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[i习作temp] Issue 11 kito组leedgen习作,交晚了,留下互拍链接哟  关闭 [复制链接]

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11"All nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems."
翻译:所有的国家应共同建立一所全球性大学,用来培养学生们解决世界的最顽固的社会问题。
提纲: 反对
1.全球性大学教育学生,更注重于全球化的某些问题,譬如毒品,环境等问题,在这一点上应该是有帮助的。
2.但是,建立一所全球性大学是不现实的,这需要各国家的强力支持,必须消除各种矛盾,克服文化差异等,总之要达到真正公正地解决世界社会问题困难重重。
3.另外,建立一所全球性大学也是没有必要的,随着网络的普遍应用,很多学者可以在因特网平台上互相交流,致力于世界社会问题。

I basically disagree with the statement that all nations should contribute to establish a global university for the purpose of solving the world’s persistent social problems. A variety of risks and difficulties stand right in the way to success in establishing a global university.

Admittedly, I concede the development of a global university is sure to help solving some pressing social problems, like drug dealing, global warming and forest clearing. Solving these issues requires global cooperations. By means of setting up a global university, more students will be educated to observe those social problems from a top and whole view, which is definitely helpful to figure out the whole solutions for global issues. Thus, in a sense establishing a global university will contribute to find solutions for the world’s social problems while it will be confronted with various risks and difficulties from the countries participated.

In the one hand, it is not practical to establish a global university for the faculty and students come from diverse cultural background, and bring wide educational perspectives to social problems. As we know, people from different nations holds unlike opinions to those social problems and various faiths also influence their solutions to certain problems. All these differences would impede communication among students and faculty. Furthermore, every nation has its own special situation regarding those pressing social problems and they all want their own problems be fixed first. How should the global university treat with this specialty? Which problem should be paid the most attention and be given the resources? Which area of academic research are the most worthwhile? In short, participant countries have to conquer myriads of such vital impediments, including administrating and political ones.

In the other hand, it is unnecessary to founding a global university in the current society with advanced science and technology. All scientists and other people who are engaged in solving the global social problems can use the internet as a powerful platform to discuss and make out solutions for social problems. By funding a great amount of money on a global university, people may be not sure to make a great effort in solving urgent social problems. If this is the case, establishing a global university is but a waste of money and energy, and contributes little in solving various problems. Therefore, people can use the internet platform to figure out the proper solutions for current global issues rather than waste much money in setting up a global university.

On balance, considering the potential economical and political risks and difficulties in establishing an impartial global university, it is neither impractical nor necessary to build such a university.

大家都开始限时了,我落后了好多,要加紧写作了
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发表于 2006-1-25 00:19:24 |只看该作者
I basically disagree with the statement that all nations should contribute to establish a global university for the purpose of solving the world’s persistent social problems. A variety of risks and difficulties stand right in the way to success in establishing a global university.

Admittedly, I concede the development of a global university is sure to help solving(solve) some pressing social problems, like drug dealing, global warming and forest clearing. Solving these issues requires global cooperations. By means of setting up a global university, more students will be educated to observe those social problems from a top and whole view, which is definitely helpful to figure out the whole solutions for global issues. Thus, in a sense establishing a global university will contribute to find solutions for the world’s social problems while it will be confronted with various risks and difficulties from the countries participated.(while之后的句子放在这段中不太合适,因为这段你主要是在支持建立全球化大学的确是有助于解决一些社会问题的,我认为因该把while 之后的内容挪到下一段的开头去)
In the one hand(on the one hand), it is not practical to establish a global university for the faculty and students come from diverse cultural background, and bring wide educational perspectives to social problems. As we know, people from different nations holds unlike opinions to those social problems and various faiths also influence their solutions to certain problems. All these differences would impede communication among students and faculty. Furthermore, every nation has its own special situation regarding those pressing social problems and they all want their own problems be fixed first. How should the global university treat with this specialty? Which problem should be paid the most attention and be given the resources? Which area of academic research are the most worthwhile? In short, participant countries have to conquer myriads of such vital impediments, including administrating and political ones.
(这段写得很有层次,首先在这样的大学中,人们的文化背景不同,信仰不同,这些因素很可能阻碍教授与学生之间的交流沟通;其次,各国利益不同,并且都希望自己的问题先被解决,全球性大学左右为难,从而造成低效率。赞!)
In the other hand(on the other hand), it is unnecessary to founding(found up) a global university in the current society with advanced science and technology. All scientists and other people who are engaged in solving the global social problems can use the internet as a powerful platform to discuss and make out solutions for social problems. By funding a great amount of money on a global university, people may be not sure to make a great effort in solving urgent social problems. If this is the case, establishing a global university is but a waste of money and energy, and contributes little in solving (to solve)various problems. Therefore, people can use the internet platform to figure out the proper solutions for current global issues rather than waste much money in setting up a global university.(举了internet的例子,很好,学习中。。。)
On balance, considering the potential economical and political risks and difficulties in establishing an impartial global university, it is neither impractical nor necessary to build such a university.

Issue 总体来看写得挺好的,语法应该注意一下,这样就好了,加油哦。
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很有创意!

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