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Issue 153
"Students should bring a certain skepticism to whatever they study. They should question what they are taught instead of accepting it passively."
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         1、 the skepticism is always the beginning of a scientific research.
         2、not only does skepticism play a significant role in science research, it is also the motivation of the development of art.
         3、without skepticism people may lose the direction of advancement.
正文：
In such a rapid social and technological development which has led to great changes to our life, it has been widely realized that students should have their own creativity to discover the unknown realm and create more fibulas inventions. Consequently, when some people assert that student should question what they are taught instead of accepting it passively, in my opinion, no truer word has been maintained! Because the skepticism brought to traditional knowledge is the stimulus of new creation.

First of all, the skepticism is always the beginning of a scientific research. Admittedly, each kind of investigation originates from doubt of tradition. The example of Darwin can well illustrate my view. When studying biology, Darwin questioned that why the some species were able to continue living on the earth but others died out. His teacher’s Explanation that maintained the species which lived in the world were determined by the god could not persuade Darwin at all. Having done a broad research and made a thorough analysis, Darwin discovered the evolutionism which reveals the principle that only the species that can adapt to the change of the environment have the ability to go on existing in the world. From the example mentioned above we can find out that it is the skepticism that evokes scientists’ interest to go deeply into their investigation.

Further more, not only does skepticism play a significant role in science research, it is also the motivation of the development of art. Undoubtedly, inspiration is considered as the most important elements in the process of creating an artwork. Meanwhile inspiration often comes from negation of tradition and new understanding of art. We can take the example of Van gogh. As is known, he did not follow the steps of famous artist at that time but pursued his own style. As a result, he founded the impressionism which concentrated on the immediate visual impression produced by a scene or by the use of unmixed primary colors to simulate actual reflected light. Van gogh’s success has proven that skepticism also plays an essential role in artists’ creation.

However, on the other hand, without skepticism people may lose the direction of advancement. For example, if Einstein did not suspect the correctness of classical mechanism built by Newton, he would have no chance to discover the theory of relativity. Similarly, if Van gogh had no opinion of his own understanding and his own style, he would never be such a great artist that is remembered generation by generation. So the importance of skepticism has been showed in the developments of every realm.

All in all, comprehensively taking into account what has been discussed above, we can easily reach the conclusion that skepticism is an indispensable element for students when studying knowledge because each realm needs the creativity which are evoked by the pursuit of new conception and the skepticism of traditional achievements.

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In such a rapid social and technological development which has led to great changes to our life, it has been widely realized that students should have their own creativity to discover the unknown realm and create more fibulas inventions. Consequently, when some people assert that student should question what they are taught instead of accepting it passively, in my opinion, no truer word has been maintained! Because the skepticism brought to traditional knowledge is the stimulus of new creation. (不错)

First of all, the skepticism is always the beginning of a scientific research. Admittedly, each kind of investigation originates from doubt of tradition. The example of Darwin can well illustrate my view. When studying biology, Darwin questioned that why the some species were able to continue living on the earth but others died out. His teacher’s Explanation that maintained the species which lived in the world were determined by the god could not persuade Darwin at all. Having done a broad research and made a thorough analysis, Darwin discovered the evolutionism which reveals the principle that only the species that can adapt to the change of the environment have the ability to go on existing in the world. From the example mentioned above we can find out that it is the skepticism that evokes scientists’ interest to go deeply into their investigation. (有时候一个例子就行了，可是不知道为什么看了这段有种意犹未尽的感觉，可能是语言表达的关系吧，总体来说不错，有说服力)

Further more, not only does skepticism play a significant role in science research, it is also the motivation of the development of art. Undoubtedly, inspiration is considered as the most important elements in the process of creating an artwork. Meanwhile inspiration often comes from negation of tradition and new understanding of art. We can take the example of Van gogh. As is known, he did not follow the steps of famous artist at that time but pursued his own style. As a result, he founded the impressionism which concentrated on the immediate visual impression produced by a scene or by the use of unmixed primary colors to simulate actual reflected light. Van gogh’s success has proven that skepticism also plays an essential role in artists’ creation. (我想知道为什么意犹未尽了，看了这段也有这感觉，因为你是在分方面说明怀疑的重要性，一般来说用这种格式作者都会举几个例子的)

However, on the other hand, (However,和 on the other hand写一个就行了，最好写on the other hand)without skepticism people may lose the direction of advancement. For example, if Einstein did not suspect the correctness of classical mechanism built by Newton, he would have no chance to discover the theory of relativity. Similarly, if Van gogh had no opinion of his own understanding and his own style, he would never be such a great artist that is remembered generation by generation. So the importance of skepticism has been showed in the developments of every realm. (这段的主题是没有怀疑人们就不会进步，这好像是前两段都在说明的问题吧，只是前两段从不同的具体方面出发，所以为了整篇文章的布局我觉得你最好把这段换成再具体举一个方向说怀疑起了很大作用较好)

All in all, comprehensively taking into account what has been discussed above, we can easily reach the conclusion that skepticism is an indispensable element for students when studying knowledge because each realm needs the creativity which are evoked by the pursuit of new conception and the skepticism of traditional achievements.

语言我没说什么，因为我觉得不错，要加油的就是思路了，以后我要是看你的文章也就不再多说你语言的好话了。

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