出了,互改顺序还没调整,呵呵
用心就不会错过...

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发表于 2006-1-13 09:46:32 |只看该作者
As Francis Bacon has it," Natural abilities are like natural plants that need pruning by study everyday." Everybody are [is] born like a white and pure paper that will be influenced by our society, transforming into different characters and pursuing a variety of values. Concerning the status of such nonmainstream areas of inquiry as astrology or fortune-telling, they are also some subsistent things[,] which attract certain people. Nonetheless, it should be considered carefully and seriously in defining that they play a vital role in society by satisfying human needs that are not addressed by mainstream science.

First of all, the existence of nonmainstream, including all the activities either negative or positive, has no necessary relation with the fact that we should guarantee their positions in satisfying human needs. People may find peace and enlightenment in taking part in astrology or fortune-telling[,] but it does not mean we should encourage these stuffs or spread them even if they may do good [well] to some people to some extent. There is a wide and insurmountable gap between these nonmainstream areas between religions and mainstream science[这里怎么有两个between?]. We can hold the stance to permit people to join in these activities but we shall never intend to put them replacing some of the functions that should be implemented by science.

On the other hand, such nonmianstream [nonmainstream] areas of inquiry including paranormal pursuits are often companied with negative effect or false instructions that may do harm to people and our society. For example, several years ago, many ignorant people in China, most of whom are quite normal before, try to worship something called Fa Lun Gong[, 这里是非限定定语从句,要加逗号的吧] which is created by a normal people who always lost his jobs before this "cause". His preach, always stirring and stimulating people into crazy actions and violent expressions, made numerous people lose their rationality and consciousness and they burned their bodies or did not have food and water for several weeks to show their sacred spirit.[嗯,你这个例子表达得不错,我也举了这个例子,但没你表达得好] We can find a lot of such disasters in the human history[,] which are mainly caused by some poisonous paranormal pursuits that suffused like disease. In giving a sensible definition to all the nomainsteam [nonmainstream] areas of inquiry, we may confront with chances of the happening of such tragedies again one day.[最后这句话什么意思?没看懂,汗~~ ]

Last but not the least, although I suggest us be quite prudent in dealing with these pursuits, we should also sustain our clemency in giving these activities a reasonable space and social environment if they keep legal and maintain not dangerous. Everybody has their own rights to choose their individual pursuit as long as they do not hurt other people or impede the order of our society. Just like my supporting not encouraging these nonmainstreams, we should also avoid canceling or forbidding these areas without any evidence or solely based on our prejudice and self-reliance. They are just like the relationship between majority and minority of a society, majority must not try to diminish the minority no matter how different attitudes or pursuits the minority have even if they seem irrational or uncivilized sometimes.

In sum, just like before, the human being have built up a scientific and civilized world in preventing some kind of superstitions to occupy our hearts, we should depend on mainstream science in solving our problems. Furthermore, the former history has warned us that extremely paranormal pursuits always brought unexpected troubles, which means we should limit certain activities to some extent. Nevertheless, we may also contain other people's pursuits if they do nothing wrong or harmful. According to the reasons above, we may draw a conclusion that such mainstream are not supposed to play a vital role in some aspects replacing the mainstream science but they still have rights to carry on in the world.

嗯,dganggang写的很不错,说得很明白,继续加油吧
用心就不会错过...

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发表于 2006-1-13 09:57:23 |只看该作者
洁洁退出了,我可以加入吗?不想再等置顶组队贴的分配了,已经浪费了几天了。

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